Goudao Starts with the Title

After reading Chapter 23, I really couldn't bear it anymore. Being cautious is awesome. Where exactly is caution reflected? There must also be a goal to accomplish. I want to bring peace to the world of immortality! Also help others. Don't you understand your subject matter? He obviously wanted to survive, but the result was really disappointing. If I knew how to give a review, it would be one star. What a disappointment! The subject matter and content are basically inconsistent.

The idea is good, but the writing is too green.

There will be more and more titles and it will be difficult to remember them. There should be a synthesis function, where two white titles can be combined into a blue title or something like that.

Whose family is targeted every day?

This villain is incomprehensible. Those in charge are all paid commissions. If they grow well, it will definitely be good for him.

Laughing, the 3% probability of a junior poop shoveler does not mean that 3 will awaken after feeding 100 animals, but it means that each feeding has a 3% probability of triggering independently. This description I bet the author has not graduated from high school Just subscribe, the probability will be more than ten in the later period. In more than 20 years, it has been triggered once by a small fortune, and it has not been triggered. Who did you learn this probability thing from?

My review took 20 minutes to disgust myself

In the whole sect, only the protagonist's 20 acres of land can grow food, so the people in charge have to do everything possible to drive away the protagonist.

Is there a bug in this one? It says to use it on the same day, but it also says it lasts for more than ten days.

It is recommended to dig deep into the use of titles and write down various tricks of Lao Liu instead of recommending titles. Dig into a few titles so that readers won't forget them after reading them, and dig into usages that readers can't think of. Readers will find them interesting, memorable, and easy to follow. There are too many titles, and readers will not be able to remember them, so they will not be impressed and will easily stop reading.

The protagonists have all become disciples of a sect, and they have to go to the store in the market to buy the exercises. The sect doesn't have the exercises?

Isn't it strange that you can't obtain spiritual energy without spiritual stones and rice, and you can't practice it?

The only poison of being a cultivator is being targeted all the time. Because you want to be a cultivator, you won't reveal any of your strength, so you are always treated like a pig and killed whenever you want.

This sect values ​​spiritual farmers too much. Normally, sects use force as king and value farmers more than modern society. What does it mean to enter the inner sect? It is equivalent to promoting you to an international foreign language university as a graduate student if you are good at farming.

The protagonist has changed from a "dog" to a "dog" after practicing the art of creation. Who doesn't have a backing? It depends on the owner when beating a dog. The protagonists have all become stray dogs. It doesn't matter if you don't practice the "Craft of Creation"!

The first 5 chapters and 3 chapters are all about the fight with the matchmaker. I feel like this title is counterproductive. The obvious effect is to reduce the sense of presence, but the hidden effect is to increase the trouble by a hundred times.

Make a suggestion There are gains and losses The protagonist must have gains and losses when doing things, so as to mobilize the enthusiasm of readers. For example, this time to eliminate evil spirits, the pig's trotters lost various talismans, but because the writing was too brief, it seemed that the pig's trotters had lost nothing. This is not good, and it does not fit the image of a low-level monk. Another bonus is that you must get something after defeating monsters, because only in this way can Pig's Foot defeat monsters and upgrade the journey to continue. Otherwise, after each battle, Pig's Foot loses the magic weapon talisman and cannot make up for it. Otherwise, Pig's Foot will die of poverty after a few times, and how can he fight monsters and upgrade. This paragraph has both pros and cons and fails to catch the reader's eyes.

The idea is good, but what the hell is this writing? It looks awkward and depressing. A book friend's evaluation is very accurate: Be careful about whether you are happy or not!

Either up or down, either wear it all, or don't wear it at all. If you don't wear it, you will still be disabled

It turned out to be a braised rabbit head, and some descriptions were too much. Once the title of Sex is Empty came out, it was no longer interesting to visit the chicken factory. A book friend still thinks you can't criticize? Then why open a comment section? Directly set a fan value of 1,000 to be able to comment, and delete and ban all those who write something problematic.

Prices have collapsed, and people are extremely poor. Then the protagonist is extremely powerful and earns more than 7,000 spirit stones. In the end, it is enough for a flying sword in the Qi training period. He also said that he can only buy an above-average level one.

After reading Chapter 32, although the three regulations introduced may seem fine at first glance, in fact they are too good for the low-level spiritual farmers and ignore the interests of the people in charge. This is obviously unreasonable. First, the second article stipulates that the stewards must provide help to the spiritual farmers with problems, otherwise they will be impeached. This rule is not wrong at first glance, but in fact it is too absolute, because the first article states that the spiritual farmers are randomly drawn. Is it possible that some of the spiritual farmers assigned to the stewards are people with average or even dull talents? I think this is possible, and some spiritual farmers feel that now that there are stewards to share the workload, they will definitely farm according to their upper limit. In this case, there must be many problems, and these stewards have no time to practice every day, and they are all helping spiritual farmers. Don't you think it's very unfair to these unlucky stewards? The third point is also true. If these stewards are unlucky and assigned to poor spiritual farmers, wouldn't they be unable to be promoted in their lifetime? So if it is reasonable, an elimination system should be added or other channels for promotion should be given to managers. One of them must be used to ensure the interests of managers, so that orderly and reasonable development can be achieved. (Some people may say that spiritual farmers will be eliminated if their production is reduced to less than 500. This will not harm the interests of these stewards, but you must also consider that there are many people who may only be able to grow between 500 and 700, especially those with dull talents. They may only be able to grow these numbers throughout their lives no matter how they are taught. These people will not be eliminated, but according to the conditions for promotion of stewards, their production is also reduced, which will also prevent the steward from being promoted.)

I have tried hard to see if you gave me the whole spiritual rice. It only satisfies my stomach and cannot replenish the energy and blood needed to practice the Golden Steel Art.

Updates are too slow, everything else is pretty good

The battle between immortals and demons and the battle between Dao and Fruit were passed over directly. It was too fucking pointless. ٩(๑`н´๑)۶

Let's talk about the evaluation. My opinion of the protagonist is that it is a pretty standard protagonist, including the protagonist's good luck, the protagonist's innocence, and the protagonist's calamitous physique. The understanding of the protagonist is basically included.

This book is really good. I see a lot of people blaming it for management problems, but that's not necessary. It's best not to be too picky when reading a book, as it's easy to run out of books to read. Overall, this book is obviously very good, and the title is also good. It's interesting and you can read it.

What the hell is it to go to a brothel to practice martial arts every day? This little secret has been revealed to everyone. Emptiness is color and I am speechless

This is over, too soon

At this point, I read a book and saw a monthly ticket... Ahem, I will give it to you.