New York Spy

The author's writing style is indeed very good (I have only read Chapter 4, so I don't know if there is a character arc) If it weren't for some common-sense mistakes about the United States in the background, I would definitely want to continue reading. But I know that if I don't stop now, I will give up the book at a certain point later, and the long-term pain will be worse than the short-term pain. Of course, this is also a common problem among all Qidian's novels set in the United States. So far, I have not seen any author who understands American culture very well or has settled in the United States. I lived in NYC for half a year and passed by.

It's very good, but I read the author's other works and found that the author pays too much attention to details, especially facial expressions and other characterizations. It feels a bit overwhelming.

Qiqi, please, let's start the next book with Meiyu, the story of the band. I really feel the vivid people in your writing. The director's writing for the last book really didn't show off your writing style. Your writing style was too delicate. I followed your book from high school to college, and now I have graduated from college and started working immediately. The books I followed earlier were all pirated books that didn't cost much. I hope that the next book, Meiyu, can help you make up the money.

If the New York Police Department doesn't want to take the serial murder case, it can blame it on the FBI. There is no need to deliberately avoid it. This is a major mistake. Once it comes out, the election will be a mess.

Come on, author, I love detective stories, including Mission: Impossible, The Bourne Supremacy, John Wick, Fast and Furious, etc.! Suicide Squad! Can it be added and connected in series? ! ?

It was originally about great potential, but I wrote too many adjectives and descriptions, which bored the readers, and the progress was too slow.

? ? ? Why aren't you popular? ? ?

Has no one ever said that your book is too full of nonsense? Too gorgeous words will only make it difficult for people to get involved. This is a novel, not a published book. If you improve it, there will definitely not be so few readers. Author, your writing is still good

There are so many adjectives and adverbs that you don't even need so many descriptions when writing prose. Although there is no water on the shelves, even if you set up a tent to serve porridge, it should not be too thin.

If you look at the beginning of a good online article, you can tell whether the work is related to me. Good luck, author!

There is nothing to say about the writing style of the boss, but at present, the protagonist is not well developed enough, and it is difficult to impress people. Although the author has tried his best to add the label that the protagonist loves to eat and laugh, but it feels a bit forced. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is a detective, but the collision with the plot or the case is not strong enough. It can be said that the case comes first and then the image of the protagonist, and the personality and character of the protagonist become what the case needs. This is my feeling, I wish your work will take off!

The time in the plot is around Halloween... Is it Neta's "Long Halloween"? It is indeed a masterpiece of detective work (I look forward to the revelation that the main character's younger brother is the culprit)

Personally, I felt that it was very confusing when writing the fourteenth game, and it felt like it had nothing to do with the main plot.

Why is the author LV5 so unpopular😅😅

Maybe the case itself is not attractive, but the characters are well created, making people watch along with the characters.

Detailed descriptions are an advantage, but too many details are a bit too much. There are also too many unnecessary popular sciences, and it's very tiring to read them if you can't remember them.

Damn, the beginning of this novel gave me goosebumps, awesome

The first entertainment article in my life was the author's Victor Hugo, and I gradually fell in love with this genre. I have read the author's previous books. My personal thoughts are actually similar to those in the book reviews. I won't go into details here. In fact, I am personally more optimistic about the author's writing of this kind of book. It should be a little less literary and more plotted, and it should develop well.

I don't really like it.                                                                                                                                                                         but the chapters in the hotel gave me a very bad feeling. Although there are some parts that I like very much, such as the part about finding the little boy, I feel that it is very well written, but the overall feeling is that it is very confusing and intellectually depressing.        ，，，，， First of all, the police basically don't do anything, and they get squeezed out of whatever they want to do. For the latter point, it doesn't matter if you say it's in China. After all, it's really easy to become like this when you are dedicated to serving the people. But who dares to do this in the United States? Without a strong backing behind them, everyone would have been gone a long time ago. There is also Erics who comes out of nowhere and wants to be a detective. He has a lot of pretense skills, but his effect is basically useless. Most of the things he can think of can be thought of by others. I don't know if he came out to avoid the protagonist's embarrassment. Then there is this hotel manager, who is so ignorant that I want to arrest him as a criminal because of all kinds of mistakes. Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. To be honest, the ability to quickly capture and judge by causing changes in other people's expressions through words is really well written (although to be honest, this is not suitable for writing because it is difficult to imagine, but it feels really good to write it), and the protagonist also has a high ability to analyze and judge, but not all cases should do this. To put it bluntly, the hotel murder case means that someone may have died, but the hotel manager did not allow the investigation. Later, it was proved that someone did die, but the hotel manager still did not allow the investigation (understand that Why do I want to arrest this hotel manager? A dog can solve the case anywhere.) If the police were tougher and arrested this manager as an accomplice, and no one would stop him, he would at least be able to continue the investigation. Or if they disgusted the hotel and went outside to talk about the case, a mere suspicion would be enough to force the hotel to completely give up the obstruction, or directly investigate the place where these women have been. It would be difficult for the cleaning staff with little education and immigrants to hide things. Having said that, I just want to ask, were there no cameras at that time? A hotel like this where a bunch of high-ranking officials live doesn't even have a camera? It's 2012. I don't want to put it in the bedroom and directly take pictures of the crime. I at least want to see who passes by this house. Someone disappeared halfway, and why are these women moving the bodies in various ways without being discovered. Without the protagonist's ability to judge expressions, would this case have ended like this? The police inside really felt like they were ready to stop.

I just read Chapter 174, and I would like to give the author some advice. The protagonist is a private detective, and his younger brother is an assistant prosecutor. Although he is a minor figure, he still has a voice! The most feasible and appropriate way for the NYPD to grab credit is to communicate with the protagonist that explicit price tags and implicit threats are the correct solution. How can it be possible to just grab it? ? ? ? ? If a small police officer within his own system takes control at will, people outside the system, especially young people, will be a bombshell! ! ! Even if you take a step back and say that you can suppress a lot of things now with your hands and eyes, but now is the election time, if you are taken advantage of by your opponent, you will be in catastrophe! ! ! You police chief can't handle it! ! ! ! People who play politics are very dirty, but they are definitely human beings, and they will not look too ugly! ! ! This case seems to involve too many small things. Not to mention the political donation issues mentioned in the article, skin color, race, security issues, police efficiency, and institutional issues are all big issues. Think about the election slogans in the United States, don't you think it's appropriate? What does the public value most? Any elector can use this to make a fuss about it! ! ! But then again, it is precisely because it is too complicated that it may lead to fire, so some games will be carried out in secret, and there will be many threats, tests, and transactions, but it is impossible to be rough, do not follow the rules, and no one can handle it if caught! ! ! !

In my next book, I think I can write a sequel to Superstar. The ending of the story is really disappointing.

It's good to read, but don't be in a hurry while reading. If you rush to solve the suspense, you won't be able to see the vivid world in the book (it reminded me of a slow-burning animation "Ungo Karma").

The writing is great. I read it from the beginning and kept reading. I thought I was catching up on the latest serialized chapter tonight, but I actually finished it and I still have more to say 😢

Keep it up! Actually raised to death? Speechless, only raised it for a month? It's over!

Why do foreign countries just hang out in Hollywood? Why don't they copy foreign songs and become singers? I haven't seen them in so many years.

Well, I always felt that I had seen it somewhere, but then I realized it. The super-sense detective, it turns out to be this [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅]

I like the author's works very much, but I feel that the protagonists in each book have similar personalities. They are all all-round male protagonists who are neither humble nor arrogant and can see through the world.

The details are good, but as a web text, it's too blank and boring.

Well written. Recommended new book of the same type "I Become a Detective in Southeast Asia"

Listening to your novels gives me a very exaggerated feeling