Love Starts from the Island

1. Preface I first read it for free on Qidian. Com and was ready to make a decision. After some hesitation, I decided to go to the website and read a few chapters to give it a try. Then I decided that it was not suitable for me, so I decided to abandon the book and share my feelings here. If you think what I said is wrong, just scold me. When scolding, remember to explain the reason. Don't stack up. 2. The problem of the male protagonist What makes me feel most uncomfortable in this book is the creation of the male protagonist. It is such a failure. The male protagonist himself has no bright spots except that he can say a few dirty words. The heroines' affection for him is nothing more than that he is handsome, well-educated or gentle, but he is so emotionally heavy that he commits suicide and runs from Tokyo to the island, hoping to be with the male protagonist. The main escape from the island is mismatched, or too many characters with built-in likability are a detriment to the love plot. Generally, only one such character is enough, but this book is full of characters. The feeling of looking at these characters is as angry as Huang Mao asking his father-in-law if the ghost fire is safe downstairs. Wugen's incomprehensible emotions destroy the logic of the plot. I think a good male protagonist should make readers admire him and think that he is worthy of the female protagonist, so that they can read comfortably, instead of writing about a real person, with female lickers one after another, making people think that the male protagonist is just a idiot who acts recklessly based on his preference. 3. Plot issues Let's talk about the plot. Looking at Qingmei's plot so far, I think it is just a story about a fool dragging his girl to lick the dog. There is no difference between this Qingmei and Qingmei's mother, but it highlights a moral kidnapping. It's such a good interaction. Speaking of the image of the male protagonist so far, if you haven't felt it yet, then swap the genders of the four male and female protagonists in this book. What kind of novel do you think this is? Women's videos don't write like this anymore! 4. Core As for the core, this book focuses on a fragmented, heavy reality and romantic comedy. What the hell is this? The male protagonist can solve everything with one face and one fist, right? I am satisfied with each of these two parts, but the way they are combined is disgusting. The bicycle part can be called a deus ex machina. It highlights a simple and crude character, who recovers his childhood sweetheart and then turns it into a romantic comedy. He uses the opportunity given by one woman to please the other, right? As for the "villain" character, I think the character is well created, even better than the male protagonist. The male protagonist's sister has no plot, so how can readers empathize with her? The "villains" each have their own motivations and stories, but the protagonist's process of "overcoming" them is simple and crude, that is, violence. It's that simple. The mayor is right, he is "a guy who only uses violence to solve problems." The author also thinks the same about the plot. 5. About the crow and summary I also suggest not to mention the crow again. Toru Watanabe's portrayal is still good and has weight, but the plot is copied too much. Kujo and Rin also have a love process instead of directly reaching the full favorability level. To be honest, is a love novel without a process still called a love novel? In general, the author wants both seriousness and comedy, and the result is that both sides are not pleased. 6. What I want to say to the author To be honest, I still like the author's writing style, but this is like a monkfish with a light on. I am attracted by the writing style and theme, and then I am bitten to death by you. I will read your new book now and hope to see your progress.

It's been a long time since I've seen a Nikkei-ryu online article that's so comfortable to read. The writing style doesn't look like a newcomer's, and it even makes me feel like I'm reading traditional literature? The characters' dialogues are very natural and smooth, the characters' inner thoughts and daily life are very delicately portrayed, and the characters' images are also well established. This article is about a man who went to Tokyo after losing his loved ones in the earthquake and returned to his hometown of Chitori Island to fall in love with a beautiful girl. The author said that it is a romantic comedy. However, the early description of the people of Chitori Island after the disaster did not look like a comedy. The atmosphere was very depressing. It felt that it might change to a less comedy direction at any time. However, the author said that if it is a comedy, then it is a comedy. In terms of emotional lines, there are currently three heroines in this book: The chick of Zhitori Island, the "Queen of Zhitori Island" who is the spiritual sustenance of the people on the island after the disaster. The "Queen" is the most beautiful girl on the island. It is said that she has the ability of a god to quell the disaster The male protagonist's childhood sweetheart, a girl from the vitality sports department, is currently the most described heroine. Most of the emotional lines in the early stage were based on her, and now the plot about her is very explosive. . . There are too many spoilers to be told The eldest lady in Tokyo is the one who stood in front of the male protagonist when he was studying in Tokyo. After the male protagonist returns to the island, he wants to transfer to Zhitori Island. She is not the traditional tsundere eldest lady. She has the arrogance of a eldest lady but her personality is not awkward and she is a very simple girl The current main line of the plot is all around the "disaster". Whether it is the mysterious queen, the male protagonist's heart knot, the almost demonic islanders and the inner feelings of his childhood sweethearts, they are all closely connected with the disasters of several years, so some places in the early stage may seem a bit depressing, but it is precisely the disease caused by this disaster that can reflect the mutual redemption between the male and female protagonists As for the update, the book will be on the shelves soon, and a big boss has signed up for the Silver League, so he probably won't be able to cut it. Of course, more readers are needed to ensure the author's enthusiasm Overall, it is a very good novel. Readers who like Niku Ryu can take a look at it. Finally, I hope the first order result will be outstanding I copied and pasted it from my book recommendation post, and I will use it as a book review if I am lazy

Gl feels very fresh and literary. The described scenery and beauty are suitable for calming down and reading slowly. It would be great if there is a published paper book. I feel that reading ten lines through the screen has tarnished the book 😭. The writing style is very good. If it had more depth, it would become a literary work in bookstores 🙂

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} "The Hatchling Girl and I on Chitori Island" Riqing, Love, Folklore, Disaster Article Maybe it's because I just finished reading "Suzuya's Journey" recently, and I feel that the topics of the two are somewhat similar, but the content of this book is too little, so it is better to focus more on the emotional line. Title of the book: "Me and the Doll Girl of Zhitori Island" Author: Yu Goose Novel elements: light novel, daily love Status of the work: serialized On the emotional line, one is the childhood green plum (Chaokong Shaking Apricot), and the other is the most beautiful "Queen" in the legend of the island (Jinghai Shenyue). Qingmei is a typical adolescent girl. Every move and every smile is full of youthful vigor, but she is shy to face feelings. The other is Tianxiang, who looks stunning. She is bold and dares to express her feelings, but she is limited by the traditions of the island. The male protagonist has his own emotional fluctuations towards the two female protagonists, so there is a high probability that this book will have two female protagonists. Then on the line of disaster, the male protagonist experienced an earthquake, lost his only relative, his sister, and finally left his hometown. The story later also used the "Queen" as a symbol of suppressing the disaster. When something goes wrong with the "Queen", it can also trigger a local natural disaster. It has some similarities with the folklorist disaster in the "Zero" series, and these are two of the more outstanding points. All in all, the current framework of this book is very large, but the corresponding content is not very much. I look forward to the author's subsequent arrangements.

No matter how difficult the process is, please believe that in my eyes this is a good story, and please give time to all the characters in the book. I looked around at the same time. Currently, there is no book with the same theme in Qidian Riqing. It is the only one with a very small audience. It is a difficult challenge for me. I hope everyone can read it carefully. I hope you can give me all your support. Your support is the key to how far this book can go.

This book will be slow to gain popularity, and the main tone of the book is a little different from other books, but I still hope you can help me read it. This is really important to me. (I am really a little writer with poor grades. The waistcoat is not important at all. Just assume that I am a novice. Thank you everyone.)

There has been a shortage of books recently, so I would like to recommend some books to everyone, okay? Becoming the Reiwa Tea Saint in Tokyo, my love style is a bit abnormal, my rebirth started from an unsuccessful breakup, (Madam, please calm down), invading the human world, our secret base, the green plum quartet in the snow country, (when the cherry blossoms fall, there will be beautiful girls confessing their love), no one understands monsters better than me, monsters The girl picks up the flavor, love begins on the island, the Asian girl completes the manual, I was trained by the childhood maid to become a love master, (Girl, let me qualify), looking for the lost ship girl, Tokyo survival game, the evil female senior sister haunts me, I can't study with the eldest lady, The Red Mansion is overwhelming, what bad thoughts can a girl have?

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The beginning of the story is quite good, and it is considered a good work until the plot breaks out in the early stage. However, the male protagonist is really not a human being. The more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. How can several girls fall in love with the male protagonist with such a character? To say that he is indecisive is a compliment. Qingmei was hung up until she died. If I had to do it again, I thought she would wake up, but she continued to hang up. Yao Ai treats the male protagonist like this and he also hangs on her, but it turns out that he fell in love with Yao Ai when he broke the door. Then you have hung a hammer for so long. You will be more confident if you are favored, right? You can stay on this shabby island for the rest of your life to accompany your queen.

Wenqing can do it, but if wenqing gets sick, he will die 😒

After reading a hundred chapters, don't be too disgusted. You don't need the protagonist to be a perfect person. At least he is a human being.

I updated the chapters I saved overnight and will talk about my favorite Kurosawa Rei. She is undoubtedly the most dazzling and heart-wrenching girl in this book. Lianai is really so cute that it makes people feel bad. She will not seek comfort like Yaoxing, saying that she only has a male protagonist, but is arrogant, kind and simple, with a strong personal will. And because of this, Jiang Yuan will never feel sorry for her as he feels for Yaoxing. In the latest chapter, the male protagonist The protagonist realizes his love with Lian Ai and wants to save it. However, Lian Ai's character will not indulge Jiang Yuan, so she now chooses to give up Jiang Yuan. However, when she leaves at the station, she is full of love. She hopes that the male protagonist can turn into the image of her love and pursue her in the future. But why does love fly like a moth to the flame that burns itself again and again? In fact, Jiang Yuan was not familiar with Lian Ai at the beginning. In addition, a series of incidents occurred on Zhitiao Island and old friends. Jiang Yuan needed to accept and resolve a large amount of information and important life decisions within two or three months. Because of his various unfamiliarity and immaturity, coupled with his overly emotional and superior Due to his indecisive character, the ambiguity between him and Lian'ai could not be resolved quickly. He was always hesitant, had no growth or experience, and did not understand the expectations and determination behind Lian'ai's coming to Zhitiao Island, which caused Lian'ai to lose confidence. When Jiang Yuan finally realized that he could not run to Tokyo without her. Although she has a loving personality, she will never agree to him again, but she is still looking forward to him in her heart, so she kept calling Jiang Yuan's name at the station (damn it, I cried when I saw it)

A little opinion, I have read this book from beginning to end, and I don't intend to tell the author how to write it, but I hope that the protagonist can change, whether in the end or in the middle, at least be able to afford the love of several heroines

No, what is the male protagonist's personal charm? Just a vase? It's really a bit outrageous

The anger is vented here. The protagonist only speaks half a sentence. The mayor is an indirect murderer. Afterward, he begs Baiyuan for investment like a ghost. The most important thing is that these policemen obeyed their masters like dogs and went to arrest the protagonist. Then the mayor did nothing afterwards (I didn't see what happened to him). By now, the mayor was disgusting, and then everyone pretended that nothing happened. ps: Why has no one mentioned this point? Has anyone deleted the book review?

The second half of this book has exceeded my sense of immersion. It is too confusing, incomprehensible, and complicated. I feel that the author is starting to enjoy himself, and his worldview and values ​​​​are becoming more and more skewed. Seeing my mother out at night later makes me feel more and more uncomfortable. Maybe it is because I can't appreciate it anymore. I obviously liked this book at first. Since I wrote about the death of Chao Kong and came back to life, I have become more and more incomprehensible. I am getting further and further away from the "comedy" and "youth love" mentioned by the author. I really can't understand it anymore. I'm leaving now. Goodbye...

Let me make a simple review, which can serve as a reference for book friends who read it. Ri Qing, love, as the author said, starting point Ri Qingli, this subject matter is currently the only book, the audience is very small, writing this kind of Ri Qing in the starting point requires a lot of courage, a little bit of the feeling of summer reappearance. (Many big guys are recommending this book. Which one is the best?) This book gives people a wonderful feeling. The writing style is gentle and bright, the words are touching, and the pictures are particularly strong. It really feels like watching a TV series. To give a simple metaphor, after reading a few chapters and then looking back at other romance novels, you can feel the obvious visual gap. Yes, it is a visual gap. This book is so subtle that you can show the character's facial changes according to the plot in your mind. The character creation is extremely delicate, and you can even imagine the general environment around you. It is really comfortable to read. Just like washing your feet, the female technician will help you massage your smelly feet carefully. A set of services is clearly arranged for you, but other books do not. She will put the bucket at your feet and let you wash it by yourself. I won't reveal the story. I think this book is the same as the original novel. It would be too disappointing to tell the unfinished story to people who haven't read it. It's better to taste it yourself. My evaluation is that it is extremely smooth. Finally, come on, author, if you write this book well, the results will definitely be good.

I like the female protagonist, but the male protagonist's character is too bad

The titles of the previous books were so good and so weird, but the titles of the current books may be more attractive to readers?

I've read a hundred chapters, and I kind of regret reading this novel. The male protagonist makes me extremely disgusted.

I couldn't stand it and gave up after reading Chapter 90. The beginning of this book really caught my attention. It was very enjoyable and I felt like I was reading a second chapter. The visuals are so strong. But after writing about Qingmei's death and crossing the timeline, I had a very strange feeling, as if this book was a galgame, with common threads in front of it. Later, you can switch to a single line, and you can choose Qingmei, Miss and Queen, but the problem is that the single lines are still mixed together! ! There is a strong sense of fragmentation. The front leg is secretly in love with Qingmei, the back leg is heart-beating for the eldest lady, and then the queen is obsessed with it. I 🤔🤔🤔, not a buddy, this is a novel, not a galgame. The main reason is that the favorability is too high at the beginning. There is no daily warming up process at all, so it is very abrupt. The two people have full favorability at the beginning, and Qingmei feels that the shaping is really good. It gives me the feeling that the male protagonist is a pure scumbag and is hanging on others.

I was originally recommended by a friend because he said it was very similar to Young Abyss. The description of the atmosphere on the island before the queen used her ability really made people feel depressed and dull, as if they were overwhelmed by too many unspeakable past events. But after the Queen used her powers and joined Kurosawa, the feeling that everyone was hiding their worries was largely reduced. It's not that I didn't like the love scene. I also have to say that the author deeply understood the essence of the Nikkei male protagonist - pretending to be confused. However, if it were placed in the Tokyo metropolitan area, it might be appropriate, but in a place like Chitori Island where sad things are buried, it always feels that it is not appropriate to intersperse such a plot. Finally, there is the usual evaluation of Niqing's protagonists. He pretends to be confused. When it comes to emotional issues, he does not talk about the three views and follows the facial features. It can also be said that he does not miss old feelings. He emphasizes that the person I am today is not the person I was yesterday. The promise I made to Qingmei yesterday will not affect my flirting with other girls. In the end, this book gave me the feeling that it was a mixture but did not handle the two well. I hope the author can think carefully and make a choice.

Suddenly I thought of the fires in Hawaii. Will the sea breeze never blow away the thick smoke? Some people are missing, but everyone knows that their bodies have turned into light ashes. When the real estate developers couldn't wait to buy the land, the survivors felt so painful. How come the land that has been inhabited for generations and the persistence of so many ancestors is so fragile. More than a hundred years ago, the Kingdom of Hawaii was integrated into the increasingly powerful United States of America; more than a hundred years later, what should they be praying for? A hegemony that dominates the world is late to its own citizens. Could it be that the American nation under the Stars and Stripes is actually just a collective name for those who put capital on the plate without being picky about food? When soaking in the sea, I can't tell the difference between salty sea water and tears. Ah, the tragedy of Zhitori Island has come to the world with a new look. Are natural disasters the precursor of human tragedy? Those who survive must think about how to continue living. Should he sell the land, take the money, and fly away, never daring to look back at this home where the past was buried; or should he stay on the island with a broken heart, cutting himself again and again, wandering around and trying to rebuild. Hawaii does not have a queen, but this simply means that their tragedy lacks a sufficiently concentrated symbol. To be honest, I don't care much about the emotions of the male and female protagonists on Zhitori Island. Everyone seems to be there just to set off the young doll girl who is the queen. What I like is how the people of Zhitiao Island deal with the past and how they make the dead serve the living. The contradiction between inner emotions and reality is fascinating. What I am happy about is the tragic fate of the queen - where is the limit between collective and individual dedication? A willing victim or a sacrificial lamb? I have my own answers to many questions, but I am still hopelessly eager to understand more answers, even if I ultimately disagree with them and even unscrupulously ridicule the selfishness and cowardice of the protagonists. The fires in Hawaii turned the land white and clean. When will the earthquake on Zhitori Island destroy this illusory island?

Can the author give me more details? I want to be an operations officer. I feel like you have the appearance of an emperor and you have a bright future 🙂

Is it a normal completion? I just started to read books. If it is a half-written story, I don't want to read it.

Wow, I just saw a book recommended by someone else, and I didn't expect it to be updated for 3 days 😢

Why do I feel like watching "Air", calm depression and sadness.

Just forget about the blocked chapter?

The writing is really good, please update more from the author...

Finished? Will there be another book?