The First Immortal of the Left Way

When I saw Chapter 6, there were more than 4 chapters bragging about how awesome I used to be. As a result, Chapter 6 said that there is no body method and you need to go to the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion to learn it. A super master in his previous life, a person in Yuzhen Realm who has never learned body skills? It is understandable that one needs to practice again. Once a skill is mastered, can it still be forgotten? Such an awesome person in his previous life. Don't you have body skills?

Chapter 2: Why not delete it? Compare it to reality and lick the dog. I faint.

Being controlled by hypnosis is too poisonous. What do you think, author? The character of the protagonist is directly destroyed.

It is recommended to write less about the malice towards the protagonist by those who are higher in cultivation than the protagonist. I feel that if it were not for the blessing of the author, the protagonist would be searched for the soul in the next second. This feeling of life and death depends on the enemy's thoughts is not good.

Let's talk about what I think is poisonous First point, isn't the protagonist the boss rebirth style? Then there is no way that you, a big boss, have lived in the cruel world of immortal cultivation for so many years without even having your own magic, right? What happened to this unliving dog? Wouldn't you use it for running away and chasing down enemies? Second point, I think your Immortal Cultivation Sect's influence always has a shadow of the urban martial arts school. It doesn't look like a novel about Immortal Cultivation. It looks like a group of children in school, playing house in groups. The third point, as the protagonist is a powerful reborn, it is okay to accept talented people, but it is no problem for you to choose all the people by yourself, but the death of your brother is too sudden, there is no foreshadowing at all, and the plot is forced to kill The fourth point, if you are a cool writer, I didn't say it before, but can you give me a little more coolness?

You wrote the rebirth flow of the strong into the rebirth flow of the licking dog, which is not at all exciting.

When I see the heroine, I don't need to guess. I already know that there must be a dog-licking plot. After more than ten years of online writing, my level is only here, and it can't be improved. Because most Xianxia are short of resources and then compete for them. In this case, the probability of dog licking is very high.

Dojo inside the snail shell. The temple is small and the wind is strong, and the pond is shallow and there are many bastards.

I found it difficult to accept being controlled and hypnotized by Wang Chengbi. I almost exposed my core secret. It was so poisonous!

The plot is non-toxic and edible. Except that the author seems to like to use rhetoric, why does fantasy writing have a sour taste?

If you really don't know how to write, you can take a look at Gu Zhenren and delete the dark ones. It can be used as your model essay to see how the rebirth of the powerful person unfolds.

Can Qidian have a shielding function so that it doesn't look at rebirth or immortality?

I have no background and no cultivation. I spend all my time pretending to be awesome. I wish I could offend everyone. What kind of rubbish do I write? There are still people writing this kind of stuff now.

The eighth level of Qi training was in trouble, and many elders in the inner sect were full of malice and even murderous intentions. It is recommended to moisturize as soon as possible after building the foundation.

Recommendation: The protagonist of this book travels back to his youth five hundred years ago. During these five hundred years, the protagonist has experienced too much suffering and darkness, which has made the protagonist cold and ruthless, resulting in a somewhat dark style of writing. However, the decisiveness and scheming shown by the protagonist are very suitable for lovers of fantasy novels. The plot constantly reveals the protagonist's past five hundred years and is also very attractive. It is indeed a good fantasy novel. Book title: "The First Immortal of the Left Way" Author: This is disrespectful Status: Serialized (110,000 words) Elements: Classical fairy tales traveling through the past Killing Decisively Recommended reader types: fantasy novels, fairy tale novels, lovers of refreshing novels Highlights of this book: ★The contrast between the protagonist's present and the past Because the protagonist traveled back to himself five hundred years ago, the protagonist's past and present personalities have been greatly changed, and a lot of pen and ink is used to describe the contrast between the protagonist's present and the past. This contrast brings a lot of satisfaction to the readers. ★The protagonist's resourcefulness and layout are eye-catching The protagonist has a very good understanding of many people and things in the past, and coupled with his own resourcefulness, the protagonist's layout is very in-depth and amazing, which also shows that the author has put great effort into writing the strategy and layout. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

(The following only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize me if you don't like it) How can I put it this way, I haven't seen too many poisonous points so far, but I still hope that the author will carefully consider some aspects. I think the shaping of the protagonist's character is the top priority, especially when writing about the subject of cultivating immortals. The protagonists in Internet articles that are out of the circle or in the works of great masters either basically conform to the psychology of most readers, or they have their own style and personality, and the supporting characters are even more flesh-and-blood. Nowadays, the characters in Internet articles are basically made up of a handful, and they are not even as impressive as the supporting characters in some novels... There are no big problems with what the author has written so far, but the beginning is really a bit discouraging, if you don't have the patience to read on... Then there is the part about the protagonist's past life, that is, the memory of the gun intention. I think it is better to break through myself and achieve a kind of rebirth and nirvana in the true sense, and give up the half-baked ink of the previous life. Dear, although it would be easier to practice again based on the memory of the previous life (I am just guessing, if the author has other foreshadowing, just think it is in vain) Finally, I hope the author can maintain the rhythm, and it would be better if he can write more hahaha, I am still very optimistic about this novel, come on!

I've read more than 100 chapters and I'm still practicing Qi. Damn you, uncle.

I died of a poisonous attack. When I saw a Qi practitioner established an organization called "Shen Ting", I exclaimed on the spot, "Absolutely amazing!" 😥😥 I kept describing how powerful and successful I was in my previous life. I just didn't have the brains to co-write, right?

, The characters in it, each character has his own flesh and blood. This book is clearly organized. Great for viewing

There was once a person who named his book Zuodao Qingtian, and then changed it to Yudao Qingtian.

Don't scold the young author. His writing is quite beautiful.

Updates are too slow😭

Please give me some pointers to my book. The updates are super strong and I don't want to be irritated.