I Only Wanted a Paid Vacation on a Dating Show, but Accidentally Became Famous

After reading the comment area, the author said that the protagonist comes from ancient soul wear. In addition, he is a professor and participates in a love show. The probability of this book being popular is already as high as 99.99%. But don't worry, author. I will always leave a place for you here. Come quickly and I will wait for you, my dear brother

You write romance novels, not popular science articles. Who wants to read popular science?

I can't stand it anymore. I've read more than 40 chapters, most of which are popular science, but they don't have the meaning of romance novels. What are you reading about romance novels? What we see is interaction and conflict, ambiguity, and love. You can't see love at all. All you see is popular science. You have no idea what readers want and what they want to read. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, but I can't read it at all. I'll give you a suggestion. If you don't know how to write romance dramas, you can read romance dramas. Without characters, highlights, interactions, and ambiguous romance dramas, it's better not to read them.

I don't see the feeling of Lian Zong, but it looks like a combination of travel notes and encyclopedias.

It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into consulting a lot of information. This is very recognized. It means that he wants to write this story well, but everyone is not here to read science. The perspective is never on the protagonist, which makes the readers have no sense of involvement. I personally like this kind of slow-burning, but life is generally fast-paced nowadays. Plus you are small, it is not exciting, which makes readers have no desire to read. I hope there will be adjustments in the future. I hope the author can see

The author is also quite funny. I can't even remember the Chinese name, but he also added the English name, making it look like no one knows who the protagonist is, which really affects the viewing experience.

I just wanted to read it briefly, but after reading Chapter 40, I felt like it was giving me some popular science and I couldn't tell who the protagonist was.

My view has always been that if you don't experience it yourself, you have no right to speak. Let me briefly highlight a few poisonous points: A love story was originally written as a popular science article. I don't quite understand whether the author doesn't read online articles or whether it's just a gimmick. We read online articles. What I watch about Lian Zong is the emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists. It's love. You can write shit. Routine. But we can't prioritize. After dozens of chapters, I almost couldn't figure out who the protagonist was? What kind of person is he. Who is the heroine? There is also the question of audience. The author is really afraid that we will be able to tell who is who. English name plus Chinese name. If you have film and television resources, forget it. But you are a web writer. Just writing it makes me dream back to the way it was written in the early days of online writing. It even made me think that I was not reading an online article. Fortunately, things changed in the middle. But the issue of priority still exists. I don't quite understand whether I want to write a group drama or what. If it were a group drama, the writing power would not be worthy of the ambition. If not. The characterization is too thin. As for the advancement of the main line, I still don't quite understand how I want to advance it. If the writing is about fairy tales or science fiction. Maybe it would be better. If it's a romance drama, the character description needs to be strengthened

The writing is okay, but I suggest the author go to a female channel. Written as a narrative.

It is a product of self-entertainment. If you click on it and read two chapters and you are not interested, you can discard it. Let's talk about the shortcomings of this crappy book. Other readers said that the female character didn't learn enough in more than twenty chapters. The author Zhang replied that he was here to write about the protagonist's failure, not the heroine. Regardless of whether this is a romance novel, it only takes a few paragraphs to clearly define the character. Except for the supporting male idol characters in your book, both men and women are like the same person talking to himself, with no difference at all. And deleting 60% of the word count in this book will not only not affect the plot, but also improve the quality of the book to a higher level. Let me explain why. This book is full of a lot of word count stuff, and I didn't want to write vivid characters. Man a appears in front of four women, and five people introduce their names and English names respectively. Then man b comes out and repeats the above operation. Men c and d also come out and repeat the above operation. Readers are scolding you for not introducing English names like crazy. How many times will you use English names when writing books later? Instead of thinking about bringing people to life, I first thought about using two names for one person. According to the author's logic, the heroines are all passers-by, so why introduce English names in such a large space? The following activities are also the same. I played Poetry Solitaire and finished two articles (readers came to see their Poetry Solitaire? What impression do you have of the plot when you write Poetry Solitaire? I deleted them all without affecting any reader), and then they played guessing between man A and woman A, guessing between man B and woman B, c and c, d and d. Otherwise, the male protagonists would re-read long sections of Baidu Encyclopedia. The whole story is full of words, and the plot is completely devoid of characters. The male and female characters talk about their vast experiences in luxury travel. It feels like it was intended to be written as Guo Jingming's life-changing story, but in fact it's still five Jiangnan flavors short of Guo Jingming's. At least Guo Jingming is really infatuated and can write that tone. The characters written by the author are all rich, young and rich, but they all have the same mold. Sixty percent of the content of this book is rubbish, the author's own entertainment, everyone can just read it for fun. I read more than 30 chapters and one character didn't stand up. I felt that I didn't finish it completely. It's smelly and long. Especially, the introduction said that the male protagonist is bad.