American Comics: I, the Containment Object Is Exposed at the Beginning

I feel that the biggest failure point of this novel so far is the exposure of the contained objects and the gods of the Saint Seiya world. Among the anomalies exposed so far, except for one 096, there is no real person who can be considered powerful. In terms of strength, it is not good, and it is not scary or weird enough. The overall strength is extremely weak. Apart from being able to scare pirates or Naruto, it has no expression. On the contrary, it often makes Loki or the two gods of death and sleep show various disdainful expressions, which makes people feel more and more frustrated the more they read. Other articles of this type have already begun to write about divinities or the supreme divinity, but you are still writing about a group of unpopular anomalies. If you still expose it in the worlds of Naruto and Pirates, Akira Hikaru is enough, but now you have added Dragon Ball and Saint Seiya, and it is no longer enough to expose these. It must be strong enough to shock and scare the audiences in these worlds. Otherwise, after hundreds of chapters, you will just see all kinds of ridicule and disdain from them, and it is easy for people to gradually lose their patience to read. Originally, when the author introduced the Necronomicon a few chapters ago, he could have suppressed their arrogance and arrogance by letting Yao Ma overturn in the hands of Nai Ya, and letting Yao Ma and the two gods of Death Sleep shock Nai Ya's strength. But now Naiya is introduced in the latest chapter, which in turn shocks Yaoma's strength, and even sets Yaoma and Naiya to be on the same level, which directly turns Naiya into a clown who seems to have never seen the world. Now I can only hope that the author will not make the Broken God inferior to Chronos, Yao Ma playing with the Xiangshou Demon, and the two sleeping gods disdain and laugh at the Crimson King or Artabas. If this is true, then the book will be completely useless. This behavior is tantamount to destroying one's own brand. Most of the people who read this book are here to see how the Foundation's anomalies shocked people in other worlds. But if you really do this kind of work, you will be able to dissuade most people. And hurry up and produce some powerful anomalies. Not to mention the supreme divinity now, at least produce a few high-level reality warpers. Like 343, Witch Girl or Suspension, Witch Girl can at least create and destroy multiverses at will. This is not many times more powerful than the group of gods in Saint Seiya, and it is not much more interesting than the group of crooked melons and dates exposed now.

It's okay, come on, update more, are you embarrassed if you don't update 10 chapters a day?

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All I can say is that the subject matter is pretty good, but the writing is a piece of shit. Regarding the original characters, they are out of place and all are shocking.

After being taken in and given strength, I was embarrassed to see it. After being taken into custody, power will be given to the taking in personnel, so how come your administration doesn't have one? It was okay at first. I thought the containment was successful and the protagonist would have power. But if you do this, the more you look at it, the more embarrassing it becomes. The above question is like a thorn in my heart, which makes me feel very unhappy. You might as well study contained objects instead and gain power from physics, magic, and metaphysics

Chapter 23 was released 🤔 and slipped away

It's only been 23 chapters and it's already on the shelves. A book by a great author wouldn't be on the shelves so early, right?

I have only read three chapters of this book. The biggest poisonous point is that everyone has been treated as sand sculptures. A video of a wooden sculpture that knows all the information scares the main characters in the world. More powerful ones appear later. How do you write it? It scares the shit out of you. What if someone powerful appears again, scares him to death, and then ends?

The biggest flaw of this book is the character of Wang Luffy. Contained objects are a disaster to people in other worlds. As a result, he is so cool and handsome again and again that people just want to stab him to death. This book is not a comedy-style book like One Piece. Having Wang Luffy really affects the viewing experience.

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Recently I found a bunch of chapters 2 and 30 listed, and they were said to be website rules. Why haven't I seen them before in Chuangshi and QQ?

Because we are here to take a look at the various strange containment objects and containment methods in various universes. Not here to see the protagonists showing off. So I hope the author will. Don't write, or write as little as possible about the protagonist. It's best not to write. I don't want to watch the main character. I just want to see people from all worlds containing all kinds of outrageous containment objects.

The writing is so poor, the preface does not match the postscript, all the details are wrong, the characters are also a mess, none of them are normal.

The premise of the mission's rewards is successful containment or extermination. As a result, you will leave a little trouble every time, right? Naruto Orochimaru left a fire, and the DC Universe Bionic Beast left two cubs, and they happened to be a male and a female. If you don't know how to write, don't fucking write.

If pirates sneak into American comics, they will follow. A pot of porridge was mixed with... Like vomit

After I accepted it, there were only a few contained objects that exploded above the city, but the rewards after containment were basically more powerful prizes than the contained objects. I didn't even realize that the original containment universe was the result of a failed containment. It felt like the containment society had become a multi-level one and needed to cultivate containment methods for other universes.

Moreover, the problem with Whitebeard's Dog Spell is that he is still ill and needs to take pills every day emm-_-

After watching part of it, the protagonist is completely a tool man

Is it on the shelves too quickly? And I think there must be a universe destroyed by the failure of containment. At the very least, there must be a powerful containment object that destroys half of the world or something. The rewards given are a bit too deliberate. It would be best if there were no rewards at all.

1 The theme is good, but the protagonist's presence is too low and he is just a tool. 2. Very few of the containment items exposed so far are truly top-notch. It would be okay if it were just about the Marvel world. But if it involves many anime movies, it won't be enough. 3 The character is seriously inconsistent with the character and behavior in animation and movies. It's basically an original character wearing this character's name. 4. Be shocked at every turn. Shock is used to express the power of the contained objects exposed by the protagonist. But is it really awesome? In the world of characters that both Ultraman and Doraemon have, they are not that awesome. Peanuts are just popular but really not great. I started charging for Chapter 23, which makes me want to see if there is any improvement in subsequent writing. After all, some authors get better and better as they write. But you charge for these 23 chapters, so when it comes time to charge according to what was written before, you feel like you are at a loss. To put it bluntly, I had a sudden inspiration and came up with a good subject, but my writing style was really bad.

Twenty-three are on the shelves, awesome.

Author, I may be your only remaining reader. Don't always give rewards, but give unlimited energy, okay? The infinite energy bug turns out to be a reward for you. What do we think of this? It would be nice if other authors wrote these. I abandoned your book a long time ago. Watching you gain unlimited energy and unlimited energy rewards one by one. I'm about to give up. Let's see if you have changed again. If not, then give up.

I'm curious, are there any fans of Qidian Foundation?

After writing so much, not a single world was destroyed, and all of them were successfully contained. Is it possible that the protagonist's golden finger was the mastermind behind it? He released all those contained objects. Before releasing them, we have to evaluate the world's strength. If they are too strong, they won't be released at all, right?

Can some of the author's Chinese-style heroes be added?

From the first chapter to Chapter 503, I have forgotten the name of the protagonist. The protagonist has no sense of existence. Chapter 503 is about 017 Shadow Demon coming to the world of Doraemon. I thought that Laoden, who was cursed by the dead brother, could appear in the world of Saint Seiya.

When unlimited streaming...: Seeing Naruto and Pirates, normal operation; Seeing Marvel, there is a multiverse; Seeing Dragon Ball, the unlimited streaming limit this time is quite high; Seeing Ultraman, oh, the author is actually a tokusatsu chef; Seeing Doraemon,? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! !

I always feel like those containment objects are not very high quality.

It's a bit overwhelming. After all, there are too many stitches. Some of them have exceeded the upper limit, so I feel like I need to slow down.

Too much nonsense. Not worth subscribing to.