The Road to Immortality

Name: The Road to Immortality
Author: An Impossible Dream

人仙之路

by An Impossible Dream (一个不可能的梦)

Status: Completed
Length: 55 Words
Genre: Cultivation
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Cultivation Civilization
Updated: 2y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Story background: When the Starry Sky Alliance of the two tribes of humans and demons detects that a planet is about to undergo a great change in the world and spiritual power is resurrected, they will release many secret realms containing various inheritances as seeds... Red Star, in the year 3293 of the celestial calendar, a great change began in the world. Thousands of light balls fell from the sky, and tsunamis, earthquakes, and volcanic eruptions began to occur in various places. Then someone discovered that those light balls falling from the sky turned into portals. Some people got the method of cultivation after entering them, and some people never came out after entering... Later, someone discovered that animals can also enter it and obtain the method of cultivation, and use this practice to gradually grow into monsters... More than five hundred years after the great changes in the world, a fourteen-year-old boy named Bai Qi from the Bai family, the head of the three guardian families of the Fufeng Secret Realm in Fufeng City, embarked on his journey to immortality... Ps: This book is a bit slow, so please watch it. If you have any good suggestions, you can comment directly. Thank you! ! ! ! !

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"Fantasy Repair Notes" mutual help, has been collected
2y ago
Typical work of a wild newcomer
There are two types of wild newcomers. One is to focus on the display of the worldview. The main content of the book is what is in this world? The whole story is told plainly and straightforwardly, without any portraiture of the reader. It's a bit like that person on the Internet who opened a rookie post without negotiating cooperation with the courier. The other is to enjoy yourself all the time. This is better than the first one, because likes flock together, but it is easy to be reported and removed from the shelves, and it is also easy to stop updating directly after you are done enjoying it. The author is the first type. If the book is treated as a game, what is the first thing the author shows the player? Judging from the introduction, it is either an organized secret realm guide, or the protagonist accidentally obtains an undiscovered treasure in a secret realm after the secret realm resources are monopolized. Look at what the author writes. He writes about spiritual chefs first, then spells, from brother conversations to campus life, and then jumps to the ring and auction. It is very different from the introduction. It feels like a traditional fairy tale that has been contaminated by a certain concept. If you want me to modify it, I just need to use the secret realm to connect all these elements (this is my family's opinion). Starting from Lingchu, the scarcity of the secret realm has been emphasized. After years of development, the resources of the secret realm are almost exhausted. Use the spirit chef to elicit clues to the secret realm, use the talisman to go deeper, and get directly to the theme in three chapters. The other kind is the traditional literature on cultivating immortality, but the traditional literature on cultivating immortality has been prepared as described by predecessors, and there is no way out.
2y ago
Does anyone have any suggestions after reading it? Or if there are any shortcomings in the novel, correct them and encourage them if they are not.
2y ago