Ancient God Game

I think the writing is pretty good, come on, the author, but some of it is a bit not rigorous.

Introduction to the Second Edition: Destiny is about to befall me, and my fate is unparalleled in transporting books. I am the only one who respects the traces of dust thousands of miles away.

Isn't it too relaxing to meet a random player you don't know? Isn't it said that the protagonist always likes to see the world with the greatest malice?

Chapter 27 is a bit far-fetched after all. I am not cold-blooded. This girl is an NPC. From meeting to being captured, her interaction with the protagonist does not exceed a thousand words. There is no reasonable logic as to why the protagonist risked his own death to save her. Moreover, he knows nothing about the enemy, and the enemy is still a giant. If you want to save it, you can either enrich the character or give a reason why you must save it. This is a life-threatening place.

Is this a form of criticism? With a background, you dare to meet offline in the first place? No one has complained yet, is it because there are too few people watching?

You can still read the content of the copy, but the reality is a piece of shit💩

Update soon! Eight pictures are not enough? ! ! !

What will the protagonist evolve into in the future? Orcs? Ancient dragons? Families of ancient gods?

If the deceptive introduction says that you can't do it, then that means you definitely can?

Looking for further reading! ! Please read it! ! !

What a coincidence, it happens to be 66

To be honest, the writing so far is really good.

The passion for saving the little girl is too forced and can only make people feel annoyed.

Very well written, the author keeps it up

Come on! !

The author's writing is so good. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will become a master.