Why Can't This Football Champion Do Anything?

So far the rhythm is still ups and downs and attractive. One suggestion is that "Daily Branches" could be suffixed with the chapter name to save some fast food readers from nagging. It is acceptable to press the transition every day and don't make it too long. In addition, my personal opinion: plug-ins should be applied little by little, just like squeezing out toothpaste. The finishing touch!

Learn from Lin Hai in writing developmental flow? Who in today's football literature still does this? Which one is not full of pace at the beginning? Lin Hai dares to write like this because he has a fixed circle of readers and is not afraid. Will you do the same in your first book?

The cool points of scoring a goal pass by in a flash, but the failure is a big and sensational chapter, which is a bit tiring to read.

It's a bit frustrating. Is it interesting to suppress the protagonist?

It is predicted that the palace will enter the palace within 30 thousand, about 25 thousand.

You are directly tricking me into subscribing, and you will give me one 10 years later

The first part was pretty good. If you stick with it, you will have a chance to explode. After all, the sports genre is a niche, and it is easy to get ahead if you stick to it. But the next few chapters made me confused. I directly skipped time to write about the main character's memories after he became famous. It seems that the author couldn't hold on and was ready to finish it. It's a pity.

Can a waste be given a chance to play?

The pace is too slow, it's all off the court. Speed ​​it up on the court, otherwise the passion will be wiped out.

The author perfectly created an unlikable male protagonist who is arrogant and stupid. I really admire him. The growth-oriented protagonist is not written like this. Really, there would have been nothing wrong with writing it like this ten years ago, but now when I see a male protagonist with this kind of character, I just want to give him a slap. I am so fragile that I have the mentality of a primary school student who cannot bear any stimulation. Is the author really not going to consider the readers' opinions at all? It's not that you can't write emotional dramas, it's that such rubbish emotional dramas are not suitable for football writing. It's fine to write those youth pain literatures.

The front is very exciting. I have been keeping it since it was put on the shelves. I ordered it all today. And then, what the hell is written in the back? It's a running account. I'm so disappointed.

I regret not reading the comment section. Is it interesting to abuse the master?

Football novels have a tendency to be trashy, and I can understand that. But with the golden finger, it is still waste material, and the author is the first! Author, I like your disgusting courage, but I also hope that you won't regret it when you rush to the street!

The protagonist gives up, don't give up, you have a dream, I will spend all my money to support you, seeing this is enough, the author might as well write about the protagonist's feet being disabled, but the coach never abandons him, and finally his consciousness breaks through, sitting in a wheelchair and using his consciousness to control the ball, which can better reflect the coach's knowledge of people.

Football is just football, with a poisonous and emotional plot interspersed with it. It was originally written like that, but now that I've done it, I really have no interest in reading it.

There is really no reason to rush into the street.

I recall that when that chapter was released, it basically destroyed the book.

The emotional drama in this book is too poisonous. Reading a football article makes me sick, right?