Douluo: Capture the Traitor Xiao Wu at the Beginning

Xiao Wu is a love brain. Tang San keeps saying he loves Xiao Wu, but in fact he is lying to himself. Tang San seeks a god position for the whole family. Xiao Wu will be a Shura scabbard until his death. After reincarnation, Tang San followed her reincarnation to steal her blood power. If this is the so-called love for Xiao Wu, then he can only say: "Holy shit! I love you, uncle!!"

The writing is okay but it's tedious, and it's still meaningless to write with a group. The protagonist starts from the protection of the two emperors of ice and snow, and he has a title and is about the same strength. Why are you running to Shrek? You can't go there if you bring these two combat powers together. If you don't bump into gods or divine messengers in Douyi, you can fight casually. If you want to become a god After a hundred thousand years of transformation, he took it to eat fairy grass and practice, but the result was that he transformed into a beast. Then you want to think of a way to turn the beast into a god. In the end, he changed into a personal form to blend in with the plot, but the writing is actually fine for the time being. It feels like the plot is about acquiring a girl, torturing her, and having anal surgery.

In fact, if you think about it, the protagonist Snow Emperor Lieyan and the God of Destruction are both from the same race. They are elves raised by nature. If Destruction doesn't help its own people, no wonder they will be plotted to death.

How can Douluo's soul beast develop to counterattack the God Realm? Without relying on the system and brainless cheating. It seems that the only time to fight for the Abyss with the Abyss Saint is during the first battle, right? Snatched the Heavenly Holy Abyss Halberd, captured the abyss plane, and then continued to attack other planes to become the God King first. Go back to Douluo and contact the Silver Dragon King, and take away a group of ferocious beasts to help them become gods. Other than this, I really can't think of any other way for spirit beasts to counterattack the God Realm. There are too few roads that soul beasts can take.

The soul beasts are not of the same clan at all, okay? They all look different, so how can they be called the same clan? Can carnivores and herbivores be called the same race?

It's really interesting after reading the introduction. Xingdou and Jibei are equivalent to the two great empires in the soul master world. What serious illness did you, a soul beast from the far north world, go to the Xingdou world to catch Xiao Wu? Whether I betray you or not is another matter, but I stretched my hand too far. Emperor Tian didn't even say anything. What's the matter with you? Ditian: What the hell do you mean? Running to my territory to catch animals without saying a word? Are you still trying to catch my beast?

Why did you accept Liu Erlong? She is so old.

Unify the continent! Tang San's backstage is God Shura! No way! Everyone knows that getting around depends on your background!

A rare book! The writing of this book is excellent, and it can be seen that the author's writing skills are quite profound, at least starting with a master's degree. Reading it is immersive, the plot is not conventional, the story has ups and downs, and the world view is majestic. The first three chapters are simply the finishing touch and make people want to stop. Some of the people and things in the article are also thought-provoking. The author also handles the moral and ethical issues very well. It is not difficult to see that the author is a very intelligent and charming person in reality, with his own standards of judgment and independence. To summarize, some good books have been rare in recent years. Some people may think that I have exaggerated because I have chosen the best ones. Doesn't this book have shortcomings and regrets? Good question! Readers who can ask this kind of question are not simple at first glance. They must have no problem with their character and are not easily fooled by superficial phenomena. I call them experts! Everything has two sides, and this book is certainly no exception. A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets. This book has the following two shortcomings. I hope the author will correct them in time after seeing them. The first shortcoming is that the number of words is too few, and each chapter is short and weak. Of course, this is also a common problem of Qidian authors, who update slowly. The second point that makes me regretful is that I have not seen such an excellent work, but this does not affect me in the slightest to point out!

The bold soul beast, the soft-bone rabbit, has an affair with the human race. Please return to the stars with me as soon as possible to be punished. Otherwise, your hundred thousand years of cultivation will be ruined and you will be turned into powder in an instant!

Author Who are the heroines

Jealousy? Disdain? This Tang San Lu tastes a bit strong.

There is a bug in Douluo. It seems that the soul beast sacrifice cannot be interrupted. You can ignore the bottleneck and put it on. The soul beast that is more than 100,000 years old can control the thousand-year-old soul beast and forcefully sacrifice it. It will directly stack 9 garbage soul rings, and the soul ring system will be completely abolished.

Ha~

The plot does not need to move so fast. If the twist is too big in a short space, it will appear a bit abrupt and make people feel a little different from the original character's personality. Some descriptions could be more detailed, but I feel like that doesn't count the number of words. After all, the main theme is to torture the three and torture the strong. Also, author, you know gimmicks. Following this trend, you are probably not just writing about the world of Douluo, right? After all, the protagonist's martial spirit and the speed at which you can pull off the plot, there's not much that can be said about a short and weak Dou Yi.

I think the hero's martial soul is not as handsome as this one

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

It feels good but the plot is too cliché. You can pretty much tell the plot just by reading the introduction.

Except the protagonist is an ice dragon. The plot is exactly the same as other Douluo fan fiction. This harem story really makes me uncomfortable. You know, I usually read harem stories.

Keep writing, it's not enough

The author's writing is so good. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will become a master.

I finished reading it, and overall it was okay, with no major flaws. But author, can you please stop condensing too many things into a few chapters? You can write more details and so on. Condensation is not the way you do it. Also, don't write about the harem if you haven't been in love. What you wrote about your feelings is... It's hard to explain in one sentence. If you can't be slanderous, don't be slanderous. You're not a black man, like Tang Sanyu, Xiaogang, etc. You just pull it out from time to time to whip the corpse.