Marvel's Cultivation of Immortality in Asgard

Brothers, I couldn't hold on any longer. After reading chapter 200, I started to get addicted. By chapter 280, I was so addicted that I couldn't save myself. I really can't hold on anymore. It feels like the author just wrote the beginning, and the rest is all written by artificial intelligence. Sit back and say goodbye. I wasted a lot of money because of my loss. I lost so much 😡😡😡

This is just the beginning of preparing a harem for myself 😅. The author should find ways to increase the reader's sense of involvement, rather than stepping into the role himself.

There are so many eunuchs, the author is pleased with himself. It's better to create so many messy settings than to write original fan fiction. The tempo of fan fiction should be fast, and you should get into the plot as soon as possible. Whoever reads fan fiction will look at your slow setting.

There are too many explanations and it's too blunt, but it's obvious that the author has done some homework, but that doesn't mean it's good.

It's too verbose. . . . . . .

After reading six chapters, it's all nonsense and second thoughts made up by the author. Wow, why don't the author read more of the original comics and movies?

I've been basking in it all the time and stopped watching it.

The more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes. This is just a fucking nanny.

The writing is rubbish, the plot is anecdotal, and it's not fun at all.

I wanted to laugh when I saw that Asgard was not as powerful as the Kree. So how did Asgard defeat the dark elves when they swept the universe? You need to be smart when writing a book.

It's too annoying to look at, and there are a lot of verbose words. There are not many gods in the Asa Domain to begin with. They gradually conquered the nine realms. They are powerful in force, strong in body, have a long life, and are relatively closed. To cultivate immortality, you might as well set it on the Kree, Skrulls, Sovereigns, or members of the Reavers, interstellar pirates like Yondu, the planet ruled by Gao Tianzun, and the chaotic land ruled by Emperor Fan. How could he go to a closed and solidified Asa clan? Every entry and exit must be reported to the gatekeeper, and he also has the power to see and hear.

Why is there so much nonsense? . . . . Learn magic, and psychological activities take up 2 chapters. What are you doing?

The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that the writing is useless and there is too much nonsense.

The author wants to write a good book, but you have too many personal problems, and you have to explain everything. What did you say in the golden three chapters, explain, and recall various clues. What follows is various explanations. Do you want to popularize science? I guess the author is still very proud. My data and settings are so awesome, and I'm so professional. Hey, let's change my profession.

It was okay at the beginning, but it was too wordy later on, and it didn't feel like cultivating an immortal.

It feels like I don't want to read it, it's like being a dog. It's different from the Marvel comics I read. Asgardians are more direct, like to fight, don't control knowledge strictly at all, and are kind to their tribesmen. Why do everyone believe in Odin? It shows that Odin is not afraid that someone can surpass him and defeat him. Later, it was only Odin who sacrificed his eyes that gave him cosmic wisdom.

I talked about cultivating immortals, but in the end, I went to the earth to do something that was not available. I was speechless. The novel went off topic. The author

Brothers, is anyone still watching? I sneaked away first as a courtesy. I chased you from the courtyard in the previous version. I thought it was as exciting as the previous one. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore🤦. Let's complain about the author. I have no problem with you being generous in writing the protagonist, but you are afraid that Judge Lu will stumble and you wrote Odin in such a useless way, O. Ding is the main god. To put it bluntly, they are a few people who stand at the top of the Marvel Universe. They sit in the palace every day and peek. Also, if you don't know how to write about the harem, don't write about it. It's like the protagonist adopted 5 children in the middle, and he is still a pampered one. It has no effect at all and makes readers particularly disgusted. I am It is speculated that the following five women have no effect at all. The biggest contribution is the word count. The structure of this book is not bad, but the author's attempt to add these harems and immortality is too unnecessary. It is not an exaggeration to say that it ruined this book. If you want to become an immortal, you can become an immortal. There are a lot of books without female majors in immortality. Damn it, you can try each book one by one 😵😵😵😵. When writing about cultivating immortals, write seriously. When writing about harem, just change a subject and write specifically about harem. At the very least, be too tactful. You are too abrupt. I can't keep up with you. Farewell!

What the hell! Asgard was reduced to this? No matter how you say it, he is at the level of the overlord in the universe. There are a lot of good things in Odin's treasure house, just a Bifrost Bridge and a Star Destroyer weapon, plus a God King Odin is afraid of a Kree?

To measure strength by power, just look at the catalog. Looking at the content is too inconsistent.

There's so much nonsense, so don't write to so many people who can't write. It's such a mess!

He can never catch what readers want to read. He talks about a lot of things repeatedly, breaks them apart and mashes them up to tell you. Who reads novels to see you being reasonable and logical? Isn't it all just for the plot? , I was listening to the book, and I heard the plot about Hela going to see Odin after she recovered, but it turned out that she was still in the water after five or six chapters, and then she actually came to the earth again. This plot is gone?

1. The Golden Palace is not pure gold, and the hardness of gold is not high. Ordinary people can bite it hard and leave marks 2. The density of Uru should be very high, and the size of a fist should be tens of kilograms 3. The author has made too many Uru, almost as many as one person has Thor's hammer >4. The protagonist is too young. He is a minor on Earth, but no adult cares about him. It is just like leaving a seven or eight-year-old child to live alone on Earth after his parents died. It's really heartbreaking I haven't read the rest yet. Generally speaking, it is more realistic, but there are some unreasonable things.

A Western fantasy novel disguised as Marvel?

The book I deleted on September 26 is still on the list. Is this because the drug addicts have run away?

It feels like the protagonist was specially released by the Eastern Immortal Court. The protagonist knows the basics of Qi refining, and was reincarnated into Asgard, which has divine power supply. It may be to figure out the problem of divine power supply. There is also the underworld that can reincarnate as a heavenly being. The background of "The Wilderness" may have been done by Ji Ning.

Except for those mother's followers and the giant baby being too annoying, everything else is fine.

What the hell are you writing about in the three golden chapters? The opening chapter should quickly advance into the plot, arrange a small conflict, highlight the protagonist, and have something exciting to attract the reader's attention, rather than a long chapter about some boring settings. You can finish it in one chapter and never use two chapters. You are seriously irritating.

The author is a sissy, so damn procrastinating.

What happened these two days? Only three chapters updated