Entertainment: Let You Perform Miserably on Stage, but Not Make You Laugh

The writing style really needs to be improved. I don't even like the main character, and I can't stand it just like the book The Full Time Artist. I prefer the kind of mentally mature protagonists, but few can write them. Here I recommend a spoonful of Once Upon a Time in America 1982, and learn from its writing style and characterization of the protagonist.

Seeing Chapter 171, you can't write the plot because it's fun. You have to write the plot to be happy. If you write the plot purely for the fun, there will be a serious sense of disobedience and embarrassment. But writing the plot to be happy is different. The two are different. The former is that you write the plot for the sake of fun, but the plot may be better if it is not fun. The latter is the plot that is suitable for being written for fun. The cool article cannot be mindlessly cool. In this case, the contradiction and awkwardness are greater than the coolness, and it is boring to watch unless your writing is good enough. It can eliminate the sense of inconsistency and awkwardness. However, the author does not have such strength.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I have a few things I want to share. 1. This book is not too violent, it is quite cheerful, and there are many memes on the Internet. 2. It is recommended that the author pay attention to the propriety of the protagonist's speech when writing about the interaction between the protagonist and his fans. After all, no matter what the angle is, a public figure should not drive openly, even if he is named by Yang Ma. 3. It is recommended that new readers should not read with too much logic when reading the book. There is not much logic in this book. When you read the chapter about the protagonist and the company contract, you will be dumbfounded. This company is run by his father, right? Finally, I wish the author will write better and better, and the readers will have fun reading

It's okay, but is it appropriate for a public figure to say obscene words on a show that he doesn't care about in private?

Traveling through the peerless Tang Sect, inheriting the Seven Killing Sword at the beginning, resurrecting Qian Renxue, tricking Huo Yuhao into betraying the Tang Sect and joining the Spirit Hall, and finally killing the God King Tang San in front of his daughter Tang Wutong. The title of the book: Douluo: Huo Yuhao joins the Spirit Hall. Come and take a look. Just click in to read it.

Traveling through the peerless Tang Sect, inheriting the Seven Killing Sword at the beginning, resurrecting Qian Renxue, tricking Huo Yuhao into betraying the Tang Sect and joining the Spirit Hall, and finally killing the God King Tang San in front of his daughter Tang Wutong. The title of the book: Douluo: Huo Yuhao joins the Spirit Hall. Come and take a look. Just click in to read it.

Facts have proved that 99% of the introduction [xx+xx+xx+] is full of sex. If you click on this book review, congratulations on wasting 10 seconds to read it. If you go in and read chapter 30, congratulations on wasting another hour.

How old is the author? Are you twenty years old? Why are you always acting awkwardly 🤔

It's very well written. I almost stayed up all night to read what you wrote. I personally like to read comedy genres. It's indeed very well written. I hope you can write more. I think your last book cost 120,000 yuan, which is too few. Now this book costs 150,000 yuan. I hope you can write more. Don't end hastily. I will always support you. Come on

Everyone knows that Jay Chou is talented, but does he have singing skills? JJ Lin's voice is almost the same as Faye Wong's singing skills. It was the first time I heard his song and I got goosebumps all over my body.

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Talk in public places, engage in impromptu plagiarism all day long, novels create a genre, comics are unparalleled in popularity, acting is as good as a movie star, and albums are released once a month. It is really off the mark and has nothing to do with reality.

The first four chapters are a bit unbearable. How many hahahaha are there? ? ?

What's going on? A book with more than one million words, a fifth-level author account, and more than 100 comments? I don't think the author has banned the words. Why does it give people a strange feeling of being like fire but not fire, like being dead but not being bad...🤔

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

It was okay at the beginning, but then it became more and more ridiculous. All the villains did it deliberately, and they all reduced their wits. In addition, when they encountered problems, they had no solution, so they could only pretend to be serious and keep silent. In the end, everything was solved by using capital from their own women. In this case, it is better to write that you are the capital. Then I am writing a novel and painting, and it is a novel that imitates a full-time artist or a part-time artist, but the imitation is not good. The more I write, the worse it gets.

To be honest, the author said, I read this article for free on other platforms, and I finished it in half a day and one night and updated the chapters. Among the works of the same type, you are the first one that makes me feel that I can't stop, the first one that makes me feel shameful, and the first one that makes me uncontrollably find the original website of your work and give me a click to subscribe, monthly tickets, and rewards for the work! Although I still can't do it, I will eat dirt for you, but I am willing to do my best to support you, the author is great!

There are more than 500 chapters and more than 100 comments, which is of little reference. Either no one read it or the comments were deleted...

Who are the heroines? Are they all original? Solve

Formulaic entertainment stories, mindless driving and swearing, urban stories involving harems, mindless villains, brain-c. The audience didn't know it and thought they were attracted to it. He could be ranked first in anything and be praised to the heavens.

Chapter 15: Poisonous Hair, the whole job is just a job, it's always awkward, and the writing style is too childish.

Forget about being formulaic. I only choose some unpopular songs, and then when I sing them, they are all good-sounding, really beautiful, crazy, and brainless. They are not cool articles.

After seeing Chapter 134/135, give up decisively! Even after they went to bed, they were so pure.

I took a special look and saw that updates would be discontinued in February! How is the author's health these past six months? As for everyone saying that the poisonous milk will start after ten chapters! None of this matters to me! But, you stopped updating? Will readers be allowed to write the subsequent plot themselves?

Hey, the first entertainment article I watched was this eunuch

I thought the protagonist was the one controlling the rhythm during the misfortune, but I didn't expect that something went wrong all the time.

There is a feeling of being forced to make a living, and the writing is full of this feeling, illogical logic, bloody plot, thin characters, no planning, and the layout is too small

Good song selection! Hard to describe anything else

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The author has too many vests. Do you know if he has released a new book?