My Whole Family Traveled Through Time with Encyclopedias

Overall good, the plot is attractive, there are a lot of typos

We are so poor that our brothers and sisters don't even have cotton-padded clothes to wear. Why do we have to eat mutton hot pot and buy an iron pot for it? I feel that in order to highlight the unconditional love of a father for his daughter, many illogical plots were written. Including getting seven or eight rabbits at once and eating them all. Poor people would do this accidentally. All in all, there are too many unreasonable places.

How could that frostbite ointment made from lard be so inexpensive? Oil is very expensive, and lard is also very valuable.

Make a splash and prove that your book is still read. Your book is so deserted 🙂 It is best not to reveal the gunpowder system. If this cross-era thing is deployed in the entire army, it will easily affect the combat effectiveness. Even if it is revealed, there will be various restrictions such as productivity restrictions, material restrictions, and process restrictions?

Will you follow Chang Yuan from now on? Don't you want to farm anymore? I just like to read the kind of articles that focus on slow-paced farming in a corner. If I keep doing science and technology from now on, I will quit my job first.

It's not that I rebel and proclaim myself emperor, which is meaningless. I'm still just a worker.

The charge started after only 30 chapters. One chapter has 2008 words, and it's even more verbose after charging, which means the word count is a bit low.

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It's well written, just good enough to read without thinking.

Don't worry about logic and it's best not to use your brain. Anyway, you can write whatever you want.

After reading it for so long, I realized that there are so few comments. The writing is not bad. At least it is much better than those illiterate authors. Why is no one following it?

Every time I see the protagonist's family using their golden fingers to make money to take advantage of these poor people who don't even have enough to eat, and asking others to be grateful to the three of them, I want to roll my eyes. The three of them just asked others to do the hard work for them if they didn't want to do it. They knew that saltpeter could bring them such great benefits, but they unconscionably exchanged it for zero-cost wild taro. At least they could give people some white flour. How can we feel at ease when the three of us eat and drink enough every day and watch our sons and brothers dig wild vegetables every day without enough to eat? Obviously the purpose of dividing the family is to prevent the two brothers from taking advantage of each other, but why should it be written that the mother-in-law is open-minded and generous and allows her daughter-in-law to take charge of the family? Even if she sells a prescription for chilblains that she doesn't like, she still has to charge two shares. Can't they buy a share together and share it? After spending a few taels of silver, they won't even be able to recoup the cost.

Friends, if you have seen it, you can come here and leave your footprints🌝

Why is Fang Chunmei's maiden name Li? Does she take her mother's last name?

Traveling as a family together is a path I have never thought of 🙂

When I saw the fire bed, I thought of "North and South Groceries" with newspapers covering the walls.

Trust! ! Come on! !

It is my first time to write a book to gain popularity. My autobiography "You Shouldn't Be the Last Straw that Breaks Her" welcomes your guidance and valuable opinions. 70 Have any friends born in the 1980s joined? Let's write our own big book together and make it into a big drama.

Does it look good? Will you often be robbed of prescriptions? ? ?

Is there no extra story about Qingxi?

The writing is very good, when will I publish a new article?

It's good-looking, and it's rare to find a time-travel novel that really cares about people at the bottom. Taneda-ryu is indeed a good read, and I automatically ignored some of the unreasonable parts. It is not easy to write this kind of article. I don't know if there are other famous arrows in the place where the protagonist is. Some inventions can be passed down from other famous arrows, Guo Jia (for example, plant seeds are very good), and they did exist in ancient times. If too many inventions were brought about by the protagonist's family, in fact, as far as the plot is concerned, the character pressure and description may be a bit too much (?)