From the Late Qing to the Twenty-First Century

If you have any opinions, or if you think that all the poison is put here and I've deleted everything outside, you can teach me how to do things here, but not outside. Outside is for discussing plot and ideas.

Author, are you looking for trouble by writing this subject? If you want to write something exciting about the Republican era, you'll get censored. If you don't want to be censored, you have to follow the script. I might as well just read a history textbook (7th or 8th grade).

Honestly, I hope the protagonist is Du Chaofan.

I thought the late Qing Dynasty and early Republican era were a time of revolution. Then suddenly there's a system? I thought it was about industrial production. And then suddenly they started practicing Qi cultivation? I thought it was about anti-Japanese war heroes. Then suddenly it was aliens? 😰

Even before watching it, I thought the premise was hilarious. Living from the late Qing Dynasty to the present day, history hasn't changed, which means you're living your life like a dog at your age!

Looking at the book title and then at this chapter title, I'm utterly baffled. It seems you've rewritten the outline; it has absolutely nothing to do with the late Qing Dynasty and early Republic of China. It's just a bait-and-switch tactic.

I've read 42 chapters, and overall it feels like a monotonous, rambling account of events. It's bland and uninteresting, and so far, I still don't know what the protagonist is going to do next. There's no main plot and not even a short-term goal. It's really unnecessary to do this.

The details are lacking. A superhuman whose spiritual power covers the entire solar system, or even more, should at least be omniscient about everything known, if not omniscient within that area. Yet he claims there are things his two grandsons, who studied abroad, don't even know.

The author is amazing. The beginning is all about traditional martial arts stances, then the protagonist's soul leaves the body and wanders into the void—the leap is huge! Then there's a Cthulhu-esque mental pollution element... The author is truly skilled at writing. Their writing style definitely needs more practice, but it's undeniably brilliant.

The concept is good, but the writing is too poor; it's so bad that it's almost unreadable. If the writing were better, it would actually be a decent novel.