Deep Sea Apocalypse: I Raise Fish and Turn It into a Dragon

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By the way, the world view of this novel has been roughly laid out, but it is still not detailed enough, and it looks a bit confusing. The background is that humans are drifting in the sea on a large mechanical island similar to Noah's Ark (?), And are attacked by mutant fish and beasts from time to time. But the current description is still too vague. How big is this mechanical island? How many people are there? This still needs to be mentioned. Also, the scope of the protagonist's activities is still too small. He usually sells fish in a fish shop, and then goes to a place to compete in fighting fish. In the middle, he also went to a boss's house to make a piece of evil meat. Now that the protagonist is quite powerful, the map should be expanded a bit. The size of the map is actually just enough. I don't know if the author has read the first sequence of novels. The map in this novel is not big, but the protagonist's experience of wandering through various barriers is very interesting. The following is my personal opinion: Let's put aside the Evil God thing for now and write less. It's too supermodel. I'll save this setting for later and pick it up later. It's too early now. It also looks like the protagonist's golden finger is rubbish. Just one Evil God destroyed it. Reading novels is just for fun, and this is especially true for Qidian. Many readers of Qidian want to destroy gods and Buddhas and destroy the world, so it is very important to feel happy. It is best to start to feel happy within a few chapters. The plot of yours where the protagonist fights those superpowers was super cool. Also, it can't just be the protagonist fighting and competing with fishes, that would be too dry. There should also be some daily activities, which can't be either fighting or on the way to fight. If you are not sure about writing about women (you can write about Shen Youchu, a gentle and strong heroine who is dedicated to you, pulls out and gives out sweets from time to time, the main line is fish farming ), you can write about some delicious food and the beautiful scenery of the seabed. After all, no matter how dangerous the seabed is, it is beautiful. Taking the time to write some humanity can be added to make the novel more real. The world of the protagonist has developed to this extent, so the future technology can also be described. Cyberpunk is very popular now, with mechanical arms, mechanically modified fish and beasts, laser cannons, mechas, exoskeletons, Mewtwo, virtual technology, etc. In addition to machinery, you can also write about biological things, such as biochemically modified humans, biochemical beasts, and even cyborgs. This is definitely possible, because dragons have come out, and people cannot not want to attribute power to themselves. In addition, the strength of the protagonist cannot be suppressed, and it cannot be weakened even if it is given good things. Moreover, as soon as the protagonist upgrades, there will be a bunch of people stronger than the protagonist. It is like updating the version, a matryoshka doll. The main character has always been the weak one. And since you have written about fish masters, there will definitely be other superpowers. Currently, we only see animal-like superpowers. There are more other types, so that the sparks of superpowers can collide. The protagonist does not have to just guard his fish shop, but can go out and see the world, and understand the glory and darkness of human nature. The protagonist's abilities are quite powerful now. You can give him some interesting and good things that will not affect his strength, such as nano armor, which is so handsome, or give the protagonist some interesting superpowers, such as the ability to produce a liquid to treat wounds of himself and others. The effect is good, but the side effect is that it has an effect similar to Viagra, which is a funny contrast. You can also change the fish of the protagonist. You can check Baidu. The ocean is the largest area in the world. There are many kinds of fish. You can make some fish with interesting abilities, and you can also provide the protagonist with some interesting abilities, such as mutated electric eels that can live in the sea, or fish beasts that can breathe fire. I don't know if you have played some games that raise mutant fish. You can learn from the settings of fish in those games. They are very interesting. Today's fish are still too ordinary. Except for the protagonist's fish, they have no superpowers and can only bite with their teeth. Oh, by the way, the author didn't write about whether animals on land still exist. Is there any land creatures being raised on this mechanical island? It should be possible, otherwise it would be a little less fun. Well, the above are all my personal opinions, I hope they can be helpful to the author.

Don't just mess with the evil gods. I'm speechless.

It can be said that the beginning is bright, and it is a good book. However, a piece of evil meat comes in the middle, which directly brings the book down to a level. It is estimated that many people do not like this plot, and dozens of chapters were written at once... The background of the era is not clear, I only know that it is a water world, and I will briefly introduce it. The plot of The Evil God almost exhausted my patience. I was a little disappointed, and I didn't want to continue reading the rest. I hope the author can write it well. This is also a personal opinion and does not represent the public. Some people may just like to watch this.

Alas, this book ended up not going any further, which is really a pity, but I can't help it. As a reader, I can see that my performance in writing novels is too poor. The author can't write for love, right? He still has to live. Actually, I have already seen signs that this novel is unreadable. It can be seen from the following chapters that the plot is a bit too bland, and there is a big problem with the rhythm. The key lies in the evil meat lump. The plot is not interesting, and it takes too many chapters, causing many readers to run away (in fact, I don't like it either). After that, the plot started to get on the right track, but there were not many people left. I hope the author of the next novel can learn from the lesson and get better results. I am a big talker, both in life and on the Internet. I can't help but talk a lot to others, but I don't have many friends in life. If I talk too much to those friends, they will get annoyed. I can see that, so I love to comment on the Internet. To be honest, I have written many, many comments on many novels. Some authors are willing to pay attention to me, and some do not care to pay attention to me. Author, you are the first person to reply to every comment I make. I was very touched. At that time, I thought, no matter how bad your novel is, I would just blame you as the author, so I followed you. Later, after reading your novel, I discovered that your writing style is actually very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, at least that's what I think. If I were to write a novel like yours, I still wouldn't be able to write it, but it's a pity that something went wrong in the plot. I don't know what genre the author plans to write in his next novel. I suggest that you can learn from the masters of this genre and grasp the rhythm well to avoid collapse. As long as I see the next novel, I will definitely read it! I will support you when the time comes. As for novels, few become gods in just one novel. They all need to be tempered. This one is not well written, so the next one will avoid its shortcomings. Well, that's all. Finally, to borrow a sentence from Truman: If I never see you again, I wish you good morning, good afternoon, and good night. Goodbye (´▽｀)ノ♪

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It feels a bit confusing. For example, the era background is not clear, and the power system is not mentioned. I only know that it is a water world, and nothing else is known.

In fact, I feel that this book is quite well written, at least I am interested in it. I can only say that it is a pity. It would be interesting to dig deeper. I just saw it in the recommendation today and read it in one go. The author said that there is no more, which is really depressing🥺

Faster, faster, faster, faster, faster, faster

When will we figure out the characters? Otherwise, the post will not be posted to the fan creation category😢

Look at beautiful women

I recommend the author to read the comic Doomsday Zeguo for inspiration.

Dingding, it's still too little and not enough to watch 😆

It's a pity that I didn't feel like I had a good grasp of the rhythm of the novel. Personally, I prefer to read about the daily life with the pet beasts. The subsequent plot made me feel very boring and boring. Take your time, I will read the next one, come on. The author is still very good.

When hairtail is changing books, you should also pay attention to your health.

The author's writing is so good. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will become a master.

Will the little black fish look like this

Women in the action team can't do it! End it early or it will be useless

Retro pretentious face-slapping text 🙄

Writing so many chapters for one game is also a talent