
Black Technology: Starting with a Time Machine
黑科技:从时间机器开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 141k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Couldn't the author let the protagonist create a material-making machine, like the one in the movie that can be 3D printed and make food directly from atoms? In this way, there is no need to waste the original point in making food.
We know that humans can only live for seven days without eating anything. I just want to ask how the protagonist can live for ten days without eating.
That black technology book: starting with the space jumping machine, the beginning is too high, so it is difficult to write without rich imagination, and it is easier to collapse.
This book completely copies the book Jumping from Space 🙂
I didn't want to watch it when I saw that I wasn't the only one who time traveled.
I still hope that technology will guide the plot, and it won't be like the space jumping machine that is empty at the end and the plot is inserted suddenly. If your technological leap is too big, it will be difficult for people to accept it. At least there must be a process.
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The author, you modeled it on another book called Space Shuttle. The outline is almost the same.
This one is a little less interesting than the space jumping machine one. The actual reading of this book is black technology + apocalypse + aid to the Communist Party (a small number and very restrictive and cannot be freely written), and novels with similar themes are quite common, so this book lacks a uniqueness. There are only a few descriptions of the space roaming before Jump Machine was released on the shelves. The closest one is probably the beginning of the book "Rebirth of the Super Battleship", which is why many people expressed pity in the comment area. Super battleships probably began to collapse when level 5 civilizations and alien beasts appeared. It can be said that the author's knowledge and cognition were not good enough, and the hard writing turned into a fantasy trap. The starting point is also a copy of "Live Broadcast: Exploring and Surviving on Living Planets", which is a copy of a jump machine. The author of that book has little knowledge, and the alien life he writes is quite childish, especially the extremely poisonous silicon-based life before the eunuch. The collapse of the above three books all began with the description of advanced intelligent alien life. I don't understand why you always want to write about the appearance of intelligent creatures in advanced alien civilizations? When the level is not good enough, hard writing will only shape it very low and become a poisonous point. Super Battleship and a lot of other sci-fi online stories about aliens are written all over again by earthlings. To say the least, your supporting character creation is pretty bad. Most online writers would be good if they could create a protagonist character. Even Liu Da Liu did not dare to write directly or write too much about the Three-Body Problem. In it, advanced civilizations such as the Zeros only mentioned their actions sideways. The Three-Body Problem only contains dialogues and descriptions of technology in the entire article, and does not appear directly. It is impossible to understand what the three parts look like. Only in this way can the high-level alien civilization be maintained. In fact, the space jumping machine can completely reproduce the plot of random jumping + exploration + live broadcast before it is released for three to five hundred chapters. No living creatures of advanced alien civilization will appear (only inanimate ruins will appear). Don't always think about the background setting on the circle. I've read the system documentation, but I'm still confused about where the system came from? Does it matter? Are we here to see how you compiled the system? You think it's better for the rebooter to appear in the middle, but as a reader, I think it's better to appear in the last dozens of chapters and end it. It seems that your view of the subject matter and focus of the book is different from what readers think. Take a look at which part of the plot has the highest evaluation in the Jump Machine comment section. To be honest, I wanted to write a book myself ヽ(  ̄д ̄;)ノ But I didn't have time.
The writing is not bad, but the title of the book is very similar to a studio novel, which makes it difficult to attract people to come in. Come on, author!
Reading on Tuesday is very important. I beg you book lovers to see the latest chapter after Tuesday's update. Please irrigate me hard, the author kneels down to thank you.