My Employees Are Inhumane

How should I put it, I feel that the writing style and narrative logic need to be strengthened. The connection between some contents of the novel is not very clear. When reading, you should stop and think about why it is written in this way. It will feel like a "drama" and the plot is incoherent. Also, Zhang Yi's character needs to be more "mature". There are no bright spots now, and his performance in the face of crisis is nothing outstanding. He is completely incomparable to the previous Zhao Ke. With his temperament, I don't think he can survive or even benefit in more dangerous situations in the future. This is also the reason why I don't want to call him the protagonist, because his performance is not worthy yet, it is completely satisfactory. Also, Zhang Yi didn't go too deep into some of Uncle Zeng's suggestions for the massage parlor he inherited. For example, he should be more or less aware of Uncle Zeng's unusualness, etc. Otherwise, why would he be outstanding? Why can you survive? Why can we go from chess piece to chess player? It's not that the protagonist must be extraordinary, but there are too many ordinary people. If you want to be the protagonist, you must be different from most people. The above is the opinion of a book friend who has read many books on Shui. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

I have ordered and read every one of your books. Each book is well written, don't give up, keep working hard.

I'm quite disappointed. Come on, brother.

Talk about your feelings about this book so far 1: This book now has something of its own, unlike Aunt Shui's previous books, where many things have the shadow of others. Now Aunt Shui is evolving, and after learning other people's things, she writes her own things 2: Regarding the feelings about the plot, the suspense in the story is not particularly strong, but the panic at the beginning can basically be rated as a 9, and the beginning is tense and exciting. 3: As for the description of the characters, it is still too short and cannot be clearly drawn. Uncle Zeng has two problems now. One is when he first came here, he said he was looking for something, and then Zhang Shulai ran away and asked his son (the protagonist) to come find him. At present, I personally tend to think that Uncle Zeng is most likely a big BOSS behind the scenes, and Father Zhang may have been coerced. , And then the description of the supporting characters, the little water ghost's character description is very good. I personally think it is the supporting character with the most vivid character description except the postman's supporting character (Brother Qiu). I also have a comment here. The author's second novel is actually not as good as Postman. Zhao Ke is brought to life in Postman, which may be the reason why everyone has a dark side. Above, I wish Aunt Shui to write better and better.

Great! Aunt Shui finally released a new book (crawling with excitement) Maybe it can be linked with the previous ones? The protagonist looks like a pure and normal person this time. Finally, attach the photo of the author wearing women's clothing (please add it to me! Just This is not enough! Enough! Look!)

It's a new book, it's written slowly, so please bear with me. Due to the new era, it is not convenient to add updates, but I will try my best to update it after it is put on the shelves. Also, please read more and I will update it this morning.

I looked at the introduction and then looked at the number of update days emmm...

The writing, plot and Xiaolong air conditioner are even better than them. Why is it not popular? Try another editor. Do you not recommend it?

Came here because of fame, but turned out to be a eunuch🤔

What is a slap in the face🙂

A eunuch? 😰

It is recommended to stop updating for 2 months😴😴😴😐😐

It's not that your writing is not good. I compared it to your first novel. Is this one still not good? ! What kind of happiness, don't think about it randomly, writing skills and popularity need to be accumulated. How long has Xiaolong been writing? How long have you been writing for? As long as you work hard and write carefully, readers can see it. By the way, I have also read the novels ranked first and second on the list. Some of the writing is really poor. It is similar to the writing of your first novel. The key is that it is still good! At least you can write conscientiously without being bad at it. So, are the first and second on the list just for money?

Everything has been different since I inherited this massage parlor! Published by Guoshui, it must be a high-quality product. Three high-quality books have been completed, with tens of millions of words accumulated. Please feel free to invest and give a lot of monthly votes. (Classified as eunuch)

Came here because of fame, but turned out to be a eunuch

4 monthly passes and 3 recommended, steal other book stamps to support you

How is this book? Can anyone tell me. I was a little disappointed at the end of the last book, so I stopped reading it.

Come on! Huangquan is really beautiful

People like me can't read this kind of book about father's kindness and son's filial piety. When I read it, I remembered how people in my family treated me in the past. Now I am so resentful that I want to kill them all.

Why don't we just write about the main protagonist? This kind of group portrait is too relaxed and I don't have much desire to read it.

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By the way, I usually don't sign casually, and sometimes it must happen in my life.

Have you had enough rest? Where's the new book?😃