I Have a House in Huangquan

The back is not as beautiful as the front. It doesn't feel as good as the front. I even wonder if someone else wrote the back. It's not on the same level at all.

When can the postman come out of the dark room?

In fact, the previous writings were quite good and very immersive. However, after fifteen years of writing novels, I now feel that it is becoming more and more wordy and lacks a sense of immersion. The real fallen spirit master feels too delayed, grinding, and the plot is too scattered. I hope the author can listen to it.

Is your book blocked again?

It looks a bit disgusting. The war also says that women are not allowed to kill children. The main character wants to cut the grass and root out the roots but is not decisive and hesitant in doing things. It is very disgusting.

Is your book blocked again?

If there were no emotional scenes, driving would be pretty good, but the emotional scenes rely on it. In addition to the emotional drama, it is not even enough for me. It is a good world structure, but it is a pity I am very curious about what kind of person the author's girlfriend is in reality. Is it the same as in the novel? That's really fun, best wishes

There are too few on the shelves! Subscribing chapter by chapter is too much trouble. Just click and click...

Come on, if you don't get a 404, order it all! ! !

I really don't want to keep up with the update... Good books, but too few... Just

Please comment on my debut novel. If something is not done well, please forgive me.

It's a very good book, but maybe it's because I read too many mythological novels, and I don't really agree with physical intervention in the underworld. But aside from this, it's still a good book. People who don't mind the above points can read it.

Another level 5 cute newbie? Let's take a look first. What books were there before? All gone?

The homepage attracted people, and it was very unpleasant to read the comments. I read the novel myself. I was the first physical novel of Western fantasy in the first grade of junior high school. It has been ten years since I graduated from college. The only solution to banning this thing is the rating system. However, the game rating has been delayed for more than ten years since it was proposed, not to mention the novel.

Ahem. Dear gentlemen. Ask. Who is Cheung Po Tsai! ! ! This name sounds familiar

Boss, I'm really scared now. I'm going to lose it after watching it. Can you create a flame group?

Wu Cao, I was disgusted. I had a wife before, and then I pretended to my lover in my previous life that I was me, not the one in my previous life. Not long after the incident, I got a girl and came home, saying that I would be my sister. Later, my wife gave birth, and when I took the child back to my parents' home, I suddenly found that I and the lover in my previous life were true love, and the marriage line was tied. I regret that I ordered everything. I can't stand it anymore. I want my money back.

This is the worst level 5 author I have ever seen. Damn it, why didn't I finish the last ten chapters of the last book? What a pity (✪▽✪)

Today in a book review, I saw someone mentioning the work "The God of Data" written by Guo Shui when he first entered the sea. This surprised me. After all, it is one of the novels that Guo Shui rarely completes, and it has not been 404 or unfinished! As someone who has been following the first novel of Crossing the Water, this is a rare memory! After all, Guo Shui has really changed several styles. Of course, Guo Shui's first novel at that time was a real kindergarten car. Unlike now, when you don't go to kindergarten to get on the car, you have to weld the upper and lower doors. I am very curious, how many people have read the book "Data Gods".

I saw the main character's child being born, and then the content started to get disgusting. Generally speaking, it is said that the wife takes the child back to her parents' home, and then goes out with the mistress, and then finds out that she and the mistress are true love. It makes me sick! Turn things upside down! ! !

I! Dark dust! Fat is coming!ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ Although I don't seem to have time to watch Ako..._(´ཀ` ∠)__

It's fun to drive occasionally, but you can't wait to drive every time. It's really too low for us female readers. You shouldn't be at the starting point. I feel that Haitang is more suitable for you to play.

Today I pulled Guo Shui out to criticize and educate him. He deeply realized his mistake and planned to publish the essence in the book review after the third update today. In line with the principle of not criticizing for nothing, everyone should seize the time to post some book reviews and share the essence! By the way, I heard that today and tomorrow will be the third update. How many days will it take to prepare for the daily third update? ? ? ? ? ? ? Whether this news is true or false remains to be verified. ps: Guo Shui said that he did not deliberately break the text.

I felt extremely uncomfortable looking at that cat In the follow-up, I still washed the cat clean. Looking at the previous plot, in each copy, the protagonist was moved by others and then had compassion to save others. But have you ever thought about this cat's red high heels that killed a group of soldiers? Why is there no protagonist having compassion here? Some people must say that those soldiers were not killed by the cat but by the high heels. Just like the emperor of my aunt country launched a war of aggression against China, even though the emperor did not personally kill the Chinese people, does it mean that he has nothing to do with it? It's the relationship between cats and high heels. Maybe I am too immersed in watching it. I really hate something. No matter what it does, it is extremely boring and the more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. Can I kill this cat in the future? It is best to torture it to death 🙂

I don't understand why most authors set the protagonists in their books to hide from the country. Isn't it good that you have the ability to contribute to the country?

The highlight of this book is that the character of the protagonist is too poor. He is just stupid and has no thoughts at all. He relies entirely on the connections left by his grandfather and a large group of big guys behind him. The fighting scenes are even more unbearable. It is better to let Wan Zhi be the protagonist. It would be great if Wan Zhi's character is applied to the protagonist.

You were quite good as a single female lead, but at the end you took away Chai Rong. It really disgusted me. You gave birth to other children, but you cheated on me. It was really poisonous.

I can't stand it when I see the author forcefully explaining the difference between wontons and wontons. It's like seeing someone say that the atomic bomb was made by rubbing it with my shit hand at home. It's also like the battle between sweet and salty tofu. No matter how you add the ingredients, it's all tofu. So, do you think it's uncomfortable to watch?

This book started to collapse as soon as it left the safe zone and went to Paradise Island. The plot jumps too fast and the characters appear too frequently. As for the plot introduction, it does not exist at all. I can say that no one except the author himself understands how the plot development happened, what he experienced, and how it ended. The characters are entirely created by the readers themselves, and they forget who is who if they are not careful.

I've read Chapter 248. The character of the protagonist created by the author is very weak. Generally speaking, he is weaker than ordinary people. Without cheats, he is basically a useless person. A heroic grandpa cultivates a weakling. I don't know how the plot will develop in the future, so I'll watch it slowly.