Bronze Slave

The writing is very good. I suggest you write it slower. The plot of the novel is too fast. I look forward to more updates.

From the first-person perspective, almost no one would watch it at the starting point.

First person, the protagonist's name is also slightly abstract

After reading a little bit, I think it's okay. It just doesn't seem to be very popular, which is a shame. Wo thought of a way to make this book available to more readers. Wowei: CCJCCJ129

To be honest, this is a kind of hydrology, and there are currently no popular books on the market.

I feel like I can write 400,000 yuan. It's so strong. I get dizzy half way through writing original things, so I plan to start with fanfics...🤭 I saw it on a writing website! Good, the title of the book is quite interesting

First person, do you think this is disgusting?