Reborn: Starting at the Fish Stall

Alas, my tolerance for novels with systems is getting lower and lower. I used to be able to endure reading them, but now I can't stand them with introductions and systems.

If you don't look at Sun Tzu's Art of War to sell fish, you're missing the point.

Is what you write about business or HSH? He was robbed just a few chapters into the book. What happened to that family came out later? Does it have anything to do with you? You can just live your life well if you are reborn and cheated.

Pig's Knuckle was reborn, his power became stronger, and he also had a system. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that he is not as powerful as Gao Qiqiang.

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and the plot of tripping up the mistress is the longest I have ever read. It is too slow to advance the plot. I think the plot you wrote is very different from your introduction. I was attracted by your introduction and now I am so dissatisfied after reading the chapters. The protagonist is more than ten years older than the heroine in his previous life and this life. His social experience, dealing with people, and perspective on things cannot be squeezed to death by a girl under the age of eighteen. Perhaps the author, who is still under thirty, looks at things a little too idealistically.

There is no obvious thread. Now that writing becomes a case-breaking text, you can't sell fish properly, upgrade, make money... And spiral forward all the way? The protagonist must be killed by others over and over again, but the murderer cannot be caught, and he goes around in circles. Headache. It is recommended to remove murders, write less about women, and make money honestly. Reopening is the right way.

There is a system, and all kinds of trivial things can't be solved. The bloody pretense is constantly slapped in the face, and the perspective is really low.

Fighting with a mistress is too protracted. I'm afraid I'll have to write 50 chapters just for this plot.

I'm just writing within the framework of Cyclonus, why not write directly as a fan, which will give me a stronger sense of substitution.

What are the things that Qidian recommends? I can't even finish the three chapters.