Wu Dong: the Investment Was Returned, Qingtan Was Moved to Tears!

If you haven't read the original work, then don't write the work, okay? It is obvious that the Nirvana realm comes after the three realms of creation. If you don't know, just don't write about it, okay? Can you read the original work before writing it?

That doesn't make sense. There might be three realms of creation in just one small town? Even if there is a Formation Realm that can look down on this poor place, there are three Creation Realms. The Creation Realm is a strong one in a small place like Dayan. Would they come to a place like this? Listen to his orders from a useless family whose only strength is Yuan Dan? This seems to be a text produced by a studio, without reading some of the dirty things in the original work.

Nirvana comes and goes, and creation is a bit messy. Nirvana can't create Qi.

I only read a few chapters, and Tang Yun, Tang Tian, ​​and Tang Shan appeared. What is the name of the protagonist?

Lu Yuan Nirvana, an outer disciple of Dao Zong, you tell me that you don't even have combat experience, and you can't beat a casual cultivator without cheating.

I don't mean to scold you, but what the hell did you write? No wonder there aren't many chapters in the comments. I suggest you study more before re-opening a new book, otherwise you will waste your time.

The first protagonist's starting strength is wrong. At the beginning, the protagonist said that the system needs to look at the qualifications of the investment targets. That's why the protagonist comes out of the loose gate. So the protagonist shouldn't be able to improve his strength so quickly. But the protagonist starts with Six-Yuan Nirvana, and the second protagonist just gives away resources when he sees people, without any reason. And no one else has the slightest doubt. How could there be a mirror of creation in the third town? Not even that Yancheng.

Why don't you just put the first one on the shelves?