
True Spirit Taoist Master
真灵道主
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- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Pure and simple writing, with sticks and hammers here and there, whatever you want, you will find what you lack, and you will have four days to plan your back-up before ascending. My wife and apprentice are both in the next semester, and the writing is as if it was a joke! This huge breakthrough would be like a joke, if it weren't for the fact that no one would even read it!
Grass jelly settings, details of hay
According to the author's setting, the male protagonist should be a firm and cautious person, but when written, the male protagonist's mental state is like having a convulsion. The most unbearable thing is to let two handyman disciples be the stewards of the dojo, taking charge of the inner disciples. They have always emphasized that the cultivation of monks is the most important. Then they turn around and let two people who have no cultivation level of Qi training take care of a bunch of late-stage Qi training. These two weak scum have no close relationship with the male protagonist. This is just like the current chairman of a large group, who hired female students who graduated from third-rate universities and had no work experience to be the general manager and deputy general manager. These two female students are not relatives of the chairman, but just two passers-by, just because they look sensible. Isn't it nonsense?
Also, with more people, you can win the battle against the gods and the gods. To paraphrase the Illustrated Book of Destruction of Luck, if more people are useful, then why are you cultivating immortals and seeking truth?
First, if you are on the fourth level of Qi training and exchange for resources with a century-old elixir, it is considered a small poison. There is no need to take this risk. Second, it's too fast, the upgrade is too fast. Even brothers, if they see how fast you suddenly upgrade, they will try to get rid of you. What's more, with the interest relationship in the sect, especially those from big families, they are all superficial brothers. How can they not get rid of you at this speed of upgrade? Thirdly, there are two top-level foundation-building pills, which are enough with the three spiritual roots. If you have to exchange a few unilateral ones, what kind of factions are there? With your resources and foundation-building pills, when the time comes to build the foundation, what are you afraid of? Others won't think, you just need the Foundation Establishment Pill. If you don't donate it, will you still have the Foundation Establishment Pill? Isn't this asking for death? In the end, I didn't have a foundation-building pill, so I had to take risks. If I didn't practice hard, I would join a so-called faction, even the ancestors couldn't protect me. I was targeted, and they wanted to kill me. There were too many poisonous points.
Call him stubborn, he dares to sell the elixir directly instead of finding a spiritual fruit or other seeds to eat himself. He doesn't write like a person who dares to fight. It feels like he is always on the way to have a seizure.
I feel that the male protagonist is also single-minded. He knows that the hundred-year-old elixir cannot be eaten directly, and you must be careful in trading. You can grow some spiritual fruit tea, which can be eaten directly, or you can exchange and sell it to enjoy life.
There is nothing we can do about the book shortage
That is to say, there is a shortage of books. Otherwise, I really can't stand it. I'm full of complaints and I don't know what to say.
You, a little trash in the Qi training period, dare to contribute the foundation-building pill. It is still necessary for you. Why don't you contribute the ten thousand-year elixir? You almost lost it just to get some junk. If the protagonist hadn't been gone long ago, and you don't have so many resources to turn into your own strength, others will take risks because they don't have money or resources. Also, at the fifth level of Qi training, he achieved the pinnacle of Qi training. With just one high-grade talisman and a high-grade magic weapon, the corresponding cultivation level of others is a top-grade magic weapon and a talisman. If you use dozens or dozens of high-grade talismans to kill him, it will be okay. You are just a piece of garbage at the fifth level of Qi training.
I can't accept using water to make elixirs. It has to be special. If you don't have the fire spirit root, you can't make elixirs. If you have the gold spirit root, you can't practice with water. Water has the lowest power, can't attack, and can't defend. After practicing Qi, you have been practicing the whole body. I'm convinced. Using water to make elixirs is very discouraging. Besides, why do you use an alchemy furnace for water training? Even if you use an alchemy furnace, it must be different from the one used for fire training. It's the same one. It's invincible.
Can you be more tactful, tactful and logical?
If you want to write about the protagonist taking the devil's path and cultivating ghosts, can you write that he got it from evil cultivation and suddenly went straight to practice ghost arts? It's inexplicable Also, you only have two foundation-building pills in total, which are medium-grade three spiritual roots. How can you 100% guarantee that you can build the foundation? Even if you give away the remaining pieces after building the foundation, it won't seem so abrupt. Also, how "precious" is a Foundation Establishment Pill worth two thousand spirit stones? Can you actually make a real Jin Dan worry? 👍 Is it so "precious" that it's worth two thousand spirit stones? 🤭I thought it was two thousand middle-grade spiritual stones, but it actually made Master Jindan worried🤫
Normal people can earn millions of dollars a day (a hundred-year elixir), but they still go out to fight for money (cave exploration)?
Redeem the skills, there are thousands of righteous spells You still have a choice Well, the protagonist chose to control ghosts and engage in ghost banners
If I wrote about the Tiannan Forbidden Land because I wanted to participate in this secret realm later, then the logic of this book would collapse. The protagonist now lacks everything, including identity, skills, spiritual stones, and foundation-building pills. All he needs to do next is to steadily improve. If under such circumstances, he still needs to take big risks to participate in such a thing, it really doesn't make sense logically.
Only the protagonist's halo is alive.
Before the plug-in was put in place, he practiced Qi at the third level in five years; after the plug-in was put in place, he practiced at the sixth level in less than a year, and by the way became a first-level high-grade alchemist. As for the others, they all looked like they didn't care about the small chance. They were so arrogant and wanted to peacefully cultivate the world of immortality!
What is the purpose of giving away the Foundation Establishment Pill? What is the urgent need for this pig's foot? Is life or death at stake? A foundation-building pill that even the pill-forming boss couldn't get easily after handing it in? After getting 3 pill prescriptions and 1,000 contributions, do you still think you're not losing money? It has been 5 years since I started pig trotters, and I have accumulated 190 contributions at the 3rd level of Qi training. This 1,000 contributions is so valuable.
Prices are a bit high. A 500-year-old Ganoderma lucidum can be sold for 3,500. A foundation-building pill also requires a 500-year-old main medicine. With so many auxiliary medicines, the finished product only sells for 2,000. Even if it is a few pills, it is unreasonable. Also, there is too much nonsense in the fighting plot, which is too long-winded.
I don't want to see the Ghost Control Technique anymore when I see it!
It's a failure that this spirit liquid can upgrade Oniwu. Too versatile. Why don't you drink it? It's easy to upgrade.
Goldfinger still has a three-year contract. Even if you get the Foundation Establishment Pill, hand it over. Goldfinger is tens of thousands of times more powerful than Han Laomo, but the author and protagonist are useless. Awesome, so many useful things, but still a waste. The realm is the same as that of a turtle, and there are many plots that are similar to those of a mentally retarded person.
Why don't authors who write fairy tales think about some magical skills or magic powers that have a bit of fairy spirit? It's too awkward to compare with games and Western magic.
Good book, keep updating, I will definitely 🔥
Blue water wheel?
Among the gangster-style cultivators, he is the one who has been promoted the fastest. He reached the stage of becoming a god when he was about 200 years old. Although it is a short story, it is very enjoyable to read and there is no depressing plot 😁
I don't understand the delineation of this world without thunder tribulation. Aren't there as many Nascent Souls as dogs?
Now I just have to deal with it. I am really not motivated to write. Is there any difference between not writing?
It feels like the male protagonist is either fighting or on the way to fight.
This book has too many over-the-top fights
It's a good book, not a cool book
It's well written, but it's too bland, not exciting enough, not exciting enough, what a pity!