Dragon Raja: Starting as Yamata No Orochi

Everyone can criticize all they want, but can you please not be in such a hurry to swipe away? Two people have already said that the comments section gave it too high a rating, and then they were disappointed! I… Sigh 😔 Why can't we just ignore the comments and approach this with a casual attitude, like, "Since we're already here, let's finish reading the first volume first, it's free anyway"?

Personally, I feel that this author's writing is more "authentic" than "modified". What is commendable is that he added various different concepts or operating methods without changing the nature of the original thing. There were no techniques or expressive methods used to further emphasize the storytelling aspect. The original characteristics are modified.

Meaningless affectation and nonsense

If the author continues writing like this, then it's time to say goodbye. Why write it so frustratingly? Forcibly suppressing the protagonist's strategic abilities. And constantly focusing on the actions of supporting characters. What I want to see isn't an ensemble piece, but the interaction between the protagonist and the female lead, and their resistance against the Black King.

That's right. The second volume was satisfying, but the third volume started suppressing the protagonist. The White King, who can rival the Black King, plus a fully-formed Hela, wouldn't dare to go toe-to-toe with a fully-formed Odin (there are only three after Li Wuyue swallowed Leviathan). I really don't understand this power system.

Whatever happens, just please don't have Chen Motong and Chen Wenwen as the female lead.

Let me reiterate! The character Xiaoxiao is not my original creation; she is a character from the original work. She is the twin sister of Luoye, and they are known as the "Xuexiao Twin Blades". She's not the female lead, but I'll give this character a significant and memorable role! Okay? I'm showing her pictures to make it more vivid! She plays a role in my writing, which can't be changed.

To be honest, in my opinion, this book is better written than many novels, and the characters are more vividly portrayed. Compared to other Dragon Raja fanfiction, this book does share many similarities with Jiang Nan in style and feel. For readers who dislike mindless wish-fulfillment stories, this book is indeed a relatively good choice among Dragon Raja fanfiction.

Is this author using an alternate account? This book is truly a gem. With such a wonderful writing style, it shouldn't remain unknown. 😆

Good news: The author's writing style is quite good, with a strong Jiangnan flavor. The bad news: It's 2023 now, and the old Jiangnan style is outdated and considered antique.