Dragon Raja: Starting as Yamata No Orochi

Everyone is scolding me, can you please stop rushing away? Two people have already said that the review in the comment section is too high, and then they are disappointed! I... Oh😔 Can't we just stop reading the comments and read it with a normal mind of "I'm here now, let's read the first volume first, it doesn't cost any money anyway"? And I swear, I never asked trolls to cheat in the comment area! Otherwise eunuch!

Personally, I feel that the "original flavor" written by this author is greater than the secondary processing. But what is commendable is that he added various different concepts or operating methods without changing the nature of the original thing. There is no way to better reflect this story, expression technique and expressiveness. Let the original characteristics be transformed. The essential value of the characteristics is not allowed to become, that is, changed, dominated, reduced to a vassal, and embodied. Completely let the feature itself play its role, let the feature itself find a carrier to play, instead of placing it in a certain position, how much role can it play by itself. This gave me the feeling that he did not throw away the principles in order to meet the plot, but that the characters just used them. Maybe he just used it that way, but this novel maintains its original purity and characteristics far better than most fans. In order to cater to the plot, one has to cut off a piece of one's own characteristics and personality and be transformed. It is better to become the character itself, or the characteristics, there is no carrier that is consistent with it, and it is at the expense of oneself to use this carrier that is not consistent with it. This method is used to fine-tune and arrange the intersection and handover of the plot. Of course, you can also set it directly, create the character directly, and block and hand over hard. Then, no matter how harmonious and compatible the framework itself is, I don't feel how excellent it is. How can a toy be said to be excellent?

Meaningless pretentiousness and nonsense

If the author keeps writing like this, he can only say goodbye. Why do you have to write so frustratedly? Forcibly suppress the protagonist's strategic power. I always write about the behavior of supporting characters. What I want to see is not the group portrait, but the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine and their resistance to the Black King. If you read it now, the writing is too watery. The scenes are always cut without highlighting the core, and the actions of supporting characters are always used to advance the plot. However, your updates are too few, which makes the reading experience incoherent and not very good.

You're right. The second volume was great. The third volume started to press the protagonist again. The White King who can stand alongside the Black King plus a complete Hela dare not go toe-to-toe with a complete Odin (only three after swallowing Leviathan and Li Wuyue). I really don't understand this combat power system.

No matter what, don't have Chen Motong and Chen Wenwen as the heroines.

Let me declare it again! The character Xiao Bei is not my original work. It is a character in the original work. She and the twin sisters Luo Ye are called "Xue Bei Dual Swords". She is not the heroine, but I will give this character a strong stroke! OK or not? Picture her just to make it more vivid! She plays a role in my article and cannot be changed. I don't like to change the original work. So what else is it called Dragon Clan? In "Dragon 3", the character that impressed me the most was not Eri, Sakura, or Sakurai Kogure, but Aso Makoto! This is Aso Makoto who died tragically in a dream and was left in the corner with an understatement! The role of Xiaozi has her role, otherwise what? Who should I use my knife to bring out the cold-bloodedness of the "dragon"? Eriyi? Shutoku Aki? Come on, come on, tell me, I promise to be the "God of Nature"!

To be honest, in my opinion, the writing style of this book is better than many novels, and the characters are more vivid. Compared with other Dragon Clan fans, this article is indeed very similar to Jiangnan in style and feeling. For those readers who don't like to read mindless and cool articles, this book is indeed a relatively good choice for Dragon Clan fandom. But for me, the writing style of this article is generally relatively depressing compared to other fans. I think many people, like me, came to see Dragon Clan Fandom mostly because of the difficult feelings they felt back then. For me, when it comes to fan fiction, I prefer the rhythm and style to be more brisk, which can be a little brainless and more refreshing. To be honest, reading online novels, especially fan fiction, is just for fun. If it's all about writing and thinking, then it's better to go to the historical area, where some novels about intrigue are really exciting. In terms of writing style, this article is indeed at the forefront of the fandom, but there is also a common problem among so-called good writing people, which is literary youth disease. It's understandable if you're a little more literary, and it can indeed make the article more outstanding, but in my opinion, there are quite a few of these. This has resulted in the phenomenon that the book is full of major poisons but is constantly filled with minor poisons. Compared with other fanfics, the candy-giving in this book can only be said to be a gimmick, and it is not pleasant to post candy. There is a saying that a book or an article is actually exporting one's own values ​​​​to others, and its value lies in how much recognition it can gain. As the protagonist of this book is a Dragon King, I feel that he and Lu Mingfei are essentially similar people. It's just that he is more powerful and arrogant. But in essence, his sense of instability is the same as Lu Mingfei's, and his methods are even similar. For the protagonist, his mentality is more like that of an ordinary person than that of a king. On the one hand, he regards these girls as his taboos, but on the other hand, he wants to push them away. He is irresponsible when he puts on pants, giving people a feeling of being both incompetent and standing upright. He has never communicated with the girls around him, and always imposes his self-righteousness on each other. Not only does she want Eriri to go to a wider world, but she also gets jealous because of the slightest intimacy with other people. This kind of arrogance is really painful to watch. As a king, you should do something and not do something. If you want to raise the flag of rebellion, you should be prepared in all aspects and make various plans. If you lie down, you should at least create a relatively stable environment. While establishing a close relationship with them, he made decisions on his own, which made him feel awkward. To be honest, he was not like Wang at all. It's so pretentious, it's really uncomfortable to watch. In short, if you can accept the literary youth disease and a little bit of poison, this book is still a good dragon fanfic.

Is this author wearing a vest? This book can be called a fairy grass. With such a good writing style, it shouldn't be unknown😆

Good news: The author's writing style is good, and it has a very Jiangnan flavor Bad news: It is now 2023, and Jiangnan's style is outdated and has become an antique.