Dragon Clan, Starting from Yamata No Orochi

I can finally comment Let me ask questions I have accumulated 1. King Bai (Qin Pan) only knew the plot after a dream, but how did he know about netizens' fanfics? He couldn't rely on his spiritual authority to write fanfics on his own. 2. The plot between Jormungandr and the White Priest is that the White Priest defeated Jormungandr, and according to the original text, Jormungandr is similar to the status of a prisoner of war, but the White Priest, who has lived for tens of thousands of years, is accommodating her (it should be said that he is accommodating each other), but she is a prisoner of war. According to the original text, the White Priest dares to give power to humans, start a rebellion, and has been alone for thousands of years. It is impossible for him to accommodate a prisoner of war (maybe I didn't understand it, the author can express his own thoughts) 3. The plot of Eri Yi, her plot is a bit awkward. If you want to set her free, don't you have to let her become a normal person first? Eri didn't have enough common sense (this was evident when she observed the couple at Kassel Academy), so she was sent to Kassel to stay for a year. Even a king cannot ignore the facts, let alone master the spirit of the White King. 4. The protagonist's ambition is not clear. Lu Mingze even traded Lu Mingfei's life. The protagonist is always worried about the Supreme, thinking that he can't defeat him and then destroying him. I think this situation is no different from Ming Fei, who has no ambition and is very useless. Okay, that's it, I'm close to complaining (sorry) But I will still follow it. After all, the first volume has a grand scene and the characters are well drawn, so you can look forward to it

Very well written, keep it up. If possible, update it more. There are few books that I miss so much. The first paragraph is very amazing, at least that's what I personally feel. It is recommended that the previous characters be given more opportunities to appear. At present, it seems that only Xia Mi has a role.

Isn't there too few little monsters appearing later?

Everyone is scolding me, can you please stop rushing away? Two people have already said that the review in the comment section is too high, and then they are disappointed! I... Oh😔 Can't we just stop reading the comments and read it with a normal mind of "I'm here now, let's read the first volume first, it doesn't cost any money anyway"? And I swear, I never asked trolls to cheat in the comment area! Otherwise eunuch!

Personally, I feel that the "original flavor" written by this author is greater than the secondary processing. But what is commendable is that he added various different concepts or operating methods without changing the nature of the original thing. There is no way to better reflect this story, expression technique and expressiveness. Let the original characteristics be transformed. The essential value of the characteristics is not allowed to become, that is, changed, dominated, reduced to a vassal, and embodied. Completely let the feature itself play its role, let the feature itself find a carrier to play, instead of placing it in a certain position, how much role can it play by itself. This gave me the feeling that he did not throw away the principles in order to meet the plot, but that the characters just used them. Maybe he just used it that way, but this novel maintains its original purity and characteristics far better than most fans. In order to cater to the plot, one has to cut off a piece of one's own characteristics and personality and be transformed. It is better to become the character itself, or the characteristics, there is no carrier that is consistent with it, and it is at the expense of oneself to use this carrier that is not consistent with it. This method is used to fine-tune and arrange the intersection and handover of the plot. Of course, you can also set it directly, create the character directly, and block and hand over hard. Then, no matter how harmonious and compatible the framework itself is, I don't feel how excellent it is. How can a toy be said to be excellent?

Meaningless pretentiousness and nonsense

If the author keeps writing like this, he can only say goodbye. Why do you have to write so frustratedly? Forcibly suppress the protagonist's strategic power. I always write about the behavior of supporting characters. What I want to see is not the group portrait, but the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine and their resistance to the Black King. If you read it now, the writing is too watery. The scenes are always cut without highlighting the core, and the actions of supporting characters are always used to advance the plot. However, your updates are too few, which makes the reading experience incoherent and not very good.

You're right. The second volume was great. The third volume started to press the protagonist again. The White King who can stand alongside the Black King plus a complete Hela dare not go toe-to-toe with a complete Odin (only three after swallowing Leviathan and Li Wuyue). I really don't understand this combat power system.

No matter what, don't have Chen Motong and Chen Wenwen as the heroines.

Let me declare it again! The character Xiao Bei is not my original work. It is a character in the original work. She and the twin sisters Luo Ye are called "Xue Bei Dual Swords". She is not the heroine, but I will give this character a strong stroke! OK or not? Picture her just to make it more vivid! She plays a role in my article and cannot be changed. I don't like to change the original work. So what else is it called Dragon Clan? In "Dragon 3", the character that impressed me the most was not Eri, Sakura, or Sakurai Kogure, but Aso Makoto! This is Aso Makoto who died tragically in a dream and was left in the corner with an understatement! The role of Xiaozi has her role, otherwise what? Who should I use my knife to bring out the cold-bloodedness of the "dragon"? Eriyi? Shutoku Aki? Come on, come on, tell me, I promise to be the "God of Nature"!

To be honest, in my opinion, the writing style of this book is better than many novels, and the characters are more vivid. Compared with other Dragon Clan fans, this article is indeed very similar to Jiangnan in style and feeling. For those readers who don't like to read mindless and cool articles, this book is indeed a relatively good choice for Dragon Clan fandom. But for me, the writing style of this article is generally relatively depressing compared to other fans. I think many people, like me, came to see Dragon Clan Fandom mostly because of the difficult feelings they felt back then. For me, when it comes to fan fiction, I prefer the rhythm and style to be more brisk, which can be a little brainless and more refreshing. To be honest, reading online novels, especially fan fiction, is just for fun. If it's all about writing and thinking, then it's better to go to the historical area, where some novels about intrigue are really exciting. In terms of writing style, this article is indeed at the forefront of the fandom, but there is also a common problem among so-called good writing people, which is literary youth disease. It's understandable if you're a little more literary, and it can indeed make the article more outstanding, but in my opinion, there are quite a few of these. This has resulted in the phenomenon that the book is full of major poisons but is constantly filled with minor poisons. Compared with other fanfics, the candy-giving in this book can only be said to be a gimmick, and it is not pleasant to post candy. There is a saying that a book or an article is actually exporting one's own values ​​​​to others, and its value lies in how much recognition it can gain. As the protagonist of this book is a Dragon King, I feel that he and Lu Mingfei are essentially similar people. It's just that he is more powerful and arrogant. But in essence, his sense of instability is the same as Lu Mingfei's, and his methods are even similar. For the protagonist, his mentality is more like that of an ordinary person than that of a king. On the one hand, he regards these girls as his taboos, but on the other hand, he wants to push them away. He is irresponsible when he puts on pants, giving people a feeling of being both incompetent and standing upright. He has never communicated with the girls around him, and always imposes his self-righteousness on each other. Not only does she want Eriri to go to a wider world, but she also gets jealous because of the slightest intimacy with other people. This kind of arrogance is really painful to watch. As a king, you should do something and not do something. If you want to raise the flag of rebellion, you should be prepared in all aspects and make various plans. If you lie down, you should at least create a relatively stable environment. While establishing a close relationship with them, he made decisions on his own, which made him feel awkward. To be honest, he was not like Wang at all. It's so pretentious, it's really uncomfortable to watch. In short, if you can accept the literary youth disease and a little bit of poison, this book is still a good dragon fanfic.

Is this author wearing a vest? This book can be called a fairy grass. With such a good writing style, it shouldn't be unknown😆

Good news: The author's writing style is good, and it has a very Jiangnan flavor Bad news: It is now 2023, and Jiangnan's style is outdated and has become an antique.

After reading the introduction, I was looking forward to it and then was disappointed. It's a self-titled novel, with an abrupt turn, an exaggerated description of inner activities, and insufficient environmental rendering. The writing itself is okay, but the book club has raised people's expectations. When I look at it, the gap is too big. It may be a problem with the writing style. For children or book friends who don't read much, it may look okay.

However, it's okay if Nono's story line is deleted. Others' plots still have causes and consequences. The story lines of Nono and Chen Wenwen gave me the feeling that they were forced in to satisfy the author's desire to acquire a daughter. Nono's story line was forced to buy and sell, playing with other people's lives, but it itself amplified Long's desire and weakened the sense of absurdity. With this chapter, it would be better to add some daily life with Aki to make the other characters more clear. If I want to write Nono, I can keep Lu Mingfei's story line and add some life in the middle to make the plot run wild, instead of making Lu Mingfei look like a clown.

If you know the plot, you can't be tricked by others. Otherwise, you will feel useless if you assume the role of the protagonist. Or if you don't know the plot, just push it forward, just like the book Penetration of the Dragons. I don't care what your plot is, but if you can't figure it out, it is the real cool article 🙂

The White King launched the largest rebellion in the history of the Dragon Clan, and one-third of the Dragon Clan became rebels. After she betrayed the Black King, she used the Word Spirit Oracle on all her blood descendants. This was the only Word Spirit that could restrain the Word Spirit Emperor. When the White King rebelled, the Black King faced It was almost a disaster of genocide, because the Black King created an existence that was equal to himself and the only one that could challenge him; the White King deceived humans and promised to give them freedom after defeating the Black King, thus getting help from humans, but in the end the Black King still won. ——"The Fragment of the Sea of ​​Ice" I feel that the protagonist should not belittle himself and show that he can compete with the Supreme.

In fact, regarding the Dragon Clan, I have never been able to figure it out. How did the hybrid defeat the Dragon King? Dragon Kings can cancel each other's Word Spirits, which means they can also cancel the Word Spirits of hybrids. This means that the only things that Dragon Kings can use between them are physical combat and alchemy techniques. But when the Dragon King faces a hybrid, first of all, the Dragon King can use the Word Spirit, and can use the body to strengthen the Word Spirit, and has alchemy weapons, dragon subspecies servants, dragon attendants, dead attendants and corpse guards, as well as Nibo dragon root home battles, and bloodline suppression. After the mixed race enters the battlefield, it will first take a wave of bloodline judgments. This will directly make most people kneel, and the rest will be suppressed by bloodline. The road to becoming a god with violent blood can only bring people infinitely close to the pure-blooded dragons before it is completed, and maybe some of them are not as high as the bloodlines of those Deadpools. Can you, a hybrid, release word spirits and use alchemical weapons in the same way as a pure-blood dragon foot can use word spirits and alchemy weapons? You can't beat the Dragon King in physical combat. For the same enhanced speech spirit, your base value is 1, and then a hundred times the enhancement is 100. The Dragon King's base value is 100. Even if he strengthens it with the lowest quality by two, he is still 200. He can kill you easily. Regardless of whether the dragon has a dragon body or a human body, his body value is better than yours. Anyway, when the Dragon King fights, it feels like he has been cut into a dog. Bloodline suppression does not seem to exist. Everyone can jump around. The Yanling is like a special effect in a small area. Where is your army? Where is your body-strengthening speech spirit? Where are your alchemical weapons? Pure plot killing

In my opinion, this book has a high profile and a low profile, with a top supporting role, but the plot is not that great. It acts as a supporting role to highlight the original protagonist. In fact, there is no need to go to Kassel Academy. If the author wants to follow the original work, then pretend that I didn't say so.

I really can't understand what the author is writing? Is Olindin that good at this stage? Although the author's portrayal of Hakuou and Natsumi is pretty good. But I still couldn't help but complain. I think both Odin and Lu Mingze can beat the White King in the Dragon 1 stage. That's a joke. There is no need to suppress the protagonist like this. In Dragon 4, Odin had no way to deal with Lu Mingze in his soul body. Not to mention doing it with King Bai. Moreover, it seems that the white king described by the author is a complete person. Then it would be even more impossible to do it.

Shude Aki

In fact, if the author wants to make the story longer and forcefully suppress the protagonist's combat power, there is no need at all. Because of the identity of the protagonist, this novel must have more than 300 chapters. To be honest, the beginning is very well written, with a sense of destiny for the dragon clan. But later on it felt like the author had no main line. The article has become watery. The author wants to advance the plot through dialogue, always using close methods, but because there are too few updates, readers cannot get a good reading experience.

After sleeping, I suddenly remembered that the protagonist has already won. Since he has defeated the Black King, can he restart it again to eliminate all regrets? The ending can actually be a happy reunion. There is no need to be so bitter, hateful, and alone.

The first sixty chapters were okay, but starting from the sixtieth chapter alone I felt like it was no longer good. The author didn't care 😥😥😥😥

I am here to post again This time it is the guesses of two people, Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze The first is Lu Mingfei. He is the biggest monster. The author said it himself, so he is not Nidhogg, so the existing dragon foundation can be ruled out. Think again about Priest Bai's idea of ​​creating a new dragon species, the double S-class bloodline of Lu Mingfei's parents, and the explanation of violent blood: changing the genetic chain. Then the answer may be that Lu Mingfei is a dragon man, that's right! Born (this is also the setting I saw changed by Jiangnan Old Thief, because I was worried that Lu Mingfei's bloodline was too high when he was born, so he would directly give birth to a dragon man). Then Lu Mingfei's identity is the new dragon clan, a new dragon clan with a bloodline so powerful that it can rival the White King. The second one is Lu Mingze. I am also confused about his identity. First of all, he existed when the four kings (eight kings) rebelled. He had a period of weakness and was sealed in Lu Mingfei's body. Based on this, we can know that Lu Mingze has lost most of the rights to use his power and power. So who has this ability? The White King couldn't do it, let alone him. Nidhogg wouldn't kill him, so who else? The four kings (eight kings). Is there a motive? According to the original text of the Eight Kings' Rebellion, it is known that they killed Nidhogg, but how could they have fought it and acted so realistically? Is it possible that Nidhogg created a little black king? It is possible that Lu Mingze showed all the authority related to the Black King, but his power was not strong enough, and he was the one who wanted to kill the Black King the most. Why? Because he was a substitute, this was a hatred of ten thousand years, because it took ten thousand years for him to reappear. Okay, now that the identities of Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze are complete, let's talk about their relationship. Lu Mingze calls Lu Mingfei "brother", the brother of a king. Lu Mingze can also get power from Concubine Ming. How do you understand this? This can be explained by the fact that Lu Mingze recovers his strength extremely quickly, acquires power beyond the system, and is not afraid of the Black King's bloodline. Then why not just devour it? I think he tried, but failed. Lu and his wife beat Lu Mingze in PVP (probably Lu Mingze was careless and didn't dodge), and then Lu Mingze made a contract to help Lu Mingfei be born. The content of the contract was probably very restrictive for himself, and he also got certain benefits from the blood (that is, the same blood), so he called Lu Mingfei "brother". OK, my post is over. I guess my guess is wrong, then I will become a clown!

Where is Nono? Did you give your daughter away? Please give Shennong a review...

Woo woo woo😭😭

Among the several female protagonists, Xia Mi has the best portrayal. After all, she is a dragon. Many novels write her as a love brain, but she is also a monarch who has lived for thousands of years. The writing style of the whole novel is very good. Many people say that there is a literary youth, but the dragon clan itself is a book of literary youth. Just looking at the main plot, there are many good fans. The male protagonist is the White King, and the author also tries his best to bring the dragon's perspective into the writing. The front and middle are well written. The author does not cater to the readers, but writes his own story. I like it very much. In this way, there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Maybe because of the poor results, the ending is rushed and a bit unfinished, but the writing is online. This is the reason why I can continue reading. Unfortunately, Xia Mi is a knife, but I can understand it. After all, it is difficult to defeat the Black King without completing the water, fire, earth, and wind. Although I knew Xia Mi's ending when I saw the titles of the last few pictures, "Life is as brilliant as summer flowers, death is as quiet and beautiful as autumn leaves, and the flowers are blooming." It is still quite uncomfortable. Finally, let's excerpt Xia Mi's last confession: "Secondly, don't think you are so great, I don't have the obligation to keep your chastity! Have you done anything for me? Even if there is no Chu Zihang, there will still be Xia Zihang and Zhang Zihang! I am Jörmungandr! Dragon King, Jörmungandr!" She seemed to have been holding back these words for a long time and wanted to say them all in one breath. "Also, you are too arrogant, you think you know me very well, you feel like shit!" Xia Mi spat, "It's a pity that I never told anyone, and you didn't ask me. In fact, I also envy other little girls who receive flowers, small cakes, and all kinds of surprises. I say I'm not surprised, but I'm still secretly envious in my heart. Do you know these? You know a hammer, you know! In addition to fighting with Nidhogg, you spend all day long. Play games with Yukiko Monster! " "I tell you, if I choose again, I will choose a new lover. He will send me flowers, give me little dresses, and secretly prepare all kinds of surprises for me. Touch my head and put my hands in your pockets when it's cold. I want to have this kind of tacky and passionate love! Instead of playing with Bang Chui all day long!" Xia Mi spoke louder and louder, and finally stood up and yelled. "Also, your words are so hurtful! Do you know how fragile a girl's heart is? It's hard to hear! You always make me uncomfortable, and I can't yell at you or shed tears. You just let me down!" That's it, it's pretty good. At least Xia Mi left a deep impression on me.

The author's boast that he is a real dragon fan is indeed correct. Like the green-faced beast, he always suffers from literary youth syndrome. He also feels that what he has written is a refreshing article, which is so satisfying, but it also makes people want to see what is written next, and he is scolding and reading at the same time.

I jumped to read it, but I couldn't accept it. Although the writing is good and the characters are well created, Xiami's image is very successful. Even in my opinion, it is no worse than the original Xiami's portrayal. But I can't accept this ending, although I know that such Xiami is the real Xiami. Dragon King Jörmungandr, a smooth and sugary novel is destined to not create a stand-up character. After all, regret and regret are the most unforgettable characters. Writing seems to be like looking at the mountains but not the plains. This is the core of writing works. You are a successful author. However, I still can't accept it. Bye now! Oh no, never again! About the same as Laodeng in Jiangnan. 🙂