Cultivation of Taoism and Immortality: I Have a Skill Panel

It's written in a foggy way, with no main plot and branch plots popping up all the time. Before one was finished, he jumped onto another one. Before starting the journey, I learned the secrets between the top bosses and the reasons for the collapse of the world.

The realm of this book is so transcendental, it slipped away

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is crooked. The moment I saw Golden Finger, I thought the protagonist would learn martial arts and develop a new training system. However, it turned out that a mortal went to the top of the world of immortality for the sake of Taoism and magical seeds. They are so poisonous that the biggest problem is that you, a mere mortal, can meet their big bosses. Also, knowing that Douji was cursed by the big boss and still pursuing it was unreasonable. You could have just not written it down now. Wouldn't it be better to reflect it later?

Lots of sets, one after another.

It looks very laborious and the writing is unclear.

The starting point is now a happy circle for primary school students!

It's a mess, I don't know what it means,

I don't understand what's happening is a hammer in the east and a stick in the west.

Why is it that the protagonist is always squeezed in the beginning? After seeing two or three pictures, I lost interest. Later, the protagonist was attracted by some bandits, and the bandits wanted to steal the protagonist's property. Then he was killed by the protagonist. It's all the same old routine.

The beginning is okay, but I don't know what is written in the middle and I can't understand it.