I Angrily Criticized the Female Guest, and I Got Angry and Got Out of the Circle

Calling it rubbish is an insult.

I can't say it's bad, the idea is okay, there are a lot of bugs, but the idea is still very clear. I wrote it carefully and gradually adjusted and improved the characters. Is it a book that can make each character shine?

A rural family is addicted to online tips. They sold their parents' house and still owe more than one million yuan in debt. She refuses to repent and is still looking for a living. Her brother is just a working man and is unemployed. What would she do if her book friends were her parents or her brother?

This book is a bit poisonous, but it deals with cyber violence. When I was raped by cyber violence and wanted to commit suicide, I found someone who had cyber violence to support me.

So this is a world of capital, and the law does not rely on money to call the shots? Or maybe the people here are not sane. Capital with a little bit of brains knows how to attract investment talents to win over your subordinates, so you can use tricks to make money. Are you really not afraid that others will go to your enemies to mess with you? Also, can a house mortgage be obtained without the owner's consent and signature on site? No loan shark would do such a mindless thing...

Let's say you are a male video, but it doesn't look like that. Let's say you are a female video, but it doesn't look like that either.

Can't get a loan of more than 1 million for nothing? Can I mortgage a house without the signature of the owner? If it's really a novel, just write it casually without any logic at all.

I didn't read the book review before reading it, but when I saw that the main character was looking for a job with a monthly salary of 40,000 yuan to pay off the debts of his disabled sister, I became addicted on the spot.

These are a bunch of lunatics

It's full of blood and poison, what a crappy plot

I've only read three chapters. How did the editor review and recommend such a "poisonous" book? It violates public order and good customs (blackmailing small bosses), instigates antagonism between men and women, objectifies women (chasing women), is illogical (a 20-year-old Bai Fumei executive with an annual salary of one million yuan broadcasts illegal content), and is full of hostility.         ，

Fan group chief bt came to show his face

I don't understand what you want to do. You'll attract people here in two chapters, and start the screening in the third chapter.

I saw this sister at the beginning 😰😰

Withdraw first as a sign of respect, the setting is really weird.

Han Qian said he doesn't want to retire anymore

I'm a fool, I couldn't stand it and ran away after reading nine chapters.

The first two chapters are okay, the writing is full of characteristics, but the following chapters are too boring. It feels inexplicable. I won't say it. It's all kinds of unreasonable. I can't loan 200-300 million to give gifts to an Internet celebrity for nothing. How can the author introduce such a good thing? Also, for such a big company, the president, why don't you give me 200,000 planning fees? And then give 10 million to a woman to seduce a fool? No CEO with any sense would do this. The plot you wrote is really ridiculous. Even Korean dramas would not dare to write it like this! I was convinced and left, I couldn't stand it anymore, it was so spicy!

The setting of this world is poisonous. It feels like a combination of the Chinese version of America and the Chinese version of Korea!

It looked messy, confused, and the background was blurry, unlike the normal world.

This start makes me confused. Come on, author, I will withdraw first.

The writing style is very good, and the thoughts are very extreme. It is comparable to the brain wave divine literature, but not to the giant poison. The author is still very talented.

The comment section is a bit scary. Book lovers, if you think this book is suitable for you, just read and mark out the ones that are not suitable. Don't attack randomly.

Read the book review first before reading the book. Apparently Shen Nong has been poisoned

I'm studying which chapter Brother Huan will arrange me into 😜😜

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We must be gentle, but not compromising. We must be quiet and be strong unhurriedly.

It is normal to set a goal for the protagonist as the main plot. The setting of owing money is okay. You can write about the protagonist making money, and you can also write about a villain who slaps the protagonist in the face and makes the protagonist owe money, but! This author wrote about a little fairy sister who sells her home and owes millions in debt in order to reward a male anchor. And the protagonist has to make money to pay off the debt for such a little fairy sister. Who wants to read such a plot? Anyway, I don't want to watch it, I can't stand it

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