Rebirth in 1970: I Work as an Educated Youth in a Forestry Farm

Hash Toad

The writing is okay, give it a try and read it again.

[Recommendation] Leading a dog to hunt, catching fish and birds, collecting medicine and digging gastrodia elata, this is a story about getting rich and living in the forest area of ​​Northeast China. The author has excellent writing style and rich life experience. Combining the customs stories and human relationships of the 1970s, he presents a picture of ordinary and warm life in the mountains of Northeast China. There is no upgrading to fight monsters and golden finger opening, only the warmth of being a parent. The interesting plot and professional information allow readers to experience the simple rural atmosphere of Northeast China, which is refreshing and eye-opening. [Tag] Rebirth, Daily Life, Relaxation, Food, Farming, Chronology [Disadvantages] The first few chapters focus too much on the jealousy and intrigues between educated youth groups, and the design of the villain seems to be too bitter and hateful. Recommendation Index⭐⭐⭐ Liangcao It has a rich sense of era and is recommended to those who like period literature and those who are tired of golden finger routines. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

Speechless, the beginning is all about how miserable and hateful the protagonist is, how useless he is, how he doesn't dare to fight back when someone pretends to slap him in the face, he is reflecting on whether he should or should not, the enemy who harmed him in his previous life is right in front of him, and the protagonist is still reflecting 😰😰😰😰

Shennong died in Chapter 5. You are a little successful at the age of 60. When you are young, you can't see any sophisticated tricks when facing your mortal enemies. You just squeeze your fists. You are stupid and cowardly. I think it is 80% that you are the reincarnation of a bastard.🥱

This opening plot is so cliche. At least eight out of ten chronicle books are like this. You can't have an ordinary start. You have to be miserable and hateful, miss your loved one, and start over again. Is there a template outline or something like the starting point, with the same skeleton, and then fill in the content?

The first one was disgusting to death. There are more than 40 pictures. The person named Sun is not dead yet.

The author made the same mistake in the plot of the villain as in the previous book. Don't be limited by modern thinking. There is a big difference in how certain things are handled in modern rural areas and in rural areas forty or fifty years ago! To give a simple example: Zhang San is a skilled hunter, and he accidentally "released" Li Si. Normally, if Zhang San wanted to run away, it would be difficult to catch him under the conditions at the time! In addition, as mentioned in the previous book, in the past, few people in mountainous rural areas would take the initiative to offend a skilled hunter. In the mountains, it is easy for a hunter to do it without anyone, and there is no need to dirty his hands!

After reading dozens of chapters, this disgusting batch has been written with such bitterness and hatred for so long, and the two Du Sun things are still jumping around. Also, if you really can't care about people or things, you have to introduce one or two chapters. The birth of those characters or the related details are written in such detail. Is it necessary? Don't say that chewing peonies is just water. Even a little trivial matter can be written incisively and vividly. Don't you have tens of thousands of chapters by the time you finish the book?

He was long-winded and procrastinated, talking about one thing over and over again. He was beaten with a machete, and he killed one and injured another in self-defense. He actually kept writing about regrets, impulsiveness, and that he should not have used his anger to harm others and himself. Moreover, it is perfectly fine to skip and read the first few dozen chapters. A pound of meat should be filled with at least seven ounces of water, and the remaining three ounces should be removed from half of the fascia and half of the lymph. The remaining two ounces should be read slowly. An old lady's footcloth.

I ordered all of your last book. To be honest, this book is not as good as the previous one, by a lot. Whether you accept it or not, I still want to complain (the screenshot is at the back to save you from mindless trolling). First of all, the design of these two villains is too rough. Why do you say that? Maybe the author felt that the writing was very flat and wanted to create some plot conflicts (that's how I understand it, so let's just let it go). Those who like reading chronicle and farming articles will not care if your writing is mediocre. What they like is that the family is short and the years are peaceful. But you didn't write it out, like a Xianglin's wife, you repeatedly output negative energy, and the light is flat. In short, the sentence is too rushed, and the characters are very facial and crude. From the first chapter to many chapters after it was released, it is not enough to rely on these two brainless villains to realize the plot conflict. In fact, there are many things that can be written. Why does it have to be so rough? The two of them received the lunch box, and I breathed a sigh of relief. These two things were finally dead. Without positive feedback, I didn't feel happy, but a bit bored (I believe many people feel the same as me) We all know that you are praising me. In fact, there is really no need to spend so much writing here, so hurry up and get the lunch box and finish it. Also, there is absolutely no need for the plot of the investigation team to be so mindless and blunt. No readers want to read this kind of thing. You have to come back twice. In fact, the people in the investigation team are very talented. If you need this kind of plot, you can tactfully arrange and add it later. It is said that the Sun family has great energy, and there is nothing we can do if the superiors suppress it. We all know what the facts are and don't mind going through the process. There is nothing we can do to ask everyone to understand this. Wouldn't this be much better? The rhythm of your book is very messy. You should focus on the hunting, fishing and gathering written in pen and ink. You just go through it in one stroke, which is not interesting and has no sense of picture. Are you happy with your writing? Anyway, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. The words are a bit harsh, but I also hope you can write well. As for the book, I will put it on the bookshelf for now. I hope you can write the subsequent plot well. If it is interesting, I will continue to subscribe and support it. I won't say more.

In my previous life, I was ambushed and fought back to kill people. But here I am so brave and ruthless that I jumped on my horse and exploded on the spot! You are so cowardly even after being reborn. Don't talk about realistic logic. You are the author. It's not easy for you to solve logical problems? The period writing is so aggrieved, you deserve to be exempted from the restrictions.

Divide the prey equally? The protagonist is simply a bastard, there is no such thing! Moreover, the beginning is all about bitterness and hatred, and there is no golden finger, so what the hell!

The author is committing an old habit. He digressed from the topic at the end of the last book. Why is it that these chapters of this book are a little off-topic. Brother, you are writing about a forest farm. The protagonist has to be transferred and moved. Is it still life in a forest farm? After the last book, I went into business, and this book about forestry has to be moved again. Really convinced

For me, the Golden Villa at the beginning is equivalent to these three disgusting pictures. When I go back in time, I want to live a normal life, develop the countryside, and occasionally make gadgets and inventions! The more I watch the story of bitterness and hatred, the more unhappy I become. Even if I kill that person, I still can't calm down my mood! Nowadays, the more conflicts there are in the text, the less I want to read the book.

The author gives you a suggestion. If you really want to write well, you should not start with a bitter and bitter beginning. Those are usually the beginnings of fantasy novels. There is something exciting at the beginning, such as killing someone to take revenge or cheating an enemy, but you can't write well and you still get scolded all the time. A normal start will be better than a start like yours. Don't commit the literary youth disease at the starting point. Not many people like to watch literary youth, and their grades will not be good and they will easily get scolded and lose their mentality. If you want to write about farming, write a normal start. Normal people live a normal life. There may be some things that they regret, but they don't have that much bitterness and hatred. You can also go and see that the entire mountain and the small fishing village are all about farming. One is hunting and the other is fishing just like you. It is ordinary and there is not so much suffering and hatred. Most people say they are stupid, and not many scold them. Isn't this better than being scolded all the time? It's difficult to write a drama about suffering, as it requires not only writing but also the rhythm of the story, and you can't do it either. Reality is very painful and tiring, and people read novels to escape reality and feel relaxed. I hope your novels will get better results.

30,000 Words in a big push? The author's background is really tough

What is written? It's like a running account. You are reborn. After reading fifty chapters, nothing has changed. I haven't made any money. The food is the same as before. What's the meaning of your rebirth? What is the meaning of your rebirth?

After being reborn, I have enemies all over the world. I have lived in my village for half my life, and I have never seen two families with a big feud looking for trouble all day long! At best, we just meet each other and pass by without talking! I don't interact with each other until I die, and I don't shamelessly design others all day long.

The protagonist is a complete loser. The author wrote it after practicing the Sunflower Book. He dare not take revenge in the face of life and death enemies. He has no masculinity at all and is not worthy of being a man at all.

Died in Chapter 5 and was reborn as a turtle. You deserve to be reborn. The author is a Ninja Turtle. He looks so useless and has a bad attitude.

I'm tired of reading about whether the author can have a child and not a daughter. I'm really tired of it. I believe there are others who are tired of it. Eight out of ten books are about daughters. It's like staying up late and playing with mobile phones 365 days a year. How are you mentally? It's torture. Consider my opinion. There is no requirement to adopt it, but it's still a son, a daughter, or a dragon and a phoenix. I really don't want to read the chronicle anymore - I'm excited - I'm confused - I'm bored - I'm thinking about life.

I only read a few dozen chapters, and then looked at the table of contents and stopped reading. Mainly because I saw about starting a company later on, and I didn't want to read it. Since I was going to write about starting a company, why didn't I start by pushing the year back a little bit and just become a bad guy?

Why are they all criticizing this book? 😰 Is this offending someone?

The author must have paid a lot for this book to be on the shelves.

I can't stand it It's so unreasonable to take other people's children home

I have no poison resistance, so I withdraw first. Almost ate shit

I read 100 chapters, and it's worse than an assembly line. I didn't even understand the main plot. I just ate a few meals, hunted, and divided the houses. There was a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. I didn't understand it.

It's not interesting. The enemy duo are eyeing each other, and you are still there to keep a family and fall in love... I read in the comment section that the duo was killed by a bear. Was it a deliberate design by the protagonist or an accident? Is this all you need to do at sixty?

What a boring book, flowing prose, bland and unremarkable