Immortality Martial Arts: Starting from the Heavenly Prison Jailer

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. Throw the fried dough sticks and soy milk into your arms! Good guy.

To be honest, the previous writing is very good and beautiful. But King Yongshan has been mentally retarded since before he rebelled! Knowing that the other party was going to rebel, he did not make any preparations on his side; he knew that the other party was recruiting a large number of troops, and he also knew that his own troops were seriously insufficient. However, instead of doing any response, he repeatedly tried to kill himself to anger the enemy and force him to rebel as soon as possible. Seeing this, everyone thought that the pig's trotters were well-prepared, but in the end, they were defeated in one fell swoop and defeated again and again! A war with millions of people is written as child's play by the author! 😅😅😅

You can write a story about Tianlao Eternal Life and have so many female character cards, You can know what the quality is without even looking at it 🤫

This kind of book can also help you get started😒😒

This plot is an imitation of the watchman, and it's a lot of copying and stuffing.

In a large prison, the prisoners inside can kill the jailer at will. Even if you don't kill him for the time being, you have to destroy his skills. At least you have to restrain him. As a result, the life of the jailer will be like this. Then more than a hundred people died in less than three months, and you still call this an iron rice bowl. Do you really think that people in feudal society are fools? There are no restrictions, and there are no powerful masters watching. I don't know what purpose your prison has except waiting for others to rob the prison and destroy the jailer.

It's so embarrassing to watch, both the protagonist's looks and the empress's. How good-looking can a low-level jailer who has died once be? The family has no power, no power, no force. In this world where great power is concentrated in one person, it is a disaster in itself. . There is also a female emperor. It is basically more difficult for a female emperor to appear in this kind of world. Do you like rich women? Too smart. It's best not to watch it with your brain

Doesn't anyone see that this is an imitation of the watchman? In fact, it's pretty good when I'm not imitating. The imitation part is really awkward.

I can still see the front, but I can't stand the back. I can't tell, it just looks awkward.

The author's writing style is very good, but he always writes about the court's downfall of wisdom and his failure to accompany the golden finger. Before you were born, you were just an ordinary person, and those nouns, famous poems, and famous books had nothing to do with you. If you want to write about bodyguards and hegemony, you can change the title of the book, and we understand that, but you have to change the title before you wear it.

Is there anyone who has traveled to this world before the main character in this book? If so, I won't read it. I'm so annoyed by this setting Can anyone who has read it help me with the answer?

I'm here to copy poetry again. It's really disgusting. I spent a lot of time writing this. All I can see is that I'm sitting there talking to myself. Hi, tui. I don't want to read anymore.

There is a loophole in the book. The protagonist's realm changes every day. Wen Tingwu can see through the protagonist's realm. Is there no master in the prison? Aren't you afraid of being caught and sliced?

This is not a literary world. Isn't it embarrassing for a warrior jailer to copy poetry and pretend to be b?

The protagonist goes out to kill people in the middle of the night and even saves people without looking embarrassed or even changing his uniform, but the True Six

The protagonist traveled through time and turned out to have brothers and sisters. The protagonist is a martial artist who copied poems from his previous life to show his literary talent. He is awesome. Bye bye.

I originally thought that the brainless white guy Wenguang would be happy and that he would be able to write something when he got home later.

I can smile bitterly several times in one chapter, and different people also smile bitterly. It's annoying to watch.

It's thousands of miles away at every turn. But still riding?

I am a bookworm of eight years, this book is really good

Which platinum god opened a trumpet and wrote this?

The author still writes slowly, and sometimes it looks weird. Don't be anxious about how many words you need to code every day. Polish it.

Please be careful, but it's not too much

One thing to say, the writing style and plot of this book are great, and I never felt bored after reading more than a hundred chapters. If I come to recommend it, I won't wait to take off!

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Didn't you still have Confucianism and Taoism before? Why are there no more words in the back? Even after the fusion, writing poems can improve one's cultivation or realm. It doesn't appear anymore. I thought it was martial arts - cultivating immortality - Confucianism - Buddhism - magic. But it was changed later, and many of them disappeared after being written.

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What does this book say? In this world, Buddha is good and Sword Immortal Sect is bad.

Why are you writing so slowly? I couldn't sleep at night and stopped updating.

Although there are many similar ones, this one is okay for readers