I Have Countless Dao Soldiers

I read it in one sitting. It was very interesting. I have been a 30-year-old bookkeeper and I hope that the author will persevere and not become a eunuch!

Shen Qiu must die. Whether the protagonist wants to cultivate immortality or dominate, it should be his own wish. Whether it was Shen Qiu's own imagination or moral kidnapping, he was a typical example of the inferior overcoming the superior. Moreover, the protagonist now has no foundation, no confidants, and no talents. His subordinates are all from the Shenqiu faction. A typical pioneer for the king, helping others to go public and make wedding dresses. Became the master, the family changed dynasties, slaughtered the whole family, and became a mourning dog, and the Shenqiu family became a noble family and enjoyed happiness for generations to come. If the protagonist's family is defeated and the nine clans are killed, Shen Qiu can find a future by recruiting An to surrender. Don't kill this kind of people and keep them for the New Year! ! !

I think the previous part is pretty good, the Taoist system and the supernatural power system are both good. I was waiting to see one man against the country, and I was confused by the sentence "The Lord", so this book is actually about rebellion and hegemony?

I was stunned by the sound of "Lord". The front is quite interesting. If you want to talk about resources, there are Tao soldiers. Soldiers and generals are also Tao soldiers. Cultivation is also a Tao soldier. There is no need to manage people's hearts. Gao Wu is running rampant all over the world, why do he collect those people? If he calls me brother😓, it is possible that he belongs to the late Liangshan Heroes Luck Dynasty style.

... How to say? I feel like the writing style is okay, but the author is a young writer or older. Why does it seem like I'm reading an ancient Romance of the Three Kingdoms? You still recite poems every now and then. Your opponent only casts a spell with two characters, while you cast a spell with dozens of characters... What's the matter? If you encounter Kuai's magical power, you won't die in one move.

The writing is okay, but it's just not to my liking. The protagonist himself doesn't want to rebel, and he doesn't want to accept his subordinates. As a result, the author forced him to use a supporting character to push him away, trying to wear a yellow robe. It's boring.

When I came back from time travel, I could just fight for my life, but I could kill everyone in a few days. What kind of power system is this? A group of strangers, if they are saved, they are saved. They cannot tolerate, care for, and support them. How can they have such rich emotions?

The more I read it, the more I feel like the main character in the ancient story "Water Margin" is a modern time traveler. With the author's manipulation, it feels like he is not a time traveler but an aborigine who got a golden finger and added a memory.

Do you like to see the protagonist train more Taoist soldiers and recruit less subordinates? Or is it a two-line development, training more Taoist soldiers and recruiting more masters as subordinates? Or if you have other better suggestions, you can leave a message, I will read it often 😁 In addition, friends, please read more and support me. After all, novels are difficult to write, and my writing method is even more difficult, please 🤣

Nowadays, it is popular to travel in a Taoist way. Since ancient times, Guangji Liang slowly became the king. I just said that the protagonist is so high-profile and the writing is messy.

It's okay to not have any brains. The world described by the author is a world of love and affection. If you kill someone, you will definitely be retaliated. Even if you know that the protagonist has illegal potential and great supernatural powers, you still take the trouble to kill the protagonist. For a local gentry, a county magistrate has to report to the court even if he wants to kill someone and harm the protagonist. It is really a world of love, justice, and praise.

After reading the first thirty chapters, I felt like from cultivating immortals to Water Margin

The text is not written in plain English. It is so laborious to read. It is better to treat it as an outline and just change it to the vernacular text.

I want to know if you write novels or tongue twisters

It feels quite good to break the shackles of the world, move forward step by step, kill decisively, and make the right choice! The only flaw is that Shen Qiu forces his own rebellious ideas onto Pig's Feet. Even if it's a hegemony article, he shouldn't be such a thoughtful little brother! If it's a battle between the avenues, there's no need for an uninvolved mortal to decide the future of the pig's feet! There are two paths to development in the early stage, and Shen Qiu is a stumbling block! This person is the external demon and human calamity of pig's feet! It just depends on how you arrange it! Goodbye Jianghu!

What's new is that it's too much nonsense and half-baked. If you can't control classical Chinese, write less and be more natural. Otherwise, it will be weird, embarrassing and uncomfortable.

I feel that the author does not have the basis for writing a historical article. He needs to engage in education, land distribution, institutional systems, demographic management, taxation, law amendments, changing customs, and a set of ruling ideas, business layout planning, production, productivity improvement, and equipment manufacturing speed and quality. It doesn't matter in the early stage, but the operation after the territory is established is crucial. Bye bye with gags to fool readers.

Some people say that the writing style is classical, but I just think it is a lot of rhetoric, like imitating the Dream of Red Mansions, but it is very inconsistent with the times. Everyone has to read a poem before doing anything, and the hero and villain have to talk nonsense before fighting. It is very embarrassing. I would like to give the author a suggestion, read less poetry, and less Click on the adjectives that are piled up with rhetoric. It's really boring to read too much. I really like the subject of Dao soldiers. Otherwise, I really can't stand it. I really skip it every time I see a poem and a bunch of descriptive adjectives. If you skip too much, you may miss the plot and give up.

With the protagonist's body as the core, Tao soldiers from the nine body apertures as generals, and Tao soldiers from external acupoints as auxiliaries, we can directly launch a violent troop flow!

A good subject matter is really attractive. But why did he suddenly become wise? Even though they were not very powerful, they started to rebel. And the protagonist came from time travel, so why don't you understand? Strength is the most important thing, if you don't improve your strength properly. With 1,000 burdens, he must have caused trouble everywhere in the name of the protagonist, and then the protagonist took the blame and forced the plot. It's just a manipulated puppet

With billions of orifices, you are afraid that your whole body will not be full of flesh and holes.

It's a pity, there are too many settings, it's too confusing, and it's still bearable. Later, after the protagonist wipes out his family, he can't stand it when he is surrounded by the yellow robes of Shen Qiu's group. How can ordinary farmers directly say rebellion?

I think the character is not decisive enough and a little bit virginal.

So far, it looks pretty good, Xian Miao

Dao Bing Liu reminds me of an online game novel from ancient times. The game system is to play Dao Bing.

Personally, I suggest the author rewrite it! After all, such a good subject matter will definitely become popular, but if you write it like this, the data won't look very good, right? I sincerely hope you will write well. After all, it is not easy to find a good book.

Came here to cultivate immortality, left to strive for hegemony

The author has probably heard a lot of storytelling, and the writing has the flavor of a commentary.

At the beginning, the wood-type Taoist soldiers did not know how to use poison and died speechless. Big killer

The road is long and long