Brother Kong Xuan

I came here to read it for free, and I got to Chapter 220. For the time being, the writing is okay, but the interaction between the protagonist and Master Tongtian is a bit basic sometimes 😏

Jiejiao is the true inheritor of Hongjun's Taoism. Everything has a glimmer of hope. But it also failed here. There are all kinds of ghosts. In the final analysis, the battle for orthodoxy. I also like to pick up and introduce two people. Great perseverance and great wisdom. Shameless though. But people have to give in because of their spirit of success. Author, please write

Originally, it looked okay if he was a little more out of touch, but now everyone is starting to get out of his mind, and I can't stand it anymore.

Shennong is here, poisonous. Before Hongjun became a saint and preached for the first time, all the three thousand people in Zixiao Palace except two Daluo were quasi-sages. At this time, the protagonist and Kong Xuan are also quasi-sages. The realm and strength set by the author are too problematic. Before Hongjun became a saint, there was no such thing as a quasi-sage.

How should I put it, Jiejiao is not good because people are too mixed and there are too many demons who do evil. And now, I think white people becoming Taoist priests are spreading culture and teachings. Seeing a few niggas working as Taoist priests, I suddenly felt that Yuanshi Tianzun was right. Not everyone is qualified to practice Taoism.

I haven't read Dapeng yet, but I don't want to read it after seeing Jie Jiao

The first chapter is unstoppable. The realm is like the phoenix dancing in the ninth heaven. What kind of setting is this?

I would forgive it if the author was a woman. The master-disciple relationship is really weird. I knew I wanted to write about a good relationship, but the touching of thighs and arms is really strange... After looking at it, I think the author may be a woman. If girls are like that, it wouldn't be strange. Otherwise, well... Forget it, it doesn't suit my stomach anyway.

After finally cultivating to become the best among the saints, he was forced to get married, gave up his cultivation and was reincarnated as Tang Monk, and finally accepted Zhu Bajie Sha Monk as his apprentice (Zhu Chui Sha Chui Monkey couldn't win these two), and was trained by the big bosses from all sides (afterwards, he said there was no revenge, and he made it clear that if he offended the protagonist, the clan might be exterminated, but he was still offended, and the protagonist was generous and didn't care). Practicing in vain is not as refreshing as Dapeng in Journey to the West

This prehistoric story is well written! ! ! I like I hope Sanqing can always live in harmony. Little Peacock and Little Jinpeng are also very well-behaved babies.

This author's writing is full of gay vibes

Don't listen to Hongjun's sermons, but go hunting for treasures🤔🤔🤔

It feels wrong when I read it. Why is there such a thing as gay in this prehistoric novel?

This book is a word of rubbish. When Hongjun first preached, the highest level in the ancient world was the Great Luo Jinxian realm. But you told me that the protagonist directly accepted the great power of the Great Luo Jinxian realm as a mount? ? ? Sanqing is not so luxurious at this time.

I want to laugh when I think of this stupid bird's yin and yang two-cylinder

It's okay if your writing skills are not good, but you are about to become a saint and you are still being forced to get married? ? ? ? ? Xiu'er, is that you? Are you an urban writer? ? ? ? ? 💩Same plot, later in Journey to the West, because of urging marriage, a woman was arranged? It's not so vicious if you start a harem right from the start!

Don't say that he was born with Daluo Before Hongjun became a saint, he was in Daluo for 9.9999 Times The result is that he didn't listen to Hongjun's sermons and went to hunt for treasures? It just makes me so happy This is like in reality, a super expert in a certain industry gives a lecture, and everyone goes to listen The result is that the protagonist doesn't go and goes to find a bullshit treasure? And he threatened to find it as his own? Since you said before that everything is determined, what about your baby? Are you looking for Nima? Since you can find the treasure, doesn't this mean there are changes? Then why don't you fight for it? Let's not talk about fighting for position, let's talk about fighting for self-improvement belief People are all about belief in fighting against the sky and the earth. How about you here, just shrink your glans and bastard first? Instead of listening to the lectures of industry experts and deepening their understanding of the industry, they go hunting for treasures? You are not even a quasi-sage in the late stage of riding a horse. Can you hold the treasure you are looking for? Don't understand whether virtue matches the position? What article did you write? It was pretended and established, and the settings were added, but the result was not consistent with reality. Originally, people in reality are frustrated enough. They don't dare to do this or that They can't do anything well, they don't have strong beliefs, and they don't have the courage to fight. But after reading a bullshit novel, as a big brother of the same level, he actually tried every means to be a coward. It's really a shame What a terrible protagonist Let's change the protagonist, or let Zheng Zha come, or Ye Fan come, even if it is replaced by Yang Guo, he will become a pure cerebral palsy, this has nothing to do with seniority, a time traveler went to a more open part of the world, but the result is still the same as a salted fish in reality, really stepping on a horse makes me laugh Not only that, but also led Kong Xuan to bad, really funny

At the beginning of the game, Fengwu disappeared for nine days. What kind of book is this about killing Matt and Shennong?

What do you say? The author's ideas are quite good. It's just that I have read too few novels about prehistoric times. Many settings are made up by the author himself. Then the starting point of the protagonist is raised too high, and the overall point is lowered too low. According to the original text, it is the Da Luo Jinxian who cannot climb the stable clouds, and the quasi-sage who falls off a cliff without risking his life! To survive is to hang on to the world of martial arts next to immortals. Even if you finally transcend, it will probably just change the map!

The level of strength has collapsed since Hongjun preached. Only two of the three thousand listeners are not quasi-sages. The question arises, how many quasi-sages can a lich have to be qualified to dominate?

I watched a little bit of it for free. The first part of the plot was okay, but the second part of Journey to the West was terrible. The protagonist said that he entered the world to become a Tang monk to practice. Then before the first difficulty was over, the apprentice before joining the world came over to work as a bodyguard and directly told the protagonist's identity. Then you have entered a shitty world. Speaking of entering the world, everyone in the world who has some ability knows the identity of the protagonist after entering the world, and then all kinds of relatives and brothers with the protagonist who has no memory of the previous life. Speechless. He is going to become a saint soon, and yet he is given a woman as the protagonist, which makes me speechless.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I bit my lower lip every now and then and endured it. In the last few chapters, there was no real substance in the chatter and flirting. Maybe the author thought the writing was very interesting, with respect between brothers and brothers, and deep love between master and disciple. At the beginning, I found the interaction between Tongtian Master and Disciple and Sanyou quite interesting in the first few chapters, and it created a different Sanqing Master and Disciple, but with too much of this kind of interaction, I became a bit tired of reading. Just write about Geng Mei.

Borrowed from Xianshu's statement 1 Hongjun's road to transcendence To strengthen the prehistoric world, at least nine saints are needed to sort out the prehistoric way of heaven 2 The three pure roads to transcendence Educate the human race (the lord of heaven and earth) The three religions merged into Taoism to help Yuqing to transcend Laozi transformed into Buddha, combined with the Jiejiao teachings to strengthen Buddhism and help Taiqing to transcend Tongtian transforms Confucianism and establishes Confucianism to help the Qing Dynasty to transcend 3 The path to transcendence of the second ancestor of the West Buddha is originally a demon Use the mortal world of the human race to establish the demon religion 4 Nuwa's road to transcendence (the most difficult) Only when everyone in the human race is like a dragon can transcendence

Before becoming a saint, there was no big difference between Taiyi Styx's cultivation and Sanqing's. Sanqing has already reached the quasi-sage consummation, so Taiyi is almost the same. It means that the lich measured and robbed the leaders of the two clans and had their luck added to them. During the entire tribulation period, their realms remained at the same level 😰. So what were they fighting for? What was the purpose of snatching this luck? They were fighting for their lives for fun? There are at least dozens of weaker Sanqing and even weaker ones. The struggle for ethnic hegemony is not just a show. The others are either a few scattered people of similar strength who can avoid participating, or they join one of the parties, or they are one of the people who were cleared out. Hongjun said where did these thousands of quasi-sages come from The four swords of Luohu Zhuxian can only deal with four. At the same level, if you just count, the quasi-sage Dzogchen is dozens of years older. (After the defeat of the three clans, any clan still has a consummation. There are a few at the peak. It is impossible to destroy the West and break through the consummation due to karma.) Where is Luohu Hongjun? The other quasi-saints sat watching them compete for luck and the opportunity to become saints. They were not moved at all, and they were all lost. Isn't this system completely broken? People are born in the early or middle or late stages of Daluo. They slowly cultivate to perfection and then break through to quasi-sage. Even if you were born in Daluo, it seems that you don't need to practice in Daluo realm. You can break through to quasi-sage at will, and then you will be stuck before the saint. How do you write after the Lich? The creature born after the Great Luo is stuck half to death, and the saint disciples have to go through all kinds of difficulties and dangers if they want to break through to the quasi-sage? Or is it such a trivial matter to break through the realm?

A different style of Honghuangliu. I have seen a book of similar type before, but it is not as rhythmic as the one you wrote. Keep it in this style.

Defeated in the first chapter 🙂, what is Fengwu Jiuzhongtian? Is it fun to do this old-fashioned shitty stunt? Why don't you call it Phoenix Dance Jiuzhongtian? After all, phoenix and phoenix are a pair.

Daluo Jinxian will bow down when he sees you? So there is no ranking. I can understand if you just write a Golden Immortal. You are a Daluo Golden Immortal. As a result, Hongjun has not preached. Where can a quasi-sage come from? The most is the Hunyuan Golden Immortal. Although it is similar to a quasi-sage, do you know how difficult it is to become a saint in the physical body? Can you become a Hunyuan Golden Immortal casually? Even when Pangu opened the world, he was not able to achieve Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian, and he was still short of it. I was really speechless. After the Dragon and Phoenix Tribulation, there was no existence above Daluo Jinxian at all. They were all dead. Except for the three ancestors, they were barely alive. As a result, you wrote completely nonsense! Daluo Jinxian is the ultimate immortal. Without the method of becoming a saint, who knows how to become stronger? I'm really speechless, and then I kept waiting for you to practice the Eight-Nine Mysterious Skills, but I didn't practice it until it was released. The Eight-Nine Mysterious Skills are the most likely to become an immortal existence like a saint, but you just didn't practice it, you are so self-righteous.

After reading it, I feel that the author does not know much about the general prehistoric knowledge. It is a mess and many identities and characters do not match up. The Queen of the Demon Court is a dragon. Hongyun died just after finishing his sermon. He appeared before the first sermon. The concept of saint, the main character Yuan Feng's son's karma, cannot see the role of karma at all. Da Luo is actually very common when he is not preaching. The most bizarre thing is that the main character is a quasi-sage and then apprentices to a master who has not yet beheaded the corpse, and the combat power system is in a mess.

The emperor-type novels that have many characters to read should be the emperor-type novels of the Three Kingdoms and the emperor-type novels of Qin Shi Mingyue.

I would like to use your precious place to recommend "Donghuang Purple Book". 🙏🙏