Makuten Festival Road

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}The beginning is a bit old-fashioned, with a familiar parent background, a mysterious blacksmith father, and a mother whom I have never met. It is a test of popularity and the author's writing skills. In this fast-paced era, few new readers have enough patience to appreciate the world written by the author. Fortunately, the author's writing style is good, which is at a high level among newcomers (don't be proud). At least I can endure my impetuousness and read it carefully. Read through more than ten chapters and talk about the shortcomings first. The first common problem among newcomers is that the paragraphs are too long and the layout is too dense. Secondly, some place names are unknown whether the author has other plans, such as Shituoling. This name is very funny, and the three lion brothers can't help but pop up in the mind. The division of the third realm is a bit complicated, and it tests the readers' patience. Is Xiaoyaoyou a realm or a technique? Why does the protagonist's father also have the protagonist's grandfather? There are a lot of characters and the situation is a bit complicated. Of course there are many advantages. The world view constructed by the author is very grand and it is a rare original world. This is a plus. Secondly, the dialogue description is so good that it feels like being there, like watching a movie in your mind. Although the pace is slow and hot, the food is delicious. It is a rare source of food and I look forward to the future of the protagonist.

This is another writer's post. His data is much better than mine. He hasn't signed a contract yet. I also hope that all readers will use their hands and read it every day. This will be helpful for signing recommendations.

The story scenes are very immersive, and the writing is good. Come on

Come on, don't give up!

How many stars are on the sunset river, life is sad and unwavering!

The author works hard and looks forward to more exciting plots

Great support from the author and wishing you an early signing

I wish you great success with your new book, come on

Yes, the author's writing is good. I hope to sign the contract as soon as possible.

Very well written! Very interesting!

Come on, it's very well written!

Sorry for the limited time, I can't read Chapter 30 for now, because the plot progress I read is still too small compared to the structure of the whole book (it feels like I haven't left the novice village yet), and I can't predict the subsequent development yet. I can't post a trial reading. I can only give 3 small suggestions, which are for the author's reference only, and I want to share my encouragement with you. 1. The names of the exercises are concise and the training system is clear. There are several exercises and systems in this book, and the connections and differences between them require not only well-founded analysis but also clear and sharp contrasts. I was not able to figure out the part about spiritual energy cultivation and spiritual pulse awakening to become a talisman master at the first time. I believe many readers also need to search repeatedly in large paragraphs, which affects reading. 2. The opening of the three golden chapters, the speed of suppression and explosion must be mastered. This means that the villain clashes with the protagonist, then the protagonist is humiliated, and the protagonist breaks out to fight back. The joy of this type of standard protagonist slaps in the face is based on the relaxed plot design. There is oppression from the front, and then there is counterattack from behind. There is a serious lack of space to suppress the content of several conflicts, and the core motivation is missing. Moreover, the protagonist basically does not have much psychological transformation process, and all directly breaks out to fight back. Moreover, the excitement of the fighting process needs to be improved. The power of many protagonists can also be reflected in the shock of the villain or the dumbfounding of the third party. 3. You can choose content related to the conflict between life and death, love, hate, and hatred as the core of the book to enhance the quality of the book. I don't know if the main plot of the whole story needs to resolve the grudges between the parents' generation. If there is an enemy's daughter later to create a fairy version of Romeo and Juliet, there may be more dramatic conflicts.

So far, the writing seems to be okay, but the plot is average.

I took a look, it's quite interesting, let's give it a try

Great support from the author, looking forward to updates

It looks great, I look forward to the follow-up development

Your writing is okay, keep it up (ง˙o˙)ว

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Logically speaking, this result has already reached the threshold for signing a contract.

Are editors now just addicted to drugs? They won't sign this or that. Hahaha, take jujube pills.

I haven't updated it in the past few days. I mainly revised the first few chapters. I deleted a lot of unnecessary words and highlighted the contradictions.

Novels are very old. I feel like this genre was written poorly many years ago, and the author didn't write anything new. Maybe it would have been a hit ten years ago. But now, even if readers like this genre, they may choose to read old works by great writers instead of watching a newcomer trying to cater to the trend of online writing more than ten years ago.

I applied for the fourth time last Friday and there is no news yet.