Nian Xingchen, One of the Full-Time Mage

When the protagonist awakens to the thunder system, the principal actually knows that he is born with a soul type, which basically belongs to the level of disaster victims The engagement between the protagonist and Mu Ningxue is a bit baffling, and it feels like a forced heroine. After that, he has to go to the imperial capital to go to school, and the protagonist has no background. Can he survive in the imperial capital? Mu Ningxue must have a lot of suitors in the imperial capital, and the background of the suitors must be higher than that of the protagonist. The protagonist will definitely conflict with them later. By then, whether the protagonist has the ability to protect himself or not is a question The interaction between the protagonist and Tang Yue makes it feel like he is talking like a loser. After telling Tang Yue about Mu He, Tang Yue went to sneak into the Mu family alone to investigate. According to the book, Mu He's mid-level strength was actually discovered (how did Tang Yue join the trial?) Then the disaster broke out a year in advance. The protagonist behaves like a virgin after the disaster breaks out. The protagonist's parents are like a dragster. When the disaster breaks out, they are dawdling. When they reach the safety barrier, they insist on running outside. The protagonist has to follow them together, and the protagonist follows like a nanny (Is the orphan a bad start? If you add a parent, don't write like this again. It gave people a very poisonous feeling) After that, the protagonist went to save Tang Yue alone. I was really speechless. The reason why this disaster broke out early was that the protagonist believed in Tang Yue too much. When Mu He and the others found out, he jumped over the wall and triggered a demon riot What is Tang Yue's position in this book? Anyway, what I have seen in the book so far is the protagonist, who is like a loser pestering Tang Yue. After this, the mother's heart will explode? He risked his life to save Tang Yue, which is a bit baffling There is also a disaster that broke out for the protagonist a year in advance. What about Mo Fan's arrangements after this timeline? After one year of self-study, will he enter the Pearl in advance in this book? Or should he study for two years and then enter the Pearl according to the timeline of the original work?

Received both Leng Qing and Leng Lingling Mu Rujiao

Various self-made names. . . Elementary magic becomes elementary magic, elementary mage becomes elementary mage, intermediate level one becomes intermediate level one, magic energy becomes magic power, a thought of star track becomes a thought of stardust, the same goes for spiritual seeds, mortal spiritual seeds? What the hell is a spirit-level spirit seed? . The author also explained that the heaven-level spiritual seed is the heavenly seed, and the soul-level spiritual seed is the soul seed. What kind of mortal-level spiritual seed are you talking about? The natural thunder seed. . ? It's really uncomfortable to watch. Do you know why no one is watching it? Because the name of this book alone can dissuade a lot of people. . . A thought of stardust. . .

I'm curious as to why she would think of Mu Ningxue being directly arranged to marry the protagonist. With her current status and talent, she wouldn't think so. The protagonist only had unfulfilled talents at the time, and his performance was not as strong as hers, and his family background was not good.

It is suggested that the description should be richer, adding some descriptions of the environment and expressions. In addition, the heroine should be less, and the truth is that she is more refined but not too many. Mu Ningxue's relationship problems are easy to deal with at Imperial College, but the other heroines can be left alone. The full-time mage fanfiction harem is poorly written. Too many female protagonists will make the book stereotyped and popular.