When Huo Yuhao Traveled Through Douluo Yi

After reading Chapter 127, the first part was okay. Although it didn't abuse Tang San, the writing style and plot were pretty good. However, the continental soul master competition was really bad. I don't know what the plot will be like in the later stages. The characters of Shrek's Seven Monsters are more or less broken. Just by looking at Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun's appearance, it is obvious that the author deliberately deleted some of the unflattering elements of the original work. Bibi Dong is the most OOC, and was directly written by the author as a character who loves his daughter deeply but is not understood. Tang Hao doesn't know why he never appeared in the first part, but later saved his son and left. Of course, the biggest problem is that the male protagonist is struggling emotionally and is impotent. If you have time to compete in the competition, it is better to increase the favorability level to solve this problem. I watched others scan the author's first Douluo novel and I have the time to do it. The male protagonist is also like this... The author's acceptance speech is very good, but after it is released, it can only be said to be unsatisfactory. I hope that I can give you some help later.

Tang Wutong's head was a little confused when she opened her eyes in the darkness. She only remembered that she was involved in the turbulence of time and space, and her subsequent memories were fragmented. At this time, a burst of dazzling white light and inexplicable pressure hit Tang Wutong. "Dad, Mom, Yuhao, where are you?" The frightened Tang Wutong couldn't help but scream, but the words turned into the cry of a baby when he reached his lips. "Look, it's a daughter. This child really looks like you." "Mom?" Tang Wutong discovered his current situation. He had turned into a baby and was being held in his mother's arms. "Am I reborn? Back to the past?" His gaze deflected, and after reflecting his father's face on his eyelids, Tang Wutong's pupils couldn't help but tremble violently. "Hmm... Let me think about it, the child's name should be Wutong, Huo Wutong."

It is recommended to take down Grandma Zhu Zhuqing (｡•👅 •｡｀)

This book focuses on ethical relationships 134 Only those who can read this chapter can continue reading. . Let me tell you about the situation in the book later: A non-traveler, the original Huo Yuhao traveled to ten thousand years ago, attracted Xiao Wu and Zhu Zhuqing, and finally got rid of the idea of ​​​​the identity of his mother-in-law (Xiao Wu + Wang Qiu'er heroine, to 134). It turns out that Tang San also traveled through time, but he had no memory before. Wearing it alone is fine, but wearing it twice makes me numb There is no contradiction and forcibly creates a contradiction

To be honest, I really hope that "Xiao Wu" is the female protagonist

What is written later is based on the defense 😅

After watching it, I was very happy. The plot is very light-hearted and focuses on ethics. The slow pace in the early stage, Tang San has no memory of his past life, mainly Xiaowu Qiuer's special show; the pace from the middle stage onwards is normal, Tang San has memories of his past life, and the main focus is to watch the incompetent and furious Dabi San + multiple female protagonists' emotional lines. If you don't take it too seriously, it's quite fun to watch.

I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to inherit the first level of godhood? In the original work, if Huo Yuhao hadn't been tricked by Tang San, he would have been the weakest and could have succeeded the God King, right? Huo Yuhao here has enough time to try to create his own god and become a god, but what you inherited is still a first-level god (Poseidon)? ? Forget about being a first-level god, still inherit the god of food? ? I'm so...

It's really poisonous. After being reborn, you are still a first-level god. It's better not to be reborn. Also, the introduction said that I will sit down as the God King. Have you sat down? Don't fool people here

The back looks like a lump, written purely blindly. God Shura can pass the divine status to the soul beast. Does the author want to read what you are writing? Also, the pig's feet written in the back are so disgusting. It doesn't matter if you don't take the initiative or refuse. The indecision is really disgusting to the readers. Deliberately slowing down the speed of becoming a god, preparing to wait for the woman to become a god before he finally becomes a god. He is afraid that becoming a god will put pressure on Dugu Yan, and then he refuses to complete the final test. I feel numb after watching this. What kind of brain circuit is this? If you can stay in this world for a hundred years, why should you delay? And ntr Tang San in person, but couldn't detect the change in his expression? Did you use your millionth-year soul ring to eat? At least keep an eye out and observe, right?

Obviously the author initially wanted to write a comic about Tang San and Huo Yuhao moving forward together. Then in the middle period, the inspiration ran out and he didn't know how to create contradictions. In fact, it was already obvious when I saw the middle section. I kept following the original work and couldn't write anything. Then Tang San awakened the pure mechanical deity of his previous life, which was a bit of foreshadowing earlier. No, anyone who wants to read this kind of article has been screened out by you, brother, and the ones written by Mao San are not as good as others. Huo Yuhao's inheritance of the Seagod is even worse. I guess Huo Yuhao is not as good at using it as the God of Emotions in his previous life. You can write about inheriting the God of Emotions and then sublimating to the God King. Anyway, there are a lot of poisons. You can make your own judgment.

Remember to let Huo Yuhao witness the way to death, change his views on a certain person step by step, join the Spirit Hall, and side with Qian Renxue.

Wang Qiuer

Taking down Xiao Wu and Zhu Zhuqing, one is the mother-in-law and the other is the grandmother, it's so exciting 😍

The character Zhu Zhuqing seems to be independent! In fact, he is very servile and has no sense of resistance. His role in the later stage is useless except as a fusion material and for Dai Mubai to vent his sexual desire! Even the position of the agility attack system in the team was replaced by Bai Chenxiang

Huo Yuhao has no city. He has experienced more hardships than Tang San in Peerless Tang Sect. As a result, I can see a clear stupidity from the author's writing style. No matter how good a person's character is, he is not stupid.

It feels like the story is getting more and more crooked. Originally, I thought the plot was that Huo Yuhao traveled through time, and then looked at Tang San from the perspective of Wuhun Palace. In the end, he went to Shrek to become the dean. I thought he was freed from servility, but ended up working as a nanny. My evaluation is that it is better not to watch it.

134. If you become a god in one chapter, it will be wasted money.

The biggest Bai Fumei in Douyi, some say Qian Renxue, others say Ning Rongrong. Actually, none of them. The biggest Bai Fumei is a rabbit, with three hundred thousand year soul rings + a minimum of three hundred thousand year soul bones. Who can have such a rich dowry? 🤭🤭🤭

Really, if other protagonists in this fanfic had been able to fight the Soul Saint when Tang San joined Shrek, I would have given up on him because his fighting power had collapsed. But for Huo Yuhao, I think it is natural and even slower. There are always many people comparing Huo Yuhao with Tang San, but they all ignore one problem. Huo Yuhao started 5 years later than Tang San. In the later stages, he is much stronger than Tang San. There is no comparison between Tang San and Huo Yuhao at all. Huo Yuhao's template in Douyi is even much better than the protagonists of many fan fictions. Huo Yuhao started formal training at the age of 11 and level 10. At the age of 12, he participated in the first all-continental spirit master competition with 2nd level. At the age of 17, 5th level participated in the second competition. The competition was completed. After a year of seclusion, plus the sacrifice of the Emperor's auspicious beast, at the age of 18, he single-handedly killed a 100,000-year-old soul beast to reach level 7, which was not an ordinary level 7. He had twin top-level martial spirits, soul rings, soul bones, and configuration that even Extreme Douluo could not compare with. He also had an Ultimate Douluo level of mental power. At this time, Huo Yuhao's mental impact was almost the same for a titled Douluo who had not exceeded level 95. It only took Huo Yuhao 7 years to reach this level. If Huo Yuhao and Tang San started together, Huo Yuhao would have been able to defeat the Golden Generation of the Spirit Hall seven times while Tang San was still carrying stones. When Tang San was competing in the All-Continental Soul Master Competition, Huo Yuhao could already kill a 100,000-year-old spirit beast alone, and he could defeat a Titled Douluo of Tang Hao's level.

Poison, extremely poisonous. After rebirth, Dou Yi didn't want to do anything else. He was entangled with a rabbit all day long. Why wasn't the Snow Emperor beautiful? Or is the auspicious animal not beautiful? By chapter 100, there is still no improvement. As soon as you make some achievements, you will include private information. Logically speaking, your book is a kind of bonus from Huo Yuhao's rebirth of Dou Yi, because no one has written in this genre, otherwise not many people will read your book.

Can the next book allow Tang San to travel through time and become Tang Hao to continue playing the ethics card?

The writing was so good in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages, the sperm got into my head. Is this?

For me, who has read countless strange poison fanfics, things like Douluo must either focus on the details and portray a true and complete view of Douluo, or it must be a fun story with good writing skills. As long as I can accept the setting of this article, I only need to abandon my brain when watching Douluo fanfics, and it will be fun. Vote a few monthly votes to support it

This book could have been completed if the author had not lived, just forget about the word count of that boring erotic trick.

To be honest, I was kind of looking forward to San's Xiaowu wearing it too, and becoming one with Huo's Xiaowu😁

I have never read a fanfic that is so enjoyable. Thank you. When I woke up, I found that I was passed out from the excitement 😆

I've really enjoyed reading these recent chapters, and I unilaterally declare that your book is Dou Er's masterpiece! By the way, there is nothing wrong with this little thing. What is the author planning to write next? Why don't you make a second part? 😃

Hey hey

Basically, it was fully booked, and the remaining half was because I opened a limited free card. Don't blame me.