My Evolution Tank

What this type lacks most is details and imagination. For example, use your house as a mortgage to get a bank loan, use the down payment, and then pay in installments to buy a warehouse, several shops, and several cars. On the pretext of doing business, you can store rice, oil, meat, vegetables, fruits, etc. In the warehouse. When I hire a decoration company to decorate a shop, I use quality as an excuse to decorate slowly. In this way, payment can be delayed In the end, I used warehouses, shops, and materials to borrow money at high interest rates on the grounds that the business capital could not be opened. Use usury to repay the bank loan to redeem the house, then use everything as collateral to get a loan from another bank. At the same time as the house is being redeemed, it is rented out and sold by an agent at a low price. This set is equivalent to a white wolf with nothing. We have the materials, the fleet, and the warehouse. There is still a lot of money left. Since you are reborn, you must know a few people you can trust. Then they use the excuse of doing business to get them to join the gang. Calculate the time and bring everyone (family) together for a meal to celebrate, a perfect start. As for the end of the world, to be honest, if the country's overall system is not in chaos, it is impossible for zombies and strange beasts to promote the end of the world. The promotion of the current apocalypse must be based on the collapse of nature, supplemented by alien worlds or alien energies, and human nature is used to promote global chaos, each working its own way. The end of the world, the end of the world, many authors believe that alien worlds invade and alien energy dominates. In fact, they are all wrong. In the last days, people should be the main ones. People's minds change, and human nature changes.

It's not a black-tech car with wheels. It's of no use to the reborn. If you want a car, it's better to find a heavy-duty truck with welded steel plates than an RV. Just throw it away and look for it.

I couldn't wait to arrange the heroine from the beginning.

Brother, what you are writing about is the end of the world, not the city. If the heroine can't write it, don't write it. You fully embody the idea of ​​exploiting weaknesses and avoiding strengths 😄

The third golden chapter was completely ruined First, a named woman who was related to the previous life quickly appeared, looking like she was going to have some plot. Do you think the people reading the book are here for women? It's too early for you to have a woman before chapter 50. The first three chapters directly lower expectations. The second is a very blunt ex-girlfriend slap-in-the-face plot. If it can be written, that's all. You just put it in the first three chapters. I haven't read it since then. If I continue to write these three chapters, I won't be able to read the book. If not, I strongly recommend that I change it. It's too crotch-stretching.

After all, it has been baptized by the doomsday. Whenever I meet a rich second generation, I have to pretend to slap him in the face. I don't understand why I write about this rich second generation? If it's really annoying, waiting for the apocalypse to kill him directly is not the same as arguing with a shrew here, and there is no point in talking over it?

Um, I don't know what to say. The book is either good or bad

The main character at the beginning is really stupid. It's okay, there are so many zombies when we arrive, we can't fight anywhere. You have to fight in a crowd of people. It's just his luck that he didn't die. Then when you practice the next day, you won't kill most of the zombies first and then practice. In other words, you were lucky enough not to die. It is really stupid for a reborn person to encounter several life-threatening dangers at the beginning. You don't feel like a reborn person at all. Who is a reborn person so stupid? If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, you would have died long ago.

The chariot and the Rubik's Cube space are indeed more in line with the superpowers you want in the apocalypse. The power combination is quite reasonable. But the plot feels a bit awkward, especially the rich second generation and the ex-girlfriend. Uh-huh.

The writing is too immature, please come on author

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I can't see what the main plot is

Author, your settings are inconsistent. Blood rain can corrode metals and houses, so can your RV withstand the blood rain? What's the point of buying an RV if you can't afford it?

Doomsday stories and zombie stories, I really can't stand them.

The hero saves his money-hungry ex-girlfriend and the ex-girlfriend's nouveau riche boyfriend. The key point is whether the nouveau riche is trying to deal with the hero. I can't stand it anymore.

I don't understand why you always use fake names. It's like people know you by your real name. Or are you saying that others can harm you by using your real name?