A Journey to the Heavens Starting from Tokyo Kaitan

I read the latest chapter from the beginning in one breath, and I can clearly feel that the author is a horror film lover, and he is a very innovative and thoughtful person, because he is trying to combine elements from various horror films and combine them with his own understanding and then put them into the novel. Therefore, I affirm the author's thoughts and ideas, which is very good, and I appreciate it very much. But there is a major flaw, and that is the author's writing skills. If you read it carefully, you will find that there are many unfluent sentences and incorrect sentences in the novel, which will have a huge impact on the reader's reading and understanding. It is recommended that the author check it himself after finishing the writing, correct the illogical and confusing places, and improve the fluency of the sentences. It does not require much literary talent, just to the extent that the reader can still understand the meaning even when reading quickly. In fact, just study the language and layout of those great writers. You will find that their words are very easy to understand. When reading their novels, readers can quickly grasp the meaning of the sentences even if they read ten lines at a glance, and the readers will not have to stop to understand. I hope the author can pay attention to it! I really hope the author can go further and further!

Does the author know about Spoon Ghost? Unless you are beaten to death by him with a spoon, he will always protect you from something else hurting you.

The protagonist's character, thoughts, and actions are not good enough, so he can only rely on luck to survive in the world of ghost stories. I don't dare to confirm the random ability at the beginning. This is relying on you. You don't know the information immediately. Conceive use. The New World dares to assert that without identity, the country will not accept it. Are you a super wise person? In contact with the strange heroine, you dare to go deep without any support. It's just as irritating as the character in a ghost movie who says not to pull the fragrance but pull the fragrance instead. Action is sometimes cautious and sometimes relaxed. Just a plot tool. The beginning, the reversal, the twists and turns, and the ending are probably all borne by one person. Everything serves the plot, there is no fixed character

The Lord of Desire is born from the desires of all living beings. His face has an invisible allure to all living beings, causing them to have desires. However, those who have desires are slaves, because they are born from the desire of all living beings. Desire is the source of their power. If all living beings are immortal, desire will last forever.

After seeing Chapter 101, I was directly fed into the debate. You are a weird talker. You have extraordinary power, but you are afraid of mortals. You are awesome. You have given up. It's disgusting.

That year, I was sitting in the cursed house, with Sadako on the TV, Shirai's stories in my ears, a pen fairy plate beside me, and the website of Hell Girl on the computer. I put my hands in my pockets and didn't know what horror was.

After reading Chapter 3, the protagonist is a combination of timidity, brainlessness, cowardice and lack of decisiveness. I would like to ask the author, do you have any grudge against your own work? With such a personal design, if nothing else, as long as the protagonist is decisive and doesn't expose his inner cowardice at every turn, it will be interesting to watch.

So the protagonist just gets Tomie's charm ability? A little disappointed😔I thought it was the concept-like infinite rebirth and infinite clones

Urban Ghost Story: The Holy Spirit: A saint who was a fascination and admired by thousands of people during his lifetime. He was the incarnation of the Holy Spirit walking in the world. People were always obsessed with his appearance and were reluctant to refuse all the requests of the Holy Spirit. After death, the Holy Spirit will turn into light and fly into the universe to the hometown of the Holy Spirit - the m78 Nebula Kingdom of Light🤔

Is this protagonist so stretched? It's an urban legend that after being blocked by some ordinary people, he could only teleport away? Don't you even have the courage and strength to fight? And the series of actions that Fu Jiang coerced were simply insane.

The countermeasures have just begun, and I feel so frustrated. In addition, there are so many characters and monsters that are confusing, and the proportion of primary and secondary is unbalanced.

I feel like this protagonist was pretty good at first, with a normal IQ. When I was dragged to 1988 by adding coconut before and after it was released, I felt that the protagonist's IQ suddenly dropped by more than one level. In the past, he dared to talk to the monster about risking his life, but later he was actually threatened by a girl. The most ridiculous thing is that the girl even invited a group of people to come over and play. I seriously doubt whether the protagonist is being threatened or enjoying it. The author said before that the protagonist fell into the period of 1952 because he thought it was safe and there was no sense of crisis, so he was so weak. Well, this has already been pushed back to 1988 by Jia Ye. Why does it feel like the protagonist is still controlled by his lower body? I can't see the character that dared to risk his life with him before. The characters of the protagonists before and after don't match at all.

It's too chaotic, it's participation for the sake of participation, it's too fast-paced. The transition is too fast. The description of a day is also not detailed enough. As an author, you can slow down the pace and plot progression. Weaken some settings and don't add plot just for the sake of settings. It was a mess by the end. The protagonist does things without purpose. Like a wandering spirit (after going to that weird company ="#000000">). Take things as they come. This scene hasn't been explained clearly yet, and once it's explained clearly, it immediately goes to the next one, one after another, more and more, and it's impossible to watch. I think the protagonist's goal, purpose, and strength should make some progress. In terms of plot, participation should be slowed down. In terms of connection, experience and various things can be involved, and don't change too suddenly.

I just finished reading the book and checked it out

I read a very interesting Infinite Stream before. The copies of the book were all about "Cthulhu", "Higan Island" and "Fujiang". The creativity is also good, but the author's writing style is not good and the writing is sloppy 😰

I think the evolutionary direction of the protagonist's ability should be to have absolute control over his own clone. The clone can transform into anyone or any animal. If necessary, the clone can be sacrificed in exchange for powerful power. Transferring to the enemy can split the soul clone with different personality and outlook, and possess the soul clone in the enemy's soul, and unknowingly change the enemy's personality and outlook through the continuous influence of the clone

The author will publish a character list when it is released.

Will the author create a large collection of ghosts in the future, such as the hell lord Nailhead who chases ghosts, Pennywise the clown in The Return of the Clown (the setting in the original novel The Dark Tower is an eternal entity in a certain macrocosm), and the ghost nun (real name Valak) who is one of Solomon's seventy-two pillars of demons in The Conjuring 2. Thinking about these ancestral bosses getting together makes me very excited!

The only one who can defeat Kaidan is Kaidan. If you can't defeat Kaidan, then join them and become Kaidan.

The first two books were pretty good, but after only about 10 chapters, the author started writing randomly and forgot all about the settings of his novel. Forget it, the plot was off-kilter, a bit like the diary I kept in elementary school. I wrote whatever came to my mind. It was obviously at level 4, how could it be at the same level as level 1?

It's a mess, with a hammer here and a hoe here, but no main thread.

In fact, Kamen Rider can be regarded as an urban legend😋A certain King of Demon Time

What you were best at back then was ghosts and tokusatsu. After writing this, you can write about the upcoming Ultraman. I hope you write this book well. After all, in my opinion, the ghosts you wrote were better than the tokusatsu heroes.

After writing more than ten chapters, the author seems to have forgotten that the protagonist does not speak Japanese.

Let's talk more about Junji Ito's weird stories

Do you understand what you are writing?

Speechless, I have read two books this week 😅

At the beginning, the male protagonist chose the latter between sleeping on the street and strange incidents. Although it was somewhat evil due to the hydrocephalus and the rubber pipe, it was actually understandable. First of all, sleeping on the street in Japan is very risky. Since sleeping on the street will hinder traffic, Japan's Road Traffic Law clearly stipulates this behavior as illegal. People who sleep on the street multiple times will also be arrested by the police. The protagonist is a Chinese, doesn't speak Japanese, lives on the streets, and doesn't have any identification documents. Isn't this very suspicious? Is it very possible that he was arrested by the Japanese police and then handed over to the Japanese Public Security Bureau (the successor of the Super High School Division) for interrogation because of the many suspicions about him? Guizi and Sadako, let me ask you how to choose! Sadako is more or less anthropomorphic, and the Japanese police officers still have the style of super high school. I would choose Sadako, at least I know what Sadako is like in general, but I can't even imagine how cruel the Japanese police officers can be.

A bit perverted, but that's it🥵🥵🥵

After reading Chapter 20, I really feel nothing. What on earth is the protagonist doing? It's really rubbish. The more I read, the more boring I get. I ran away.