Really Not a Legendary Trainer

Just read the beginning, let me tell you my own opinion. To be honest, I really can't fill the role of the protagonist. Otherwise, you are an aborigine who doesn't know much about Pokémon, or you are a time traveler who knows almost everything about Pokémon. As a result, you gave me a protagonist who grew up from Xiaozhi's perspective. Since the protagonist knows that it may be a parallel world, why doesn't he think that he is Xiaozhi's peer? ? Finally, there is a system, which can only be said to be neither fish nor fowl (personal opinion, save some sbzhao things)

How to say it? I feel awkward for no reason. It feels like I am forcing myself to pretend to be something. It seems that the people around me either have no IQ or are overly enthusiastic, and the protagonist seems weird, neither like the original nor like he has Ash's memory. It seems that the four things are different, and the article looks very distorted.

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Very nice, traditional Pokémon writing, I haven't seen it in a long time. More, it's not enough😍

Come on, brother, I love you👄I love you (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

Not bad, you can take good care of it first (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

After reading the previous part, in general, there are some language errors and many typos. The plot is okay but it feels a bit too bland. Maybe some other opportunities can be added. A good villain, the combat aspect also feels a bit bland. The author may be able to add some reversals, read it first, or use unexpected fighting methods to explore moves like Xiaozhi and get a spinning shield. If the author has time, he can check and correct typos and grammatical errors, which can increase the reader's reading experience.

Dear Qinyu, keep up the good work

What kind of spirits do the protagonists have now?

There are too many typos and omissions😅😅😅