
I Am a Black Flag in the World of Immortality
我在修仙界当黑旗
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 37k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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13Chapters
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One thing to say I don't understand what the black flag means? What does it mean? Why must it be called a black flag system I think most people may have this question, but the author did not explain it, which may lead to dismissal. It's just possible, or maybe I'm ignorant. Then, I always feel that the prison break of the Immortal World version of Shawshank Redemption is not very appropriate. In addition, there are quite a lot of typos. It is recommended to modify it The pace is a little slow, and the character design is not particularly outstanding (don't worry about this). The main reason is that Golden Finger cannot make me intuitively feel powerful. These are things that I think are almost interesting. You can refer to them Of course I have good points For example, the elements of the first chapter are basically all there, who am I, where am I, what do I want to do, what are my abilities The author has thought of these. Logically speaking, when these are all present, there is basically no problem signing the contract, so where is the problem? In my opinion, one is that the entry point at the beginning is relatively crude, using a spoon to escape from prison, the author is a Shawshank fan, hahaha The second is that Goldfinger cannot feel the awesomeness The third is that the event is too small, there is no conflict, the whole process There is no emotion or expectation, the only expectation is the system... But I don't understand the awesomeness of the Black Flag system, or I can only know it by looking back, but this way I can't see the back at all The above is only my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it