Ordinary People: Immortality Begins with the Qixuanmen Liver Experience

4 Books. This level can only be said to be too stupid.

This female character is good and that female character is also good. It's hard to tell who is better. It's hard to beg the author to write a big letter. The female characters live a happy life with the male protagonist. Book friends who have the same hobbies as me like me and those who don't have the same hobbies as me just pretend they didn't see it. Don't curse. Last time someone scolded me and I was banned for a year.

I added a lot of secondary settings, but it's a pity that the level is not good enough and the settings collapsed.

Gaining proficiency is a bit slow. Don't get stuck with so much experience at level one. It's not that fun at the moment.

Find a class, you will starve to death if you keep writing.

Yes, Zhang Tie was saved. Many other fan fictions ignored Zhang Tie's fate. The protagonist was simply a native.

Do you accept the heroine? ? Take the heroine in

Don't go to the Bloody Forbidden Land if you don't accept Nangong Bowl, otherwise it will be poisonous

Come on, I'll keep it for now. I'll look at it when I get to 100 photos. Who is the heroine?

Faint! I cut it off so quickly😂 I originally said I would hold on and check it out.

The writing is still good, there is no need to stop updating.

Do you want to write hundreds of chapters for one city?

It's better not to push your cultivation too hard, otherwise it's better to just give up on this golden finger and just become a mortal and cultivate immortality.

I'm not calling you invincible, just keep writing at your own pace, but don't put too much pressure on the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, when Han Li comes, he's already at the eighth level of Qi Refining, and you're still at the fourth level. It doesn't matter how much higher it is. If you're one level higher, you can have the ninth level of Qi Refining.

I like the rhythm of this plot, come on author

How can I put it, it's okay, I'm a fan of Mortals, but the way you write it is a bit like that book about dual cultivation, so it doesn't feel right.

The heroine is Nangong Wan, and there is only one heroine 😂😂

The book is almost 100,000 words long. To be honest, this book is the author's first real novel. Those before were just for self-entertainment. But as I write recently, I have discovered that there are quite a few problems. I would like to ask readers to clarify their doubts. This book has two directions. What kind of fanfic do you want to read? I hope you can enlighten me. 1. Participate in the whole process of the original work, quickly pass the plot, and change the fate of the original characters 2. Mortals cultivate immortality, watch the protagonist and Han Li cultivate and become stronger along the way, and truly face the cruel world of immortality. Participate in the original work when the point is reached, and change the fate of the original characters 😃 Please give feedback to the author of Poujie