The Calamity of Purgatory

After killing the gods, there will be no defiance of the sky. Starting from Qin Lie in the Spirit Realm, the pig's feet in his works will often have mentally retarded behaviors, and there will be plots in which the pig's feet are so aggrieved that the readers will feel very uncomfortable. He will even focus on describing how miserable the pig's feet are when they are suppressed, and how aggrieved the pig's feet are in their hearts (refer to the times when Qin Lie in the spiritual realm was forced by the spiritual tribe's apocalypse, coordinates in the Nine Nether Purgatory), this style is unparalleled After reaching the peak, the unparalleled Yu Yuan almost never took the initiative. He was pushed forward by all kinds of people, calculated and beaten in various ways. Except for the pig's feet, all the supporting characters were brave and scheming... At present, it seems that the pig's feet Pang Jian in this book is also in this trend. Didn't you see that someone in the book review area has already called him Pang Ruan (this is not from me) As a long-time fan of the God of Death, it is really sad.

After reading a little bit, I found that the author's ability to create stories is much better than before. However, to be honest, the character of the protagonist you created now would not have said anything ten years ago. I think the spirit of the God of Death is more suitable for today, because today's society is more impetuous and violent. People read online articles just for the simple pleasure. Some people can't stand the twists and turns of the story. I think the author's novels are very wonderful in shaping other novels. Today's novels, especially those in the starting point, can be summed up in one sentence: the protagonist cannot suffer any losses, and the protagonist must gain anything. The author's works written in large letters are still very mature. Readers of Qidian prefer to kill decisively, so the pace will be faster. A lot of people would definitely criticize the previous protagonist's character in today's online articles. It would be better if the protagonist's character is stronger. Just like the last novel, the protagonist has been pushed away. Readers will bring themselves into the novel. The author will consider the excitement and completion of the work, but readers will consider more what they will do as the protagonist. Therefore, the old villain protagonist must have more subjective initiative, that is, he must take the initiative to fight for it and cannot passively accept it. Many people feel that they are cowardly, and they even have no way to do anything about it. Isn't it cowardly? The previous story is very exciting, and the copy is also very exciting. But there was one important thing that was not done well, which was the spirit and the character of the protagonist. The protagonist in the end was not as exciting as the supporting characters. In my mind, Lao Ni is on the same level as those like Jing Wuhen. I hope Lao Ni will adjust soon and his works will be sold well as soon as possible.

I didn't expect that one day I would see Ni Cangtian at the starting point... 😭 Tears, boss, you were one of the gods of fantasy literature back then. Now the others have either condensed their godhood and formed an immortal golden body, or they have become transcendent and far away from the mortal past. The boss started over again, feeling like things were different...

The current shortcomings of this book are that there is no main plot. The main plot cannot be to go to the sky to find his sister. If this is the main plot, it will be boring... He can find his sister at any time, but it is said to be difficult and regarded as a goal... The second upgrade is too casual and too fast, and there is no sense of substitution. It is too watery. , But he still controls the pace of upgrading well, so the entire network has hundreds of thousands of subscriptions. The third logic is almost meaningless. The logic of many things seems to have no thinking and is very far-fetched. I force myself to explain it. The fourth point of showing off is too old, and it is still a very middle-class routine! Priority: The update is great. Although it is very watery, it can be seen that the author still tried hard.

Seeing that so far since the book was released, so many people have been persuaded to quit and complain about the first chapter... I think you should make some modifications, Lao Ni. The first is that you can't retain people, the second is that the plot arrangement is really not good, and the third is the commercial performance of the book Judging from the previous work After the elders of Qisha Valley took away Ling Yushi in the domain, they were able to arrange for the entire Ling family to settle down (Qin Lie refused to go) The lord of Geshiliyuan City was accepted as a disciple by Red Demon Sect Fang Yao, and the people around him were also accepted and protected Similar plots were common in previous games, wouldn't they be more appropriate than this opening of "kidnapping the younger sister, but throwing away the elder brother"? For the remaining readers When the protagonist reaches the first realm, or the sect where his sister is, and sees the bastards inside, they will provoke and look down on the protagonist even though they are outmatched, and look like a villain, which will remind people of this ghost start. . . Then respond to the reader. Although (most likely) I will continue to read it because the writing is really good now, but wouldn't it be better if this kind of disconnection could be avoided? A close start In the previous article, it was written that Sun Bin praised Pang Lin as "Practice genius, a unique treasure" and "Extremely rare in the upper world", but in the following article, it was written that this "genius" could not even be taken away and taken care of by a "mortal brother". . . . . . Is it expressing [The world of cultivating immortals has strict rules]? 🌹 The latest chapter also makes it clear that the rules are only for the weak, so for the sake of a genius, Pure Land takes a little care of "an ordinary person" and disappears Then it is written thatPang Lin can meet each other within a hundred years after breaking through to the Dongxuan Realm, and said that it is not a problem for Pang Lin to do it. . . . . Uh-huh, want to express [The difficulty of cultivating immortality and Pang Lin'sgenius]? 🌹 Nowadays, there are many such people in the third realm, and some geniuses can even do it at the age of 2 or 30 It can be speculated that in the second realm and the first realm, will Pang Lin's "Practice genius and unparalleled treasure" be all over the streets? How does this show that Pang Lin is extremely rare in the upper world? 😡😡😡! ! ! Current handicap! ! ! 😡😡😡 Now that Pang Lin has received the true inheritance of Tianfeng, "Pure Land and the higher-ups are repairing the Tongtian Tribulation Pillar so that Pang Lin can reach the strength of Tianfeng as soon as possible. They must cultivate it carefully no matter what" My sister is so important. The 4th Realm has also been eroded. Aren't you worried about Pang Lin, an "ordinary brother who cannot cultivate immortality"? Why don't Sun Bin and the others go and fish out the "brother who cannot cultivate immortality"? 😡😡😡Are you not worried that this "goddess" will turn into a corpse when you see her brother in the future? Lao Ni speaks😡😆😡 Improvements The elder wants to take away the male protagonist, but the male protagonist is determined to wait for his father to return, so he takes the initiative not to go. Or he is hard-hearted and does not want to rely on this relationship to "get involved", or he is worried that he will be criticized by others if he stays with his sister, so he takes the initiative not to go. Isn't it better than this?

Realm of Cultivation 1. Refining Qi, 2. Channeling, 3. Cleansing marrow, 4. Innateness, 5. Dongxuan, 6. Concentration, 7. Soul wandering, 8. Nirvana, 9. Immortality, 10. True God. First Realm Four major continents and forces (number of true gods)—— Eastern Land: Taiyi Divine Kingdom, Haotian Divine Kingdom, Yuanqing Divine Kingdom (4 in total) Nanyuan: Ghost Festival Zong (2), Jiuli Zong (1) Xirang: Pure Land (2), Tianbao Zong (1) North Ruins: Desolate Realm (2), Ancient Fa Zong (1) Two True Gods of Sanxiu Second Realm Holy Spirit Continent: Dragon Cave (Tianfeng, Thunder Dragon, Black Turtle, Yuan Snake) Moyuan Continent: Demon Sect (Three Peaks of the Immortal Realm), Black Valley) Qitian Continent: Jianlou (No. 1 In the Immortal Realm of Li Zhaotian), Tianshui Ze Third Realm: Two continents - Qiantian, Xuanyou Power (affiliated) - Hongshan (Zhou), Galaxy Alliance (Ning, He), Blood Moon (Shangguan, Ouyang), Lieyang Sect (Dong, Su), Yinling Temple The Blood Moon practices the blood spirit teaching techniques of destruction in the second realm The fourth realm Seven families - Dong family, Zhou family, Shangguan family, Ouyang family, Ning family, He family, Su family Dark ghost ( An organization of wandering loose cultivators) The Fifth Realm Disconnected from the Fourth Realm, suspected to be related to the strange fog Bagua City, White Bone City, Black Wood Village, Blood Prison Village, Dead Souls Town, Yinling Town, Ghost Town. Gun, knife, sword, hammer, spear, mirror, flag (There is one weapon in a city) Protagonist's skills/treasures: Hutian Qi Nourishing Technique: Hutian Sect's Qi Nourishing Technique Jue (Destroyed by the Sword Tower) Great Creation Holy Body: The Body Refining Technique of the "Creation Sect" (Destroyed by the Sword Tower) Shocking Spear: Explosive Dance, Silver Moon Ring, Shocking Edge Original Demon Sword: Demon Sword Sect Sect Master Mo Nan Made of Heavenly Demon Bronze Door Pendant: Dark Giant Anaconda, World-eroding Vine, Black Turtle, Beehive, Hell Soul Bee Thunder Pond: Something created by Thunder God Heart of Winter: Something of Ice Demon Ice Soul Demon Art: Ice Demon's Magic Jue (Ice Demon was replaced by the Cold Crystal Goddess) Attack Magic: Due to the existence of the Chaos Spiritual Sea, each Magic Jue can be combined to create new ones Main characters: Pang Jian (protagonist) Pang Lin (sister/descendant of Tianfeng) Luo Hongyan (one of the masters of the temples) Li Zhaotian (master) Zhou Qingchen (good friend) Li Jie (Tianbao Li family) Li Yuqing (Tianbao Li family) Yuxin (Tiannu) Qi Qingsong (good friend) Dong Tianze (Tianfeng Divine Guard) Zhao Yuanqi (Hongshan) Zhuang Yuyan (Jianlou) Wu Yuan (Demon Sect) God position: Thunder Dragon (Old Thunder Dragon from Dragon Cave) God of Purgatory (father of the protagonist) Luo Hongyan (one of the masters of the temples, high god) Han Jing goddess (middle god) Yang Luo (similar to a spider, middle god) You Kui (middle god) God) Thunder Beast God (spiritual beast raised by Thunder Lord, low-ranking god) Insighters (suspected to have 9?) Yanlie (God of Fire) 15 humans 7 in the 5th realm Original introduction:  "The Tribulation of Purgatory" In purgatory in a different place, all living beings are imprisoned and struggling to survive. One day, in the eternally dark lower world, a young man was blessed by divine power and was able to glimpse the upper world. He was fortunate enough to see wonders that had never appeared in the magnificent dream. Only when he was young did he realize that there was a heaven outside the world, and now he was no longer content with being ordinary, and vowed to reach heaven step by step. ... Ps: This is Lao Ni's new work after "Killing God" and "Spirit Realm".

"The Tribulation of Purgatory" In purgatory in a different place, all living beings are imprisoned and struggling to survive. One day, in the eternally dark lower world, a young man was blessed by divine power and was able to glimpse the upper world. He was fortunate enough to see wonders that had never appeared in the magnificent dream. Only when he was young did he realize that there was a heaven outside the world, and now he was no longer content with being ordinary, and vowed to reach heaven step by step. ... Ps: This is Lao Ni's new work after "Killing God" and "Spirit Realm".

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Lao Ni, let's write a young and energetic protagonist in the next book. Really don't always suppress yourself first and then become more mature. It would be better if you become more mature and steady mentally. The supporting characters are written as well as ever, and the map is as grand as ever. It stands to reason that the supporting characters are well written, but the main character is unreasonably poorly written. At that time, I was at the starting point, after watching God of Death, I went to see the Great Demon King, the Ten Directions Celestials and the Spiritual Realm that followed. I was so excited to see the past events 🤓

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