Douluo: the Beginning Is Full of Soul Power. Second Lady, Please Calm Down.

Let's be fair, it's okay to like Zhu Zhuqing. After all, Zhu Zhuqing is the only clean figure in Shrek, but author, you have to let the protagonist be her licking dog when he is young and at the golden age of cultivation. It is really too self-degrading. For a girl, the more she licks her, the more she goes on a date and ignores you. This is really a shame for men. Isn't Feng Xiaotian's negative teaching material not profound enough?

I didn't read it, but took a look at the synopsis and title of the book. Um, full of soul power, I was assigned to be a bodyguard. I won't tell you what the father of Pig's Feet is.

It's so poisonous, I'm speechless, I'm really speechless. Isn't it inappropriate for the protagonist to be a dog licker? Zhu Zhuqing is Dai Mubai's fiancée, and the protagonist is rushing to be her guard, wasting his precious training time to be a dog licker. I'm speechless.

The author doesn't know what reasons the protagonist should have to forgive his father. For a thinking adult, and an adult whose mind is not twisted. Do you think anyone would think that a person who directly beats a two-year-old child, his own biological son, is a normal person? Anyway, I am now a senior in high school. If asked in our class, is this a normal person? There are dozens of people in our class, and no one would call him a normal person. The protagonist may sympathize with and pity him (love and the ignorant thoughts of feudal society), but he definitely cannot agree with or forgive him. Especially if the protagonist forgives the person who was beaten (if he forgives the protagonist, is he really a normal person?) To be realistic, let me give you an example. I don't know how old my cousin was when he was young, but he was six years old anyway. I was beaten by my mother for a trivial matter. The beating was very severe, and I was pricked with needles after the beating. My cousin still remembers it now (my cousin lives with me and goes to the same high school) A child with an unformed outlook on life remembers it so clearly, you think the protagonist can't remember it. I think your description seems to whitewash the protagonist's father.

As for the issue between Tang Hao and Tang San, Tang San was purely foolish and filial. If Tang San was not a time traveler, in Tang Hao's case, he would have killed his son with his own hands Don't write about fatherly love. In this case, this group of people could kill their own sons with their own hands. What kind of family affection is nonsense. Not all parents have a conscience. To give another biological example, my cousin's biological mother is now 20 years old. She has stayed with his biological mother for no more than two years, and in the past two years, she has mostly gone to support him during the Chinese New Year and holidays. My grandmother, my cousin's grandmother, takes care of me most of the time. But he raised his niece for nearly four years. I didn't get a penny for tuition fees or normal living expenses. You tell me that he is a qualified mother. My uncle is the only one who still has some humanity. Come back and take a look. Well, for example, my cousin had pneumothorax more than a year ago and he needed surgery. My cousin's parents are only 67km away from us. But they didn't arrive for three days. Guess why? My uncle is asking for money from my aunt. My aunt takes care of all the money, but my aunt doesn't take the money. Afterwards, my uncle argued for a few days and couldn't stand it any longer. Then when he came back, he used a credit card for a loan, and then my grandpa and my mother pooled together a total of 10,000 yuan. I took it too. (My cousin's mother went to school with my cousin, and I never took the initiative to see him. He always went to his mother's place.) You expect these inhumane guys to have family ties, you can't believe it. Don't write any reasons. It's better to say that if you have to, you can't think from the perspective of someone who treats their children just because of their own ideas. You can think from the perspective of others, okay? Author, the three views you wrote are really mind-boggling

This dog-licking novel can be used as a negative teaching material in novels, but if you really want to compare it with other good novels, then I have only one sentence for this novel, disgusting. You deserve it, you don't have a ticket, you deserve it

What the author wrote is really speechless. A genius who is born with full soul power works as a bodyguard for a young lady who is born with level 7 soul power. You, even the Wuhun Palace, have not abused the genius so much.

It's so fucking licking, I'm really just in love

Full Soul Bodyguard is such a talented person. I don't even have the desire to read this introduction. Why don't the author think of a new subject?

I was so frustrated watching it. After reading more than 40 chapters, I have been living for others. The time traveler is still the kind who knows the plot. He is innately full of soul power, has top martial arts eyes, and can recite the Tao Te Ching, but he still tm To be Zhu Zhuqing's dog licker, the protagonist's father beat the protagonist with a whip when he was two years old. Later, he still felt that it was his fault, and the birth was not decided by him. The protagonist's mother died in childbirth, and the protagonist's father vented his anger on the protagonist. He actually felt that it was right, and even compared himself with Tang Hao, father and son. The author is still setting the time traveler.

I have been working as a guard for Zhu Zhuqing since I was 12 years old. I also described how good the relationship was, but then I left without even saying a word. This does not mean that I don't trust him and I am afraid of leaking the news. 2 I don't have you in my heart at all, and I can't even find you. How can I still pursue this after thinking about it? I can't stand it anymore.

Woohoo. It stands to reason that I am born with full soul power. The son of a marquis. The future titled Douluo Miaozi. If I want to protect me, others should protect me. Live a corrupt aristocratic life. Then use whale gum medicated baths and other resources to practice hard. Then use your foresight to grab the fairy grass and pick up the heroine and then become a god is the normal way to open it. How could he be reduced to being a useless person working as a bodyguard for others? You like Zhu Zhuqing. You can write a letter asking your father to propose marriage. How could Zhu Zhuqing get engaged immediately after awakening his martial spirit? 🔨

I haven't read it yet, but what is the concept of full soul power? Douluo is basically stable.

Is the heroine Zhu Zhuqing? ? Sorry, I don't like her at all, although she was indeed pitiful and strong in the early stages. But after integrating into Shrek, he gradually brought in the idea of ​​​​monsters, and even recognized Dai Mubai's women as resources! Later it turned into a mollusk! As long as he appears, he will always be attached to Dai Mubai. I really don't like it!

Published with less than 100,000 words? What's going on with you? You are really a little genius, the author, who is full of energy to be a guard. This plot is comparable to the "carefully planned" plan of the Third Young Master.

Writing dog-licking articles is destined to fail. God gives you the opportunity to be a human being, but if you don't cherish it, you have to become a dog-licking article.

The protagonist should be a true portrayal of the author. You need to understand it.

The protagonist is really useless when he hands over his trump cards to outsiders during the game, and so is Shui Yue'er, who dares to give to others and is too poisonous.

The first and second ones have no attack power. If you encounter someone, just wait for death.

It's a bit poisonous, not because of the plot, but because of the writing style. There's too much inner drama between the protagonist and the supporting characters. Poor portrayal makes the protagonist's personality unlikable. There is a problem with the soul ring configuration. It has the same nature as being entangled with Bluesilver Grass. The beginning was inexplicable for 800 years, forcing the old father to become blind. The conflict points are not developed, and it all depends on the protagonist's inner drama from God's perspective. In the early stage, the Tao Te Ching cultivation is full of soul power. Don't use God's perspective and inner drama, use the characters' own behavior to interpret the conflict between father and son. And because of the conflict and royal pressure, they have to be Zhu's bodyguard. I know the author likes Zhu Zhuqing very much, but the protagonist created by the inner drama is too licky. Sometimes it doesn't have to be so obvious. The positioning of this book is actually to lick Zhu Zhuqing, but it can be shaped from the conflict of actions. I don't keep saying that she is Bai Yueguang, I want to be a guard, and it doesn't matter if I lose some cultivation speed~~ In fact, this book has many conflict points, and the story unfolds with a good sense of expectation, such as the conflict between father and son, the oppression of the royal family, the close school beauty, and leaving without saying goodbye. These unfolding and reversal can stimulate emotions. But unfortunately, everything was quickly explained by the inner drama of the protagonist. The author's personal thinking from God's perspective covered the protagonist, causing the story to not unfold, and it seemed that the protagonist was too enamored of love. The summary is that we readers can know from God's perspective that the protagonist is licking Zhu, and we even expect the protagonist to intercept Hu Dai Mubai. But the protagonist cannot show it, and even directly tells the reader in his heart that he will lick it, not to practice, and to lick it even if he does not need a soul ring. This is all a matter of the author's writing skills, and the starting point of the plot is not a poisonous one. I'm really looking forward to the book by the heroine Zhu Zhuqing, but the writing of this book is really bad. The above suggestions are not malicious. I hope the author will make progress and bring better stories. Let's encourage each other.

Stop talking about it, poison. He was severely beaten by his father when he was 2 years old. His father can be said to be another Tang Hao. Fortunately, the genius became someone else's bodyguard. Shennong is dead.

Nowadays, everything is used to write novels. Don't the authors still think that they are unconventional and write something different, so they have to put money in sacks?

A mentally retarded article. I am born with full soul power to be a bodyguard. Is this something a normal person would come up with? It doesn't matter if you don't read the dog-licking article

Six was made to look like a waste, another one of those pretending to be pigs and eating tigers

It's the end of the month. If you don't have a monthly pass, you should know what the ingredients are.

It's simply a retarded article. The main character, the time traveler, is not that psychologically fragile. After all, as an adult, how could his father treat him like that? How could he reconcile so easily? Secondly, Zhu Zhuqing is three years younger than you, and your relationship with her is inexplicable. You have to be someone's dog licker, and the son of a marquis works as a guard for the daughter of a duke. He shouldn't ruin his title so much, which is just one level lower.

I think this is supposed to be a single female protagonist, Zhu Zhuqing. It's not that I like harems, I just feel that Douluo fanfic is really not suitable for a single female protagonist, because no female character is outstanding enough to be described with a lot of effort and ink, and is not worthy of being licked by the protagonist. Zhu Zhuqing is relatively normal in the original work, but she is just an aristocratic woman who is unwilling to fail and wants to be a queen. What she resists is not the Xingluo system but her own destiny of failure. She does not break the rules. She is a normal person but has no outstanding ideas. Her character is too ordinary. In the early stage, Ning Rongrong was a spoiled brat, and in the later stage, he was mediocre after being PUA. As for Xiao Wu, it was a mystery that I couldn't understand, and his character was inconsistent in every aspect. The female characters in the villain camp all have their own brains, and none of them deserves to be pampered or licked. If we were to write a single female lead, we might as well find some female supporting characters who had few appearances. At least they didn't have enough scenes to show their brainless side. As for these main characters, it's okay to have a harem instead of a kidney.

If the protagonist reaches level 90, he can use the evil element Emperor Tian as the ninth ring.

It's a pity that there is only one female protagonist, but she is a Japanese devil

Can't it be updated in one go?