Swallowed Star: Lord of Origin Weight

Let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. I think the opening section is very boring. The main character is indecisive. Secondly, it only briefly talks about the genetic talent of the protagonist without highlighting the so-called perfect artistic conception of the protagonist. Secondly, the plot is mixed. In the early stage, he is not from the earth, but he also describes the apprentice level and planetary level in detail. In my eyes, it is a fake original. I can't say how good the writing is, I can only say it is terrible. To sum up, I wanted to write about everything in the early stage, but I couldn't write with the feeling of devouring genius. This is probably the reason why my writing skills are obviously bad, but my grades are very poor. It is recommended that the next book or Earth Born should carefully describe the low levels. Alien Born recommends a quick transition to the genius battle.

Author, can you take a good look at the Swallowing Starry Sky? Thanks to colleagues, at least you, can you read the original work twice more? I don't have any objection to you changing the small settings. You always have to write your own stuff about this, hey, but tell me how a prison-breaking prison master disconnected the network of other people's virtual universe? That damn miss Yuanzu's most powerful secret method. He, even the Prison Breaker, can't cut off the Lord of the Universe. Even the strongest person in the universe can't do it.

The protagonist of the time traveler said to himself: Isn't Qian Wu very poor? How could he give me a cheat book worth a thousand points? He lives in Bengbu.

The cosmic state in the Koti era has also reached 1008. Changes in the human cosmic state can only occur during the original ancestor period. Because the existence of the original ancestors in the universe has increased, and because the original ancestors have been sealed, the universe has decreased. After that, there will be giant axes, and there cannot be any changes.

I don't want to explain it anymore. There are always people who don't read the introduction carefully. Anyone who talks about introduction issues in the future will be deleted! ! !

Don't write so much about your family, it really doesn't look good

Ever since Luo Feng came out, the protagonist's name has been invisible.

It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's performance. Like before, he clearly has the power of the universe overlord but deliberately doesn't show it. He has to pretend to be despised by others. Also, this time, you don't reveal your true identity and directly use the most powerful secret method to pretend to be the master of the universe. Then you go on an adventure in the universe sea and pretend to have obtained the ultimate treasure weapon. And the Zerg Queen just agreed to pay for a high-level treasure palace and promise not to do anything? Swallowing the Starry Sky doesn't have anything like a destiny oath. Do you know if she did something secretly? Although he is obviously very strong, he deliberately hides it, even if there is a reason, he feels aggrieved. It would be right to think more about it in reality, but isn't this kind of fictional novel just for fun? It feels like the protagonist spends almost all of his time in seclusion after breaking through to immortality, and participates in major events that everyone must participate in. Even if he wants to fight, he has to pretend to be very strong but he just can't show it. Even if you have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, you won't be able to eat the tiger just by looking at you pretending to be a pig.

I haven't ordered it in the past two days. Let's see how many chapters it takes to siege and kill a machine. Since Luo Feng came out, it has become more and more watery. I think 30% water injection in fan fiction is acceptable, and 70% is okay. After Luo Feng came out, after subscribing to it, it was basically the same as not having read it. Before Luo Feng came out, this book was quite amazing among the Devouring fandoms (updated status). The writing behind it is not as impressive as before 😒

I just read Chapter 16, let me talk about the shortcomings. 1 The protagonist is a time traveler who has seen the Devouring Starry Sky, but he is not eager to improve his strength after being swallowed, which is unimaginable. Isn't the protagonist afraid that the planet will be discovered and everyone will be made into slaves? Or is this planet already connected to the universe? 2 With reference to the indigenous planets like the Earth, laser cannons were developed based on the ruins of ancient civilizations, and they are not afraid of monsters below the king level at all. After connecting with the universe, we immediately raised monsters to pigs. The planet where the protagonist is located seems to have a pure technological tree that is crooked and unreasonable. It has technological products for communication but no weapons to kill enemies? 3 The protagonist is a time traveler rather than a native. You just want to be a salty fish and don't want to work hard. At least you should work hard to achieve immortality first. First complete the achievement of immortality, and then find a remote area to survive. After the destruction of the original universe, you can directly enter Luo Feng's small universe. You are still an apprentice and you don't want to work hard, so you are still a time traveler?