Douluo Stars Dance with Angels

Emmmm... This novel has a good story and good ideas. However, this writing method and content give me a "running account". After reading dozens of chapters, it gives me the feeling that I am reading a running account 🤫🤫

Finally, I was moved by the Douluo fanfic that didn't have to lick Bibi Dong's crazy lady and Hu Liena's white-eyed fox.

Ling Tian went straight up Qingyun Road, Xuanyuan Sword pointed at Jiutianhen. Yu Luo The world is full of life, Ren Xue smiles and the ice melts.

Lightning warning, Qian Xunji is not dead, but later the author said that he wanted to write Bibi Dong to death. He asked me to say that he was a white-eyed wolf and a rapist. He could be sent down together. Why should he be treated differently?

I don't know why so many people hate Qian Xunji. Is it true that the three senses follow the five senses? Just take one of the wrong things he did and qj Bibi Dong. Bibi Dong has already shown Yu Xiaogang all the things of the Angel Wuhun, and how many titled Douluo there are in the Wuhun Palace, what are the Wuhuns, and what their abilities are. Is this an inappropriate betrayal? It would have been very generous for him not to kill Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang right away. And Bibi Dong is stupid enough to stay with Yu Xiaogang for the rest of his life. Don't you understand your identity? The saint of Wuhun Palace, heir to the Pope. He first betrayed the books of Wuhun Palace, and then he wanted to get involved. Isn't this just treating Wuhun Palace as a big grievance? In Qianxunji's eyes, Bibi Dong has become a traitor to Wuhun Palace, and the only value to Wuhun Palace is talent. Using her body to give birth to an angel martial soul with stronger talent. I asked if there was any problem with him doing this. Remember, this is a fantasy world I don't think Qian Xunji was so cruel as to destroy Bibi Dong, otherwise he wouldn't have died.

The starting point is poisonous, Qianxun is not dead, and is begged by the protagonist. Qian Renxue absorbs the 4320-year-old soul ring and the first and second soul rings of more than 9,000 years.

In fact, Bibi Dong is better, at least she didn't tear Qian Renxue's soul in half and stuffed one half into the auspicious beast and the other half into Xue Qinghe

Qian Renxue's first soul ring is 4320 years? ? ? What nonsense

Why not write the Chamber of Secrets to death? He really deserves to die

Qianxunji and Bibi Dong. Since you want to write like this, then write both of them to death. Keep a rapist like Qian Xunji? Reading with modern ideas? Yes, this is not modern, but I am a modern person. I can accept being killed justly, and I can also accept being killed in a dark way. I cannot accept insults to my personality. No matter where I am, to anyone, insulting my personality is unforgivable! In a word, he may not be a human being because it is set by the author, but I am a human being!

The main character in this system novel is both serious and upright, and Dark Blue adds some jokes to make it funny. But is this kind of waste that relies on the system from the beginning, then despises the system for not being powerful enough, and finally becomes so self-confident that it says nothing and only relies on the system? The result is not yet dependent on the system. You are bossy and don't mind giving a golden finger? A feeling of being a waste, a clown, and a villain succeeding. Therefore, it is difficult to produce a good book based on systematic literature. The plot is not logical and the protagonist is not attractive.

Qian Xunji is okay, Bibi Dong is trying to grab a girl to eat up the Wuhun Palace, and uses the Wuhun Palace's secrets to Gangzi, and lets Gangzi copy the book at will, and he still wants to run away, the white-eyed wolf among white-eyed wolves. In a fantasy worldview, you are the protagonist. What do you do if you have such a swindler who falls in love with a fart trash? It was good enough that he did not let the elders of the enshrinement hall fall into the trap one by one. He even did not do enough in the feudal slavery Douluo.

1. Bibi Dong deserves to be damned. She has been trained by Wuhun Palace since she was a child. She has enjoyed everything that Wuhun Palace has given her, but does not want to repay. Instead, she uses the resources of Wuhun Palace to fund the enemies of Wuhun Palace. In the end, he even had to defect from Wuhun Palace. 2. What is wrong with Bibi Dong? Is it wrong to pursue love? What your Wuhun Palace has lost is just a few resources, but what I, Bibi Dong, have lost is love! 3. Qian Xunji deserves to die, what's there to do with a rapist? If you can't accept Bibi Dong's betrayal of Wuhun Palace, then just kill him. 4. Qianxun Ji Lao was wronged, isn't he a traitor! What's wrong with rape? This is a feudal society. I am the Pope and I am the eldest. Let alone one Bibi Dong, ten Bibi Dongs are nothing. 5. Should you die for rape? In modern legal society, rape is not punishable by death. Why should Qianxun Ji die in feudal society? (The reason why the death penalty for rape is not imposed in modern times is to prevent the perpetrators from choosing to kill and silence themselves in order to cover up the facts of the crime. If the death penalty for rape means death anyway, why not silence them! What if they cannot be found out! This kind of luck will make it easy for the victim to be silenced. Without the death penalty, there will be a measure, so the victim will not be easily silenced and there will be a glimmer of hope for survival.)

I write this first comment with a very uneasy heart. I have read a lot of Douluo fandoms, and each one is more stupid than the last. At the beginning, Qian Renxue, the first soul ring in more than 4,000 years, decisively persuaded him to quit. Can we be more realistic? "Why can't Bibi Dong's second martial soul get a soul ring? It's because his body can't bear it, and when he goes hunting, he's also passed the divine test. Then it's because of the Poseidon's Light that Tang San can give his second martial soul a soul ring. You have no limit to what your awesome body can withstand?" What a fucking nonsense

I hate Bibi Dong the most, the anime beautifies her

Let me make it clear first that I am only talking about some readers and other Lidongwen, not this book I don't know why so many people whitewash Bibi Dong. Some people always think that Bibi Dong became evil only after being bewitched by the Rakshasa God after being raped by Qian Xunji. So how to explain that before she was raped, she told Yu Xiaogang the core secret of Wuhun Palace and wanted to elope with Yu Xiaogang? People like Bibi Dong are typical traitors in the real world. The only difference is that she is a pretty female traitor. Don't talk about Qian Xunji raping her. It's not too much to put a scum like Bibi Dong in the frying pan and cut her with a thousand knives. If you don't understand the poster's thoughts, you can think more about the traitors during the Anti-Japanese War who killed many of our Chinese compatriots. Many people say that Tang San is just pretending to be pure and innocent, I just want to say that it is good. But it pales in comparison to Bibi Dong. I have never seen anyone comment saying that Bibi Dong is a villain who does one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes. If Bibi Dong had not pretended to be better, Qian Daoliu would have spared her life? If she hadn't disguised herself well, would a bunch of people have whitewashed her? If she hadn't been so good at pretending, would there still be a bunch of people supporting her even if she wanted to destroy the world?

You did nothing to pick up a three-year-old child and fucked him up to 4,000+ in the first round? Since this is not as good as directly adding a 10w one in the first ring, it is better to open it completely after cheating like this.

The author's three views are too correct. Hu Liena and Bibi Dong are really just white-eyed wolves. If Bibi Dong were not good-looking, most people would be indifferent. At least I can barely accept it. But Hu Liena is a complete white-eyed fox. In the end, she did not dare to fight for Wuhun Palace and her teacher. The above is my opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

What kind of single heroine? It's just an ugly girl boxing. Not acceptable. 😰

Everything was fine until now, until the main character was inexplicably given a biological sister, which can only be described as inexplicable, embarrassing and pointless. Even if you want to induce revenge and family inheritance, you can just arrange a dying old servant 😰.

There's nothing interesting about this book, just like Tang San's.

Just looking at the previous ones makes me look stupid. There is no one else with this setting. The damage done by NPCs in their 20s is comparable to those in their 60s, and the starting rewards are so awesome. How can I look at this? I have no desire to see it at all.

I don't understand why everyone is blaming Chihiroji. Qianxunji's status is higher than that of the emperor and he needs QJ. Why don't you say it is a favor? Another point is that the angel spirit has influenced Qianxunji for more than 50 years to create the secret room. It is unreasonable. Maybe it is the influence of Rakshasa. It is not impossible for a god to psychologically map Qianxunji. Just look at Bibi Dong's crazy look.

At first glance, it is impossible to go to the trouble of writing "Bellow Poison" and "Twin Martial Spirits". One martial soul is no worse than twins if they are good at it.

Whether it's the system text or the reincarnation, it's not really that important anyway, it's all boring anyway. Why don't they seize or destroy all Tang San's opportunities in one go when there are so many Extreme Douluo at the beginning? The early stage is all about getting along with the heroine or practicing, and anti-corruption can take up a lot of space! It's almost 200 chapters and I haven't taken action against Poseidon Island or the Killing City yet. I'm so kind to my enemy's son. I'm afraid that Tang San won't be able to continue to become a god.

Although I like it, I have never thought about driving the soul beast to the point of extinction.

Author, you know that you have many problems in writing this book. Among them, there are several major problems that prevent you from attracting monthly votes and attention from the audience. First of all, you should explain that the story told in this book is actually very good, but you did not do enough. Let us appreciate it. You gave the protagonist Wuhun , too powerful, early arrangements, identity, great, this is a big problem, first read, "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", I will learn, Han Li, tell you, there is another big problem, don't deliberately target Tang San in the early stage, just make your own plan

It's rare not to lick Bibi Dong's novels 🙂

The original Son of Douluo Continent Fate of the First Douluo Continent should be Qian Renxue, but he was cut off by Tang San, Shura God, and Poseidon.

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