Spy Dawn

The protagonist often flirts with that beautiful woman named Tang, who is interested in him, but he doesn't pursue her. This inevitably raises suspicions. Moreover, what kind of place is No. 76? The protagonist is too innocent, doesn't indulge in lust, and doesn't fight or compete, which makes people very suspicious.

Has the author watched too many spy dramas? The author keeps going to the pharmacy every few days to meet in person to exchange intelligence and receive missions. While there are always excuses for these visits, who goes to a pharmacy every few days? Isn't the author afraid of arousing suspicion? For intelligence work, arousing suspicion means a greater risk of exposure!

Everyone says that Wang's Pharmacy is under suspicion and the protagonist is about to be exposed, but I don't think so. The protagonist never sneaks into the pharmacy; everyone knows beforehand. Even if they suspect something, they can simply check with others to clear themselves of suspicion. Is this why the protagonist kept seeking cover at the pharmacy?

Besides pharmacy issues Another point is that intelligence agents should only know the code name, right? They shouldn't know the real name, or at least an alias.

Why did it end so quickly? When will you write the next book?

Will the protagonist write another spy novel in the next installment?

The plot design is okay, but the writing is too bland, like a primary school student writing a diary. It doesn't show the tension and excitement of espionage or the various twists and turns, and it's not appealing at all. I hope the next book will be even better.

When will the author join the Party?

The protagonist's primary source of intelligence is sneaking into other colleagues' offices to secretly read their wiretap recordings. One or two times might be acceptable, but doing it repeatedly will inevitably expose him.

Don't write the main character too smoothly; a few slip-ups now and then make the story more interesting.