Spy Dawn

The protagonist often has an affair with that Tang beauty. The Tang beauty is interested in him, but the protagonist does not pursue him, which makes people suspicious. Moreover, where is No. 76? The protagonist is too innocent, does not want sex, and does not fight for it, which is very suspicious. The protagonist often goes to the drug store. Although he has an excuse, it makes people doubt that he often goes to the drug store when he has nothing to do. It's better to have a place to convey information, write the information on paper, and then go there to get the information. Only go to the pharmacy if it's absolutely urgent.

Has the author watched too many spy TV dramas? He would go to the drug store every three days to meet face-to-face to deliver information and accept tasks. Although he had a reason to cover every time he went there, how could anyone go to the drug store every now and then without fear of arousing suspicion? For those engaged in intelligence work, as long as suspicion is aroused, the risk of exposure increases! Besides, information can be delivered through dead mailboxes, newspapers, radio stations, radios, etc. Unless there is an emergency, you must have as little contact as possible. You must know that any contact will leave traces. In addition, obtaining information is too taken for granted. You can find yourself every time by peeking at the surveillance records. The information you need goes so smoothly. Just like in a TV series, the protagonist can always find what he wants. The author shouldn't rush to change the copyright of the TV series, and the less people know his personal code name, the better, even internally. After all, the military commander has spies, but in general it can still be watched!

People say that Wangji Drug Store is under suspicion and the protagonist will be exposed, but I don't think so. Every time the protagonist goes to the drug store, he doesn't do it secretly. Others know about it in advance. Even if he is suspicious, wouldn't it be possible to get rid of suspicion by being with other people? Is this also the reason why the protagonist keeps looking for cover when he goes to the drug store?

In addition to the pharmacy problem there is another point that the espionage personnel should only know the code name, right? Can't you know the name? At least it's a pseudonym

Why did it end so quickly? When will I write the next book?

Can I still write a spy novel with the protagonist's second part?

The plot design is okay, but the description is too bland. It feels like a primary school student writing a diary. The excitement and various twists of the spy war are not shown at all, and there is no attraction. I hope I can write better next time.

When did the author join the party organization?

The protagonist's first source of information is to go to other colleagues in the office and directly peek at the monitoring records. It doesn't matter once or twice. If it happens more times, it will definitely be exposed.

Don't write the protagonist too smoothly. Occasionally, there will be some mistakes, which will make it more interesting.