Beast Pirates: Kaido's Wishing Dragon

Author: Have you watched One Piece? Can a general defeat Rocks and Whitebeard? Are you sure your keyboard isn't broken? The original book has already written it very clearly. Rocks destroyed the entire navy, and all the navy suffered heavy casualties. In the end, it was Garp who broke out and joined forces with Roger to defeat Rocks. Whitebeard and the others were not united, and the so-called overlord of the sea was Rocks. It was not until the Valley of Gods War broke out that Rocks died and the sea overlord passed. When it comes to the Navy, Garp recalled in the cartoon that Rocks was unquestionably the strongest at that time, and it also happened in the comics, and Rocks ate the Darkness Fruit. Whitebeard didn't know the weakness because Whitebeard couldn't beat Rocks. How could you know the weaknesses if you can't beat Rocks? You, a navy admiral, can defeat Rocks? You didn't write it like this

The current timeline is 1480. In the original book, Charlotte Lingling only gave birth to one son in 1481, and he had little role and could be replaced. So I want to ask everyone's opinion, should Kaido and Big Mom have a baby? If I give birth, will it be a boy or a girl? What do you suggest for a name? Or it's okay not to give birth. I choose the one with the most likes.

Seeing that Zefa and Zefa are much older than Kai, they are from the Warring States period. The author wrote that Zefa was a small soldier, so I knew that there was no need to read this book. It was too forceful to accept Zefa as a subordinate. Maybe you want to make Zefa a strong enemy, but it's too forceful.

Is the plot about Kaido acting as a mount for that woman serious? Since writing about Kaido focuses on the tyrant style of training, fighting, violence, and ruthlessness, writing such a domineering story makes me sick to my stomach.

Why is there an original character or a female protagonist? This is just the biggest poisonous point in fan fiction.

People gradually progress from babbling to running and jumping. I am a new author. Although I have barely written two or three books, I still don't understand many things. You can feel free to express your opinions about this book. I also want to know what is wrong with my book. As long as the greetings to my family are not mindless, everyone can speak freely. Note: I will definitely delete any curse words.

What Kamen Rider, what will of the planet? Are you sure you are writing a pirate fanfic? You might as well write about Kamen Rider. Don't you feel uncomfortable if you can't understand how two works with such different painting styles are stuck together?

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Personally, I feel that the most toxic ones are Kamen Rider, the heroine, and the One Piece Consciousness. I shouldn't write about these.

Is this written about Kaido? Haha! Let's just write about the days when the system took away Kaido's body😄!

Phantom beasts are not transformers. Huan Lao Ge, in describing the details of transformation, you are eating a fantasy beast species, not a transforming device.

It can only be said that the author added too many elements. Singing is meaningless in the world of pirates. You are not like Brooke or Diva, so it feels like it was forced on. And the writing of the woman in the Kingdom of Flowers cannot be said to be satisfactory. I can only say Thai pants.

After reading Chapter 50, Ji Yunying is a poisonous point, which is acceptable to me. Also, it is a random relationship to add drama to Oda's uncertain character. For example, Hawkeye's grandfather is an admiral, and Akainu's father is also an admiral, and he rarely goes home. It is too dramatic to give Akainu a family setting.

After reading Chapter 38, everything else was fine. However, Long Linglao's matchmaking act of trying to match up Kaido and Ji Hongying made me feel uncomfortable😣, especially since Kaido didn't have a good impression of him yet. It directly reminds me of my parents forcing you to go on a blind date with someone you don't like. Don't apply your judgment standards to me. Just marry if you think it's suitable. Don't disgust me. Severely negative reviews.

Kaido's character has collapsed, this is forced sensationalism.

Regarding the setting of this work, if readers feel that it is not consistent with the original work, screenshots and evidence are welcome. Whether it's the original comics or animation, or content that Oda has acknowledged on SBS, or records on Baidu Encyclopedia, as long as there are screenshots and can be found, I will recognize them! Just words are not convincing, and please don't put the settings of other fanfics on me. Thank you readers in advance for your cooperation and cooperation!

Cut it out, the character's charm has been changed by your stupid brain and it's no longer interesting at all.

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