Under One Person: My Cat Turns Out to Be a Traveling Beast

Xia He gives it to you for the first time, and Yin Wu Lei will appear later in Longhu Mountain, haha

Bone scraper

Little kittens

One person: All the skills are brought to me by kittens

He is an opera singer again. Several books under one person all have the opening scene of an opera, a studio.

Just read the first few chapters, there are big problems with age, location, logic, etc. 1. Although the specific age is not mentioned in the article, it is obvious that the protagonist is more than ten years older than Zhang Chulan, but the protagonist has obviously had more than one or two contacts with the three Taoyuan brothers, which shows that the age difference is not big, or even very close. But in the original work, Zhang Chulan is of the same generation as the three Taoyuan brothers. Even if they are older than Zhang Chulan, they are not much older. You, the author, are at least ten years older. There is obviously something wrong. Why, in the future Luo Tian Dajiao, these three people will all be in their thirties? 2. The protagonist went to the city to meet the three Taoyuan brothers in Tianjin, but in the first two chapters he also met Zhang Chulan's family, which is a serious problem. During this period, Zhang Huaiyi only had the last one or two years left. He wanted to fight with various sects before his death. The original place for the fight was near Tangmen. At this time, Zhang Chulan's family must be in Yungui Sichuan. In the original work, Zhang Chulan also lived in Yungui Sichuan when he was a child. I really don't know how the protagonist's family got there. Could it be that they were flying? Even if the protagonist lives in Yunnan, Guizhou, and Sichuan, how did you meet the three Taoyuan brothers? Hat trick? 3. How could Zhang Huaiyi still see his friends while he was on the run? This would directly expose his whereabouts. Not to mention that other people didn't know, major forces have been looking for Zhang Huaiyi. How could the protagonist's family be so close to Zhang Huaiyi that no one would be monitoring him. The most important thing is that Zhang Huaiyi himself cannot tell anyone his whereabouts. Even if the protagonist's grandfather encounters him by chance, how could he still stay where he is? Others, Zhang Huaiyi, had already run away with his family, and he waited for the protagonist and his family to go see him and have dinner together. . . 4. The main character's family tradition of singing skills is said to be passed down only by the main character's family and Quan Xing Xia Liuqing. This is also an obvious mistake. The author, you wrote that the protagonist's family and Xia Liuqing are the most awesome are quite good, but you two have to inherit it, who will believe it! Masks of the Godhead, or in other words, chariots, are not very common in the original work, but they are not particularly rare either. In the original work, there must be a lot of methods like Northeast Nagada, which is the birthplace, let alone there is no such thing. The author can obviously say that it is a unique method that is different from traditional methods, but no, it has to be mastered by the protagonist's family and Xia Liuqing. Summary: I just read Chapters 4 and 5. There are some problems, which may be explained or changed later, but obviously I don't understand the timeline of the original work or even the relationship between the characters.

Gentlemen, because of recommendation reasons, it is best not to keep books. If you feel something is wrong, you can remind me and I will make corrections, 😘😘😘

Xia He's bone scraper has an innate power, so she can't control her sexual desire. Arranging such a character to get the protagonist's first blood, 6

What scares me the most is this pile of martial arts treasures, all of which are sparse. The awesome part is not written at all. At least he stole the show twice. Look handsome

How should I put it, I feel like he is a semi-torturous master, but something seems wrong, and I feel a little aggrieved.

The feeling of being chased was very unreasonable and wrong. With Ziyun Wings and the ability to fly, in this world where only one person can fly, how can others chase me? Bring enough dry food and find a cliff to hang out. When others finally come, you fly away and they can only stare. You can also learn the art of disguise, adjust your facial bones, change your appearance, and in turn, inflict evil on others.

The technique is too messy. You may have practiced it a few times and then stopped using it. You just practice whatever you want, and you don't have any plan.

I haven't read either book, I just saw that the settings are the same

Bye, all I can say is that there is too much drama.

The main plot of Under One Person should start in 2012. At this time, Zhang Chulan's grandfather had been dead for a long time, and he died when Zhang Chulan was a child. In the novel, Xiao Taoyuan appeared when Zhang Chulan's grandfather died. This is a bit wrong. If I remember correctly, Xiao Taoyuan was before the plot started. Not long after, around the 11th year of his fame, Luo Tian made his first appearance at the Great Jiao, and Xu Xin appeared in the Tang Sect chapter. Before Tang Miaoxing tried the elixir, he appointed Xu Xin as the head of the Tang Sect and changed his name to Tang Xin. Before that, Xu Xin had been in the Tang Tomb and was not allowed to come out. Of course, some of the plot may be wrong because I haven't watched it for a long time, but your timeline is definitely wrong What else can you delete, I don't mean to scold you 😅

The author's cat is not good

The trick of acting like a god is wrong. Generating gloves by yourself is really speechless. Also, the reason why Xia Liuqing is a glove is because he made the magic weapon look like a glove to collect faith. When I touched the ball, I specifically asked the guy who was ready if he was okay...

I looked at a few. I really can't help but want to come over and complain. The name of Hongmeng Body Refining Technique... Is hard to explain in one sentence, so it's better to just call it Body Refining Technique. Also, how come the protagonist who gets the Great Merciful Palm is from this world? Also, I personally feel that there are more techniques from other worlds. Don't always use techniques from this world. After all, your main focus is diversified confrontation.

I always feel like the author didn't understand the temporary worker mechanism, why are all of them temporary workers?

The more I look at this useless protagonist, the more disgusting I feel. He clearly knows what kind of organization Quanxing is. He took Xia He's first blood and let him go without contact for several years. He wanted to practice and then contacted others to practice. Then he let him go back to Quanxing after practicing for half a year. He is really more disgusting than the villain. Even strangers who have been together day and night for half a year should have quite deep feelings. Forget it, let's go.

Chapter 2 made me quit after introducing the exercises. What a 6 author.

Have you read this author before? It's full of flaws and it's all a poisonous tale. Even new authors don't do this. It's outrageous... It's so outrageous.

Those who were attracted by the bone scraper and the title ended up being bad for the cat, and they were all thrown away on the journey, just to obtain the tools of the technique. Persuade to quit

I'm a bit suppressing the protagonist. Go get the twelve talismans for the protagonist.

There are a lot of typos, what the hell?

It's a little bit poisonous. The protagonist has a cat who is similar to a traveling frog at the beginning. Although he can only get the skills. He also has Hongmeng Body Refining Technique and Qi Meridian at the beginning. It sounds so advanced that I thought the protagonist would be invincible later on. However, it turns out that it is of no use later on. Then it is a skill that has always been used by bad people. As a result, the entire Jiuyou Xuantian Magic Skill has also helped the protagonist to get rid of the inner demons. This inner demon is also broken. After a long time of tossing, it was really poisonous, and then there was Xia He, you said I had feelings for her, the protagonist didn't care about her, nor did he help her, you came to whore, and you just took your kidneys instead of your heart, then the classic harem, high school second Zhuang, Chen Duo, Xia He, I don't know if there will be more in the future, and then I saw Chapter 139 where the protagonist was being chased, your mother, you really made me feel sick, I can't stand it anymore, it's the protagonist, his father I can fight Zhang Zhiwei for hundreds of rounds, but the protagonist is still being hunted. Look at the original Zhang Lingyu holding the Heavenly Barrel. Do you think anyone dares to touch it? A big sinus can't kill them. But you told me that the protagonist is being hunted, and then the protagonist is really hunted. Why don't you go abroad directly like Li Muxuan? How can you go abroad to fuck you? And what's even more outrageous is that the protagonist directly kills you. After a few waves, there were more than a hundred people in Quan Xing. There are restrictions on foreigners under one person. There are only more than 10,000 foreigners in total, excluding various sects and some families. How many people are there in Quan Xing? You directly killed a hundred people, Quan Xing asked you to make a circle. In the original work, there were only a few people who went to Wang Ye, and you, a hundred people, couldn't stand it any longer. After looking at the catalog and the old rules, I still followed the plot of the original work. To sum up, what is the uncomfortable point: the protagonist is holding the template background of a cool male protagonist, but if you give me a half-torture protagonist, or a female protagonist, it won't be hard, right?

The time is so chaotic, basically it's all here and there.

I thought the kitten would learn the things he stole in seconds, but it's not fun enough to hang up.

I don't know how to put it, I just look a little confused

The original plot cannot be changed, everything is controlled by others