My Mysterious Tales from the Mountains

Rare and exotic objects are used as dowries, and hundreds of thousands of mountains are used as betrothal gifts. I just want to say that anyone who commits the crime of smuggling precious animals protected by the state shall be sentenced to a fixed-term imprisonment of not less than five years but not more than ten years, and shall also be fined; if the circumstances are particularly serious, he shall be sentenced to a fixed-term imprisonment of not less than ten years or life imprisonment, and his property shall be confiscated. In addition, land is owned by the state and collectively. It is prohibited for any unit or individual to buy or sell land.

Ignore the introduction, ignore the title, and ignore the rebirth setting at the beginning. This novel is really good. It has the qualities of a masterpiece and is suitable for adaptation into an online movie. To be honest, the rebirth setting in the early stage is really unnecessary, and it is a bit exaggerated. Its only function is to tell the protagonist to cherish his fiancée, and it has nothing to do with the main plot. The name is "Mountain Walker", which is very cool. Although it is not very friendly to new authors, if you have writing skills, you can survive the early stage and take off. If you really can't write an introduction, it won't work. It won't attract people and will drive them away.

It is written about modern times but there are some weird things that are a bit hard to understand.

Huang Pizi asks for seal

I was a little confused when I saw the fox getting married. The protagonist has experience as a mountain walker. What kind of ashes and widow's tears were prepared before going up the mountain? In the end, he almost died at the hands of a fox. So why did the murderer survive without any preparation, and nothing happened at all. Why can the fox only detect the protagonist's scent of a living person? Why was the murderer not discovered by the fox? Did the author put too much pressure on the protagonist? I'm afraid that everything will be smooth sailing for the protagonist and there will be no plot to write.

A semi-disabled male protagonist who was out of breath even when picking up the garbage went into the mountains for the first time. He dared to climb a cliff with bare hands without protective equipment... The corners of his mouth turned up at every turn, and he was immediately persuaded to quit.

The front ones are fine. From the time I got to the tomb, it was either written by someone else or by AI. The preface does not match the postscript, and many characters' names appear inexplicably, and they are incoherent. Bye bye

The first step was fine, but I went to the tomb to persuade them to quit. Don't tell me that other people have done nothing in archeology for a lifetime. As soon as you came here, all kinds of ghosts appeared, and you even got involved with the police chief and so on. According to modern people's thinking, as long as any mountain spirits and ghosts dare to show up, they are destroying mountains and destroying temples. What kind of monsters and mountain gods are there? If they dare to harm people, the mountains will be blown up for you. You really treat others as fools.

It actually started off well, and the subject matter was quite interesting. I thought it was a young grass, but it turned out that it started to feed poison after taking the wild ginseng. As a mountain walker, I thought I would walk hundreds of thousands of mountains and explore the wonders of the world, but it turns out that all the good things are in your Zhaojiacun mountains, right? Mountain walking ginseng is written as hard to come by, but it turns out that it is available in your mountains, and it is even rarer. Background In the modern world of science and technology, atheists or people who do not believe in superstition go into the mountains a lot, and it is normal for them to talk about gods and ghosts without any restraint. But when a TV station went to your mountain to film a documentary, you were possessed by a mountain spirit? According to this, many people around the world should have disappeared inexplicably or died in the deep mountains and old forests. The logic is messed up. Forced feeding of poison And it is easy to get lost when a TV station goes into the mountains to shoot. They go into the mountains without hiring a local. After being possessed by the evil spirit, you rely on your paper to escape the danger, and then you realize that you have entered. Deep in the mountains, and then I actually want to find the protagonist by relying on footprints. There are mostly dead leaves and weeds in the mountain forest, and it is rare to find footprints. The puppy is so small, and it can actually follow the puppy's footprints clearly in the mountains. What kind of awesome eyesight is this? I don't know how to connect the plot and force it to yy, right? It makes my scalp numb.

After reading the previous 5 chapters, no wonder I wrote this beginning to call others mentally retarded. Whoever wrote this good book is wrong about rebirth. When I see an important person, my mother, my father, or all kinds of things, I lower my body to be moved and cry. It is written so straightforwardly that it is easy for you to feel yourself except for the author who wrote it yourself. As a reader, I really hate this kind of beginning. You can write it from the side or put it at the back, but if you put it in the front and focus on the description, it is disgusting. , I started reading books like Abnormal Human Lost Chronicles. Unfortunately there are too few. What you wrote above is so touching that it won't impress the readers.