The Survival Game Begins with a Small Canoe

The latest two chapters gave me a headache. Except for single-digit men on board, the rest are all women. I have only heard of this saying on the flower boats that just opened at night. You are not a pirate, you are a madam.

I saw the protagonist being forced out of the game after playing for too long. Then he was kidnapped when he entered the game. Fortunately, he was the protagonist, otherwise he would have been left alone. I couldn't stand this kind of setting and left.

I haven't read it yet, but I'll give the author a few suggestions. I want novels like this author to write less about reality and more about adventure. If you can't write about emotional scenes with women, don't write about them. In addition, it's best not to include younger sisters. This is the most poisonous point. Why? Because there are so few authors who can write about the interaction between sisters, sisters and relatives. Most of them are very poor, so if you can't write about sisters, try not to write about them. Of course it's up to you, master.

The protagonist is so brainless, a loser, and a holy mother!

I thought it was a purely nautical survival novel, but I didn't expect it could return to reality.

For those whose parents live in rural areas, it is usually right not to bring them to the city when they get rich. But if you are very rich, it would be good to buy a big villa and the couple can grow vegetables in the villa. To be honest, the world is no longer safe, and cities are relatively safer than rural areas. .

The writing is quite good, but the main character is a bit like a virgin, and there is no sense of crisis. It feels like you are really playing a game. It feels unstable and makes you uncomfortable to watch.

Scenarios in which salespeople mock customers would have been extremely toxic ten years ago, but they are still dared to be written now.

The protagonist is still in the growth and development period, immature, blue-green in color, bitter in taste, and should not be picked!

The survival game has become a two-world text, which is boring

The main character is a dog licker, and he even pulls out a gun and is having an affair. If we don't kill him, the whole family won't be a serious protagonist.

I hope I don't create a novel that feels like there are multiple heroines, but it turns out there is no heroine

The author has not read novels before. You have not missed any poisonous points.

He is ready to be a stallion again, even the plants will be spared

There are only 100 pictures, but there are 3 women in the character introductions. Forget it, just take a look.

No brain flow, what is the brain? It's superfluous.

Is this a stallion novel? There are so many female characters

I just read 23. It's well written. It's very good. It has flesh and blood, emotions, and plot. It's not pure. It's just a game. That's what it's called. If this novel becomes a manual for a stand-alone game, it's called disgusting. The main line of a novel should be driven by the power of love, hatred, and hatred

The setting of this novel is very novel, and I also like this kind of series. Why add a supporting actress? With the addition of supporting actresses, the taste has changed, because all the novels have been added, and you can basically stick to the protagonist like a silly girl. When I saw the three supporting female characters, I felt that this book was not getting any better. Because if there are too many supporting actresses and leading actresses, it would basically be like giving the lead role to a silly Baitian. If the author didn't add a female supporting character and a heroine, and if it was written in a dark genre, maybe the book would be easy to write, and there would be basically no problem. Because the dark flow is particularly liked by many people. So this book can only say goodbye.

I regret subscribing. Subscribe to chapters and keep copying data to make up the number of words to cheat money

It's okay, you can take a look. It belongs to the category of new wine in old bottles. There's nothing poisonous about it, and the protagonist's IQ is at least online.

Author, why are so many people not continuing to read it and not getting enough points? If you use the word count of attribute water to cheat money, I will also give up reading it.

See Chapter 18. Overall it's pretty good, but Chapter 18 is too poorly written. The monetary system feels broken.

The author's writing is so good. Don't listen to those trolls. Keep at it. Sooner or later, one day you will become a master platinum gold medal.