Survival Game: A Small Wooden Boat from the Start

The latest two chapters gave me a headache. Except for single-digit men on board, the rest are all women. I have only heard of this saying on the flower boats that just opened at night. You are not a pirate, you are a madam.

I saw the protagonist being forced out of the game after playing for too long. Then he was kidnapped when he entered the game. Fortunately, he was the protagonist, otherwise he would have been left alone. I couldn't stand this kind of setting and left.

I haven't read it yet, but I'll give the author a few suggestions. I want novels like this author to write less about reality and more about adventure. If you can't write about emotional scenes with women, don't write about them. In addition, it's best not to include younger sisters. This is the most poisonous point. Why? Because there are so few authors who can write about the interaction between sisters, sisters and relatives. Most of them are very poor, so if you can't write about sisters, try not to write about them. Of course it's up to you, master.

The protagonist is so brainless, a loser, and a holy mother!

I thought it was a purely nautical survival novel, but I didn't expect it could return to reality.

Scenarios in which salespeople mock customers would have been extremely toxic ten years ago, but they are still dared to be written now.

The protagonist is still in the growth and development period, immature, blue-green in color, bitter in taste, and should not be picked!

The writing is quite good, but the main character is a bit like a virgin, and there is no sense of crisis. It feels like you are really playing a game. It feels unstable and makes you uncomfortable to watch.

For those whose parents live in rural areas, it is usually right not to bring them to the city when they get rich. But if you are very rich, it would be good to buy a big villa and the couple can grow vegetables in the villa. To be honest, the world is no longer safe, and cities are relatively safer than rural areas. .

The main character is a dog licker, and he even pulls out a gun and is having an affair. If we don't kill him, the whole family won't be a serious protagonist.