Isn't It? the Tiger of the Crime Squad Is My Uncle!

It's a common problem for novice authors when writing fan fiction. The point of view is basically the protagonist of the original work. I hope this can be changed. No one likes to "revisit" classics. What readers want to read is the perspective of the protagonist you wrote.

Pig's Foot is the son of Cao's sister, shouldn't it be the relationship between nephew and uncle? How come you have become uncle and nephew?

Cindy

If you copy the plot, please change it. Don't copy it exactly. If you really don't know how to do it, you can look at how other heavenly beings can intervene in the plot and change it. Don't copy it exactly. If you want to write that the protagonist is involved, delete some plot points. For example, the plot you write must only happen if the protagonist is present and sees it, but don't write if the protagonist is not present. This way you can have a sense of participation. You have such a strong sense of stripping. Just like Shen Lang and the protagonist of the original plot are intertwined with each other, it is like a single-lead scene has become a group scene.

I'm going to die laughing. Tie Zhendong was beaten while hanging, and then slashed several times by Xiaosha and his younger brother. His attributes are basically far beyond ordinary people. You can see for yourself what it says.

A trainee police officer is directly promoted to a senior inspector. To become an inspector in Hong Kong, you need to pass the examination and attend the Police Academy for further studies. Only then can you become a trainee inspector.

If you are a loser, you might as well watch a movie by yourself and watch the next door tell you about the plot of the movie.

If you have more than 5 female friends, you are basically useless unless you are Zhu Tianwen

I'm just curious. You graduated from the University of Hong Kong with an undergraduate degree and are still studying for a master's degree. Why are you a trainee police officer?

Copy the original work? You continue. I withdrew.

This novel was true at the beginning. I felt pretty good. But it became more and more watery. I was like a water king. I just started a story or a movie and it ended in four or five chapters. Damn it, the second story didn't end in ten or twenty chapters.

Aren't these three or two great?

Zhou Xingxing

The Lord of Yihua Palace

What a pity... It turned out to be a stallion, ugh

The third time he went undercover in the school, he resorted to any means to get promoted. Why not call someone to ambush him first? All the dead staff members should be counted on the protagonist. As a police officer, the death of the staff members can be avoided if they have bad views.

What is the police rank of the protagonist? In the previous chapter, he was said to be a trainee police officer, but after two chapters he will become a senior inspector. I bet, this promotion is too fast.

There's no need to read anymore, another ridiculously handsome protagonist slips away.

The logic of this book is flawed. It says at the beginning that the protagonist has several master's degrees, and later states that the protagonist does not know enough to tutor Zhou Xingxing. He Min somehow knows that the protagonist is an undercover agent. . . It's simply an insult to the reader's intelligence.

If the plot of the movie is copied without changing the words, why read the book? Isn't it great to watch a movie? No future, go to the factory and drive screws

It started out okay, the system appeared, and then it became a mess of answers.

Exactly the same as the movie, just changed the name

When there is a scene with the protagonist, others will definitely say that the protagonist is handsome.

What are you writing about? It's not a question of whether it's good or not! The basic logic is wrong! Master's degree teaches Zhou Xingxing not enough knowledge! TM is still working as a teacher undercover? The man surnamed Wang told the uncle about the arms. Why didn't he pursue this line if he had this excuse? Still following the plot! Brother, you also have to look at the timing when picking up girls. Isn't it sudden that the heroine suddenly appears? What are you doing out so early? Have you never seen a woman? You come here without any relationship foundation, you just want to have sex, what kind of relationship is there! Just write that the main character is the person who takes the refined form of Teddy. The character description is not good enough, the character's personality is not highlighted, and the plot is mediocre!

Meiko