American Comics: Law of Power

This book should be regarded as a practice work by the author. It can be said that each section is good when viewed individually, but it still feels bad if the previous and later elements are connected. The biggest point is that the author is very keen to describe how strong the protagonist is in various close-quarter gunfights as a mercenary in his previous life, how knowledgeable he is about firearms, and how clear his thoughts on break-in tactics are. I am not saying that the writing is not good. On the contrary, in many other novels I have read that describe modern gunfights, none of them are as well written by the author, but this leads to two contradictions. The first is that the protagonist, as a mercenary, is not in line with the setting of intelligence collection and other aspects other than combat. The mercenary with the goal of completing the task actually collects intelligence step by step during the task. It stands to reason that before the start of the task, as many people and as many firepower building internal terrain distribution maps should be prepared and completed. And the preparation of firearms is also very poor. I already have an invisibility ring. I don't even go to a gun shop or the police station to import modern firearms, even if they are in the hands of illegal elements. The most important thing is that the invisible mercenary in stealth state was actually discovered by the Prowler? It really feels like it's forcing the plot forward, which is weird. The second is that it seriously deviates from the theme. After the gun battle begins, the plot collapses. It can be seen that the author was inspired to write down at that time. However, in a world with super powers, the protagonist's light cannon and invisibility actually achieve this effect, and even give readers a sense of escape from the protagonist at the risk of his life. The so-called sense of escape is the feeling that the protagonist does not cherish his own life and knows that he will not die or that he will have another life after death. No matter how the author describes the protagonist's calm psychology and ideological activities to rationalize his behavior, the protagonist's description in the plot still forms a sense of separation from the previous and subsequent plots. This is a writing problem and cannot be blamed on the author. Rome was not built in a day, and the author's writing style also needs to be practiced slowly. Apart from the above, there are actually no big problems. As the author's first practice book, it is actually very well written. At least the plot of each section is well written, and the rest are just minor problems. For example, the protagonist is very law-abiding as a mercenary. The protagonist is a legal "dead person" who will not be suspected and has a light cannon to make him invisible. Why not just rob the rich, give to the poor and steal gold, or follow the description of the introduction to "do whatever you want" and directly steal tons of gold stored in a big bank's vault to gain super super powers? All I can say is that the title introduction and actual content are subject to the author's ideas. And why should I hide my identity? Gwen obviously knows that Peter is Dr. Lizard in Gwen's Spider-Verse. She can blame the reason for resurrection and memory loss on the lizard genetic superpower. It's very confusing for two people who know each other's identities to hide each other's identities. There are many small problems like this, which are the kind of details that do not affect reading but will make readers confused if the author does not explain them in time. Generally speaking, the author has written this book very well, and there is absolutely no problem in reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard, improve his writing skills, and achieve better and better results.

I kindly ask you to help me catch up in the past two days. If possible, please try to read the chapter to the end. These two days are my last chance to resurrect. I didn't expect the fandom area to be so busy... Thank you all.

It's 2023. Can you please stop creating the character of a former mercenary killer who traveled through time? Can't the system send you skills? You'll be poisoned to death.

Watching the universe is not to my liking. I don't like that Little Black Spider and Gwen are a couple. Also after watching this, my opinion of Gwen plummeted, she went to cause trouble, ignored the mission and allowed the villain to become stronger just to meet the Black Spider. In it, Gwen also lived with Punk Spider, changed from ballet shoes to sneakers, and her sweater and toothbrush were still placed in Punk Spider's home. If you go by the comic book style, I guess they have all been pulled out. After all, the main character Spider-Man can also be called the king of guns. It is also too heroic and emphasizes rebellion. 2099 The spider was too heavily burdened by fate and became a dog of fate. Black Spider wanted to break fate, but the goal method was too childish.

I find this male protagonist's behavior really a bit jarring. On the one hand, I mind that I'm not Peter, and on the other hand, I'm back and forth with Gwen. Can you please stop being such a quarrel? I can understand that you were a mercenary in your previous life, but you have traveled through this time and space for more than half a year, so it's time to accept this relationship, right? And Diane, the supporting actress, takes the male protagonist completely for fun, but is she still thinking about breaking up the family? If nothing else, what family can be as powerful as Stark? If you really want to give this female supporting role some suggestions and more practical help, don't just give her a mission. Also, the setting of the protagonist Batman is quite good, but unfortunately it becomes less and less interesting later on. The speech section is really full, but what about the follow-up? I really didn't expect to use my identity as Batman to work as a thug for a family force. Isn't it better to go it alone, use the name of Batman to build my own reputation, and use Stark technology to manufacture bat equipment? Of course, these words of mine are not directed at the author, I just simply put forward my own opinions. After all, I also like the master, and the heroine Gwen. I hope that you can pay more attention to the character image, otherwise I will feel a little embarrassed. It is a bit embarrassing for a Batman with a mercenary past life to work as a thug for a small gangster family😅

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In the introduction, I thought I was a native of the motherland. When I entered, I saw the starlight.

This protagonist's combat power is so rubbish. It took hundreds of millions of years to fight even a small magic eye. It's rubbish. In the Marvel universe, Dr. Lizard's power is about 90 tons. Such a being can beat humans like ants. But you can beat an ordinary person in half a day. It's outrageous. You really think mutants are that weak.

No, can you increase your mental age as a mercenary? It's so embarrassing. Be mature and don't be surprised all the time. Really. . . . Too abstract. . . Being a mercenary still has the same mentality as a child. I don't understand what the author thinks. Can you share your thoughts?

Finally, there was a heroine who was Gwen, but the author suppressed the protagonist's combat power, and it was not fun to fight even a small elite monster, so she slipped away 🙏

Why is the protagonist so arrogant... Even someone with a name can be evenly matched with him and still have a slight advantage.

The pressure in the battle is too harsh. Only the addition of Lizard Serum and No. 5 Compound can reach the level of Captain America? A random black cat came out and crushed you? Can't you use some powerful skills to take off? I found that the author is very confident in your fighting description. Several times, the protagonist is planning to get into Marvel just by relying on his fighting skills.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 12. The protagonist works so hard for a girl he just met and doesn't get much reward. I never say anything about people, but this time I really feel that the protagonist is just being a licker.

Why do I feel like it's like a trumpet?

After reading more than 20 chapters, in addition to the fact that the protagonist is a mutant lizard man, the system first drew the compound No. 5 Potion from the black-robed pickets. I only saw the protagonist using a gun to kill indiscriminately, and was in a mess. I didn't see the protagonist having any superpowers. Moreover, the plot was too tight, and he kept killing and killing right after he was resurrected. It's absolutely amazing!

The Kingpin is just for the plot, it really has a few tons, and that's a fraction of Spider-Man's. It's completely like Spidey is kind, or like Batman, he's funny and doesn't kill.

Although this book has some flaws up to Chapter 8, it is still quite attractive. As a result, in Chapter 9, the starlight ability is fused with the lizard serum, and the side effects are intensified, and the transformation becomes completely uncontrollable. What do you think of this book? You are giving people away by writing like this. Starting from Chapter 9, there are fewer chapter reviews. I guess a lot of people have ignored it. No wonder this data is only 390,000 words.

What are you writing about? How many chapters have I read? Does it have anything to do with the title? Looking at the font layout gave me a headache. At first, a stranger asked the protagonist to protect her, and the protagonist actually agreed. Where is the deposit? The protagonist is not low-key at all. I think later on the protagonist is still wondering why the superheroes meet one by one. How do you think they meet? This twist is not flattering at all, and creates a bad image of the female supporting role. Of course, it may also be the heroine, which is a common problem for novices.

The writing is beautiful, but there is a contradiction that was not written out. George Stacey is okay, but Gwen Spider also has Peter Spider's no-kill rule, so the conflicts between the two of them are not written out. Furthermore, the descriptions in many chapters of the introduction are wrong. What the protagonist does is not to "help them shoulder their responsibilities and burdens" but to "clear their way forward". For example, if there is evidence but cannot be tried through normal judicial procedures, the protagonist can directly kill Jin Bin. The protagonist can directly kill the government officials who force Spider-Woman to use their real identities and family members to threaten her. To put it simply, the main role of the protagonist is to directly eliminate those who cannot be tried through normal judicial procedures. However, there is one sentence that I hope to keep in mind. Nothing can be taken away, only karma remains with you.

The introduction does not match the actual content at all. The protagonist has never made a few successful actions. He is always blocked and has accidents everywhere, and his strength is not good enough. How does this relate to "I can do whatever I want" in the introduction?

When will the author return? ? ?